Observe the Mountain!

It's been a few days since I've been reading this book, and after much thought, I still feel like I should write down my feelings about reading it. In the beginning, I read this book mainly because of the author. I read a few chapters. Although it was not my main genre, fortunately the characters were well developed, so I continued reading. After reading a few more chapters, I vaguely felt that time passed too fast, and I felt a little repelled - I still like to read longevity novels, but the depression of reality disturbed my thoughts. I have noticed the passage of time, but I always feel that nothing is left. Therefore, I also hate the long span. When I wanted to give up, I suddenly saw Ye Shan. This is a genius in the traditional sense. The emotional intelligence is not high, but he has his own principles; he moves forward courageously and never leaves a way out for himself. I like this image very much because he looks young. I read longevity essays because they contain all kinds of worldly expressions. No matter how you write them, they all end up being group portraits. Through this connection, I will always see myself in a certain period of time, maybe it is the established past, maybe it is the imagined future. As for now? That is an immortal product that can only be encountered but cannot be sought. The main characters in this book have relatively heavy characterizations, while the supporting characters are more casual and somewhat stereotyped. But there are sacrifices and sacrifices. Whether it is because of the author's writing style or the rhythm, he did not give too much ink to the supporting characters. This combination vaguely depicts a corner of human nature. This is a plus point, it has the shadow of immortality. Words are the carrier of novels and the link between people and books. People value connection, at least for me now. Due to the influence I have now, Hayama is the first character that I can truly call an anchor since I read this book. Regarding the characters in the book, I can honestly say that I like Hayama the most right now. Admittedly, Ye Shan means more to me than reality, which may lead to my evaluation being inflated. But it is undeniable that apart from the fantasy, the portrayals of Hayama and other characters in the book are based on human nature, with corresponding personalities, and the social relationships are both tender and sinister. It is not the best, but it can be seen. There is also a problem. As mentioned above, the time span is too large, resulting in relatively fewer descriptions of characters. It is easier to see the shadow of the template in the characters written with just a few strokes. To have a better sense of immersion, you need the blessing of writing power. The author has this, but it cannot be said to be profound. Objectively speaking, the character creation is good, but in other aspects, the story is not exciting enough. The protagonist is more of a novelty. As for other characters, there is no special communication channel, so it is easier to stay on the sidelines, just like other stories. The longevity article has a normal time span, but it still vaguely feels like it spans too fast. However, the author has mentioned this point in the introduction, and it can be regarded as having his own audience. If you like longevity essays, you can take a look. (Well, I am still at the end of adolescence and have already passed it, but sometimes I am still affected by it, and then become sentimental, and my evaluation is more perceptual. I just try my best to be objective. In addition, evaluation is one aspect, and you can still look at the specific feelings before talking about it.)

It's been 20 years since I read the first fantasy book. First time posting. I hope the author can read it. This book touches me very much. I also hope that the author can create better plots in the future. Thanks!

I really like the male protagonist and the story written by the author. He tells it so eloquently that he unknowingly brings people into the story. Each person's image is very three-dimensional and not black and white. It's great! Xu Ran is like a sweeping monk, with a fresh writing style, no brainless pornographic jokes, and a youthful spirit of joyful grudges, come on👏

I have read a lot of articles about cultivating immortals. This is the most heart-warming story about cultivating immortals. Those who cultivate immortals must first be human beings, and only those who know how to be human can become immortals. If there is no humanity left, the immortal will become a demon. The male protagonist has been stumbling all the way to become an immortal, and his only golden finger is immortality. Others have to forget their emotions when cultivating immortality, so he has to fall in love and use emotions to enter the Tao. Affected by his physique, the progress of cultivating immortals is extremely difficult. It is almost the opposite of other articles about cultivating immortals. Every upgrade he makes gives people a very comfortable feeling. The supporting characters are also designed with distinctive personalities, so vivid and full of genius that they could be the protagonists of a new story just by themselves. The plot of the story develops slowly. Slower is better, and the stew tastes better.

I was so amazed that I couldn't put it down and couldn't help laughing.

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I read some comments, which made me suspect that there is something wrong with my aesthetics. Is this thing good-looking? Characters, dialogue, emotions, story, writing style, is there one online?

This issue should be the worst issue of Xianxia in recent times, what a ghost book.

The most difficult thing to write about immortality is the ever-changing world, so it must be plain and daily, but not indifferent. The more impermanent the world is, the more tears we need to shed. Although this article has not been written much yet, the peaceful and soothing temperament from the front is already there. Most of those who can grasp the temperament in longevity novels are not bad, and the grasp of character changes is also very good. Although I haven't written much yet, it seems that the level has been shown so far. Lovers of longevity literature can give it a try

Where is this so-called True Immortality Stream? There are many starting points for a large time span, whether it is purely about getting something or just trying to get it while fighting, what is the difference between this book and this gimmick?

I have read the latest chapter, please tell me your feelings after reading it. Because the protagonist ate the Immortality Fruit, he can live forever as long as he does not die. Therefore, the protagonist is like a passerby, and the people or things he encounters are the scenery along the way. The definition of the protagonist is not a traditional protagonist who wants to change the world, so the novel has almost no conspiracy related to the protagonist, and there is no plot in which the protagonist and the supporting character compete with each other (I feel that this effectively avoids the situation where the reader feels that the protagonist or the supporting character has been outwitted). When reading, it feels like a plain and simple story (not a bland novel), and the writing style is relatively fresh. It has the appearance of fairy grass. Those who like Golden Jasmine's "I Didn't Want to Become an Immortal" will also like this one. I feel like there is no heroine at the moment.

In the new chapter, the protagonist finally transforms into a dragon. As we all know, the protagonist Xu Ran has long been an immortal person who is "just in appearance". Most of the protagonists seek immortality with strong power. Although Xu Ran obtained the immortality fruit first, he lacks the power to protect himself. What's worse is that in a world where great power belongs to himself, the protagonist's talent in strength cultivation is very low, and his combat power is average at the same level. Fortunately, he is not completely without talent. The protagonist's artistic conception and scientific research talents are amazing, and he has been protected by the sect and can practice safely. Originally, because the main character's cultivation relied on a long period of accumulation, it felt difficult for Xu Ran to dominate among his peers, which was a pity. Until the emergence of the Yin Dao Ji, it gave the protagonist a first-mover advantage, which was equivalent to suspending the practice of others. However, I still felt that it was not satisfying enough and thought that the climax would have to wait until the end of the long Yin Dao Ji to become a blockbuster. As a result, the immortality setting of the protagonist in the new chapter has given rise to a powerful power plug-in: The Long River of Tao (Field! Expand!). Since the Nascent Soul, the protagonist has become a peerless genius, killing five people of the same level in an instant. It's cool! What a stroke of genius! It seems that the Hidden Dao Ji is no longer a long night 🤓

There is a charge for putting it on the shelves? 🙂

It doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel about cultivating immortals, it feels like I'm watching a family drama…

It feels like people in this world of cultivating immortals are very upset.

After reading 7 chapters, I can only say that the author has made up for my regret that I haven't tried dog history myself yet.

It's tasteless to eat, it's not a pity to throw it away

When I saw that the introduction said it was Shin Eternal Life, I immediately added it to my bookshelf. I read a few chapters in the past two days and I felt it was okay. I hope it is indeed True Eternal Life. The Chang Sheng Ryu I read before always changed and turned into ordinary fantasy.

Where is the core story of the novel?

It is suggested that the author should describe less battle scenes. If only, it would be enough to just briefly mention them. Because the battle scenes you described are too hip-reaching. It's a bit like children playing house.

It feels so good. When everyone came back, they saw that there was an extra Taoist in the sect, and it was Xu Ran who was at the end of the crane. It was so cool.

It feels like eating rice soaked in plain water. The sentences need to be more concise.

The hard work of waiting

The writing is a bit immature, which is a pity

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Come on, brother who writes novels