The Invincible Female Wraith Is a Bit of a Lovestruck Fool

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Awesome bro, I don't even dare to dub this latest chapter.

Except for the appearance of the female ghost and the amorous encounter at the beginning, there is nothing too cliché. I would say that the description of the supporting characters around the protagonist is too market-oriented. Nowadays, people read books instead of archeology, so it may be difficult to accept this. Emmmm, the supporting characters are authentic, but their words are too rough, and the title of the book can actually be changed? Let the editor test the waters and recommend the book. If the content is of good quality and the data will not be bad, it is more important to change the book title to a simple and clear title and an introduction containing an outline of the content.

It's well written, but I'm just curious. Did you, the author, sell the hook for review?

I should have thought of it a long time ago. When I saw this cooked meat literature, I should have known who the author was.

I have a few questions about this book. Is it well written? In fact, judging from the content in the early and middle stages, including fighting and daily joy, it is good. It is a little bit poisonous, but I can still read it without thinking. But why do I say early and middle stages? Because I chased Tianshi at two o'clock in the morning. My brain was groggy, and suddenly I felt something was wrong, and I couldn't read it at all. The first one, two aunts, is a plot that everyone loves to hear and watch, and the majority of people like to watch it. However, the homogeneity is too serious. There is no problem if two are combined into one, and it does not affect the plot. It is too facial, and it has to be for the chu nuv complex. Later, a setting was specially made that the two have not slept with each other. To be honest, you are already an aunt, so you can still be like a girl, right? You expect the witch of the Hehuan Sect to be devoted to you and keep you safe, right? Second, in the mid-term, a main line is to clean up the place where demons are raised. They are all very difficult to fight, and they all kill the protagonist. I don't know how I can survive if it is replaced by someone else to subjugate and eliminate demons. This is one, and the second is that you, the Heavenly Master, use so many magical weapons to hit people, and you have to fight hard. When you subjugate demons and eliminate demons, why is it useless? You are all counting on someone to save you, right? The third, still the same sentence, after opening the gong, most readers do not like the Crystal Palace part, but they hate the facial makeup characters too much. Two aunts can be combined into one. I won't talk about it. I don't know what new beauty god is coming out. What role does Tao have? Its role completely overlaps with that of a female ghost. It is not as good as a female ghost. You might as well write a simple and cute little maid, naive and ignorant. After being purified by the ancestor, she turns into a little girl. Like a little pet at any time, she turns into a pendant and wears it on her body. Who wouldn't like to see it? There is no conflict with the current character. The fourth one, the protagonist's golden finger, has no idea what it is used for. What is it for? Pure authors give whatever props they want, and write whatever they want. We accept invincible articles, cool articles, but I didn't mention a bunch of top-level magic weapons before. I took out a bunch of them when I was done and the Celestial Master Conference. I don't quite understand it The fifth one is the same sentence just now. First of all, the character is broken. When fighting ghosts, I don't fight hard and don't burn my soul. After the Celestial Master Conference is over, when I fight my future father-in-law, I just go to death. The fight is completely different from the protagonist's previous character design, and the storyline falls apart. He can write that he stands up for the common people and makes a big fuss; he can write that he fights the small boss first, and finally escapes from the big boss at level 100; You can write that the protagonist cannot defeat them, and then the master and his uncle take action, and the two brothers together take over the entire Celestial Master Alliance. You can write that the protagonist is about to die, and the heroine senses it and appears in seconds. There were so many things to write about, so many successful routes, but he chose the worst route. To be honest, to borrow the words of other book friends, if you keep fighting for the heroine's Gundam, or if you just slay demons and demons all the way, this book will go all the way. You can understand the Celestial Master Conference this way. When fighting monsters, you are going to die. If you don't hold all the magic weapons, the protagonist will be in a life-or-death situation. Behind him was a bunch of top-notch magic weapons that I didn't know where they came from. He chose the full-level boss from the human race, just to win a name for his master? And he was also his future father-in-law, and he completely ignored his little girlfriend The combat power collapsed, the plot collapsed, the golden finger collapsed, the protagonist's personality collapsed, and the female characters were seriously homogenized. By about 140 chapters, there was no need to read anymore. Looking forward, it was still passable. I really chased the book until the early morning, and it was really uncomfortable

Speechless. Why are you still talking about these two junior brothers? No, you can look back. The author said that he is a fan of Meifen. Later, these two people worked honestly and didn't say anything. What? Going back to the day when the author wrote about these two people, did he kill him?

This is not a criticism, just a personal feeling. If the heroine's name is too vulgar, it may reduce the reader's desire to get involved Just like "Ask the Red World", Cheng Cheng is called Cheng Cheng instead of "Cuihua", and Nangong in "The Law of Yuanshi" is called Nangong instead of "Baicai" when he appears. It is enough for the author to give the heroine a very vulgar real name out of some bad taste. It's weird. If the heroine's name is like this, it's really a disaster Just like this book, the plot and details are really good, but at first I saw the character card "Song Meiqin", which is a bit boring, and "Zhao Qiaoer", uh, a bit like the name of the female supporting character (no offense, just personal opinion), I almost crossed it out directly, but the first heroine is "Gu Qingwan" This relatively beautiful name barely offsets this discomfort. emmm, to be honest, in terms of details, realism and plot, this book is really good, so I am willing to spend some time and hope that my suggestions will be helpful to the author

After reading the comments section, it turns out I'm not the only one who thought that after finishing this book