My Whole Family Met on Tieba

After reading a circle of comments, it is not unreasonable for the author to be scolded. The book's title and introduction have attracted a group of readers, but the core content is about rebirth and entrepreneurship with pretense, which completely deviates from readers' expectations and makes readers with high expectations feel like they have been deceived. This method may gain some exposure, but it also makes the audience attracted by this book less accurate, which is why the comment area is like this.

Why are you still dragging your p high school classmate... Who is the high school gouba looking for a sense of presence in the orphans when he has nothing to do? He is really convinced, or is he a member of the same class looking for a sense of presence, and no longer surfs the Internet? No more traveling? No more arcade games? Aren't you going to visit the university town? Don't you want to play with your classmates? Don't play basketball? Don't you play board games? At that time, Yu-Gi-Oh! Was very popular, table tennis, basketball and football, there was always someone to play with. As a result, I ran to the orphans to look for presence, and kept pulling. I didn't say anything when you pulled before, but you are still pulling. What kind of fairy high school did my brother belong to? This kind of fairy class... I can't imagine the learning atmosphere there 🙂

It was okay at the beginning, but then it got weird for no reason. Especially from starting a business to going to college, I felt like it was just the opposite of Jiang Qin and Feng Nanshu. The emotional scenes were very blunt and inexplicably touching. Moreover, the identity of the male and female protagonists made me feel like Liu Xing and Xia Xue were in love.

I am an ex-Navy soldier, and I belong to SBZA. I was offered a lot of money for this book, but I didn't take it. I just came to join in the fun. The main reason is that the money was not enough. Although it was a few cents more than other books, the money was still not enough to make me betray my conscience.

I won't talk about the content. After reading 4 chapters, it's very ordinary, and the character setting is very boring and cliche! All kinds of logic don't make sense! The title of the book is perfect, everything else is close💩

It starts well, but the rest is so-so or even cliche. The post bar only exists in the title of the book I don't want to read it until I reach Chapter 22 (reasonable suspicion is that I bought it at the beginning, or it's a gimmick.)

1: It seems like it was written by two people. The part written before the start of school was pretty good, but the traces of imitation after the start of school were too heavy. 2: It is about reorganizing a family, and the existence of "parents" basically disappears in the future. It is more like finding a reason to skip the first pot of gold and directly use this reason to get the start-up capital. 3: It's okay to imitate writing, but later it completely loses its own thing and becomes devoid of the author's personal style, completely like an assembly line product. Suggestion 1: After writing to this level, the emotional scene is just like that. You can continue writing, but the setting of the heroine is too Feng Nanshu. Don't use that kind of development for the subsequent life experience. It is better to be simpler, just a simple orphan. After the death of his parents, he is taken care of by relatives. All expenses are paid by the trust left before. 2: Since it is a single heroine, don't write about those rotten peach blossoms. One by one, you come up to lick it, and one by one you reject it. Since there are not multiple heroines, don't write about these flowers and plants. 3: The role of "parents" is brought up. According to the previous writing method, there should be two emotional lines in this book, the protagonist and the heroine, and the "parents" of this contract. Of course, the perspective must be unfolded from the perspective of the protagonist. Instead of writing that line alone. 4: As for the career line, it seems that there are currently three lines, board games (milk tea), school network (e-commerce), and housekeeping (smart home). Now it seems that I am not sure. If you write a, you will lose b, and if you write b, you will lose c. The suggestion is to streamline it, first do a to drive bc, and finally integrate operations. The results are pretty good so far, but there are quite a lot of feedback on these issues in the comment area. If the data is not solved, there is a high probability that the data will be cut again. Of course, if it is indeed a studio, just pretend that I didn't say anything.

It's either garbage or a big bang. It seems like a god at the moment.

I feel that there is indeed a probability that it is the beginning of the purchase from Legend. Otherwise, the contrast would not be so big. Does anyone know about this?

The beginning is very interesting. This kind of plot where a family is immediately formed after a casual chat on a post forum, and then "forced" to live together is very fresh and interesting. A bit like a sitcom? What I am vaguely looking forward to while reading is that the protagonist's mature, stable and young soul will be reborn, and these three family members, each with their own difficulties and shortcomings, will support and help each other, grow together, and finally heal the protagonist's regrets - such a story. During this period, you can insert a short story about each family member. The more I read, the more disappointed I became. It has become a cliche old story about Long Aotian being reborn in the city and becoming a business tycoon. Eh.