Demonic Cultivator

The old thing is back again. It is produced by Batman. It must be a high-quality product. It continues the consistent writing style of human feelings and sophistication. The upgraded writing is very solid and the basic skills are very strong. How can I put it, judging from the amount of reading I have done as an editor for so many years, this is really a very talented author. , I have never doubted his strength, but I am still worried about whether this book can be completed normally. Before starting the book, Bai Tang told me that this book must be well written. I maintain a wait-and-see attitude, hoping that in this book Bai Tang can really write a new breakthrough and become a god!

The author said that he specially arranged a mortgage loan for himself in order not to be imprisoned. Let's see if the mortgage loan lasted for the author.

If the pavement is set well, it cannot be rounded or the subsequent settings are not good settings. The Book of Heaven pointed out earlier that you can get the Six Ding Divine Fire here without risk, and the subplot should be over quickly. The old descriptions of the magic of cultivation have no sense at all, and the strength of cultivation is just a foil. Did Jin Yong write about how exquisite Qiao Feng's cultivation was? The current failings include that the fights are all about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger for instant kills, with no interaction. Tianshu has been taking risk-free opportunities, which makes the plot unattractive. The only highlight of the plot of Liuding Shenhuo is Yang Xun's inner demons. I am the sole author of this book, and after reading it again, I clearly feel that your writing power is far greater in writing about suffering than in writing about success, so you should use your strengths to write about a protagonist who endures hardships and is also interesting enough.

If you stop updating for more than three days, I will use the funds to update a few chapters of quizzes with prizes this month.

Issue an edict to punish yourself and open a trumpet. I am convinced by you. I have at least followed every one of your books. As a result, you have been a eunuch all the way from Wanfa to here. I am really speechless. I have believed you three times. You can't write straight words, so I can stop thinking.

So he is just the silent eunuch as always? It's so notorious that no one will dare to read your book in the future.

Author, your novel is very interesting, but the weather has been cold recently and the temperature has dropped significantly. You should pay more attention to updating and don't worry about your health.

There are many references to other works, and I found that the author follows the hot trends and then writes them, which lacks some new ideas. I feel that you should not be called Batman, but Wen Chao Gong.

Everyday guides are posted The editor has nothing to say to you You just want to write a grand narrative, but you don't have a good grasp of the scale, and you have already published several books In a hurry to set up a grand scene. I feel like you are the kind of person who loves to add and wants to sew everything in. I don't know how to subtract, the balance of the main story, the completeness of the plot , and the response of the setting are also very important. 🙂

I only watch the female ones, but not the male ones.