The Mysterious Mirror: Starting Out as a Talent in the Demon Sect

The three positive and two angles are run together, holding yin to cross yang, and controlling the five trees. As soon as our ancestor Ye Sheng became a Taoist, Tianxia boy was afraid that he would be frightened and run away. He would be frightened to tears by the supreme wisdom of Donghua Immortal Lord. Summary: The wishing tree is still too wheelchair-friendly!

When I first saw the title of this book, I was immediately interested. After all, it contains two cutting-edge masterpieces with hundreds of thousands of subscriptions. I am watching both "Gou Zai Chu Sheng Demon Sect Becomes a Talent" and "Xuan Jian Xian Clan". Combined with the turmoil a while ago, I really smiled knowingly when I saw this. 🤭 Then the introduction involves Wu Yong's style of "sending friends off" of level 8 Gu Immortal Wu Yong in The Insect Chronicles, which is barely out of the ordinary, and belongs to the best of hundreds of poetry anthologies. The plot and characterization of Xuanjian are better than those of Best Friends. The complexity and richness of the system of cultivating immortals and the world view are as complex and rich as those of Lord of Mysteries.

The author is very good at everything he writes, but he loves to argue. For example, in the scene where you and Yuan Tuan exchanged blessings, the logic of the protagonist's behavior was extremely unreasonable. I see that when you were arguing with other book friends, you still acted like you had written nothing wrong. If you write a work like Xuanjianliu, which is full of pitfalls and hooks, and you still have this attitude (meaning that you do not accept reasonable advice from readers), you will have big logical problems sooner or later.

First of all, when the male protagonist came out of the lake, it was Xuan Shu who pulled him and the protagonist kept taking advantage of the situation. When he was in Zi Mansion, Xuan Xu even explained Taoism to him thoughtfully. After the protagonist becomes enlightened, he comes to the lake and opens his mouth to tell you that the demon will take you to make peace with Lu Jiangxian. Xuan Xu is a respectable cultivator who values ​​face most. He is not afraid of death, but he cares about the identity of the palace master, his feelings for Li Jiangqun and his hatred for Du Qing. The male protagonist, as a lowly cultivator who took advantage of the situation to become a Taoist, actually opened his mouth to insult him. To be honest, it made me sick to watch. What you do is not important but your face is.

In fact, there are many things that can be written in the brainstorming in the comment area tonight, I will take the liberty to summarize 1. The perspectives of lower practitioners, fellow practitioners, and upper practitioners, including (1) the dialogue between Zifu, (2) the changes and history of Zifu's guidance to the descendants of Jimu (3) the dialogue between Zhenjun (4) the invitation of Zhenjun Tongxuan Teaching Tianxia, similar to the scene in Journey to the West where the Bodhisattva in the West asks the Tathagata To be added 2. The reactions of the Li family, Wu Gui, and Xuan Xu 3. Taoism, (1) The protagonist's own world (2) Fellow practitioners discussing Taoism or elders instructing younger ones to tell historical stories To be added 4. Establishing a sect 5. Preaching at the Jindan Dharma Conference 6. The personnel arrangements of Li Chijing and the protagonist's brother's bloodline, are they one and the same? 7. Mu Deban's association with Phosphorus Immortal, whether Yuanxiu is used as an experiment and Yuanxiu's enlightenment issue, is it unreasonable for him to seek success 8. Treasure Manual 9. Marriage and child issues (1) Not getting married (2) How does Ning Wan treat it (3) Bei Yao's combination of interests Is there anything else to post in the comment area, I will talk about what I saw in this chapter, and there are also some personal things of mine, please bear with me, I am just discussing it at the moment 😫

My writing ability is limited, so I listened to readers' suggestions and made some changes. Readers who have made comments and found that they have been changed should know this. I responded to some suggestions but did not change them, and there were two disputes among them, Bomu and Zhu Shu The Bomu part was actually something I had a premonition about, and it was definitely controversial. If I didn't change it, it was because the outline was not easy to change. At that time, the original work of Wusheng Xixiang had not been written yet The second reason was because the problem was not serious. Strictly speaking, the two hundred years of Wusheng Xixiang were just like a background board. No matter from the original plot or logic, it would not be the protagonist. Third, the Li family in the original work also acquired a lot of magic skills on their own. I think that after the protagonist leaves the Qingchi Sect, there should be other channels for obtaining magic skills, and he also has his own small opportunities. Even the original plot of this opportunity is based on the plot of the original work. Derived from Dinghe's original characters, we strive to minimize the controversy The second one is Yuan Tuan's Zhushu. According to the deduction of my outline, the wishing tree's wishing technique is not easy to come up with. You must first obtain the Baomu technique before you have the capital to trade. I didn't expect this controversy, and the focus was also very surprising. The protagonist was too anxious. From the perspective of my writing, one is the protagonist's eyebrows. If I say that if the Zifu comes to see it, it is reasonable to find the witchcraft, and in terms of transaction, the original Yuan family has also been traded to the Li family. Second value matching, I did give the profit to Yuan Tuan, but considering that it does not involve the protagonist's fundamental interests, Yuan Tuan is about to die, and the concession will benefit the friendship between the two. It should not be a big deal, and the concession is not much. Similarly, these two plots, plus the plot of foundation building, are connected together and are not easy to change at all. Judging from the number of likes on the comments, Bao Mu's problem is bigger and Yuan Tuan's problem is smaller. If readers have good suggestions for modification, I will modify it immediately. Finally, it's about the issue. This is also the most troublesome thing for me. Because of the author's special status, his reply to the readers will put a lot of pressure on the readers and will be regarded as an insult to him. The key is that if you reply and don't change your opinion, then it's over and the readers will be absolutely disgusted. That's why many old authors don't reply, don't read comments, and don't modify their articles, because from experience, they know that this stuff is useless Readers will vent and read what they should read. If you want to reply, it will be even more annoying to argue with readers, which will make readers angry. But think about it, does not replying or commenting really respect the readers and respect the work? Look at the original work, Ji Yueren. He liked to reply to readers in the early stage, but later he didn't reply at all. He must have learned his lesson. I have also learned a lesson. There are many readers who are actually very kind and like your book. If you discuss it with them and then go too far, they will delete the review and leave. To be honest, there was such a reader a few days ago. It took me three days to recover, and I couldn't help but doubt my choice. And there is really no way to write a book. Internet articles have thousands of words a day and are updated daily. There is no way for a responsible author to be free from controversy and loopholes. It is too energy-consuming to revise.

Sorry, this is the title of the book. You need to cultivate your practice.

Damn, it's a masterpiece. It's the first masterpiece by a Xuanjian fan.

Now the adults are all frightened🤭 And Mu De does not affect the overall situation at all. To put it bluntly, the monk is afraid that the protagonist will enter Ji Mu Guo, and Tianxia is afraid that the protagonist will enter Zheng Mu Guo. ，， ，😍？ ，，，""😁

The protagonist has successfully obtained the gold certificate and been promoted to an adult, but the author is still stuck in the Zifu period. The two chapters of Zheng Jin were really cool, but before the Zheng Jin, he clearly told the enemy to block the way. As a result, the protagonist did not give a reply immediately after the Zheng Jin. Instead, he mentioned Taiqing's soft suit and then disappeared. Very bland. The contradiction between the protagonist Zheng Jin and others is that the clear status and significance of the protagonist Zheng Jin and Hou are not reflected. It was only evident from one or two dialogue scenes that Taiqing could be forced to retreat, Tianxia admitted. There are few downward practitioners' perspectives, even fewer fellow practitioners' perspectives, and none at all. The author is very good at Taoism, supernatural powers, and spiritual practice, but he failed to deal with the most important ups and downs of the plot, and the emotional venting of the plot development. I felt that I was holding back my energy after becoming a gold medal, and there was no place to vent it. Even if you write the reaction of the Li family, or even the reaction of 🐢 and Xuan Xu, it will be much better, and you can vent the emotions behind this stock. This is what you look like now: After finishing the certificate, you say harsh words to Taiqing, then return to the Sword Monument to stabilize your realm and improve your magical power, and then open another incarnation to go out. The incarnation also visits Taiyuan, and then returns to Qingchi after the conversation. Isn't this just playing a game and following the plot? There are only a few different perspectives interspersed in the middle, and they are also intermittent, which suddenly stopped the smooth flow of the Zhengjin chapter.

In the world view of Xuanjian, where you are in prison, it is useless to read the original work if you have high talent. You need to be able to survive. I originally thought that the tree next door was strong enough to eat dead people, but I didn't expect that your wishing tree is even more outrageous, with an unlimited number of wish-making mechanisms.

The author needs to sort out his ideas, and it will be confusing if he writes it down. If you really want to support the role of Yuan Xiu, you can add a paragraph to explain Taoism to him, and make him a great attendant, who can enter and exit the cave at any time. If you want to support the group portraits, then write about all the real people in the Taoist lineage of the Sun. If other golden elixirs don't preach, it doesn't mean you can't speak. You are a time traveler, so you can't be rigid in your thinking. As for the protagonist's disciples and brothers, they are the closest to the protagonist. It's okay to preach occasionally and show their faces. It's not good to have the protagonist in the cave, not even a single cultivator, and just let the incarnation pass the message. This is not good either. The protagonist is Li Yesheng. You can't write Yuan Xiu as Li Yesheng. They are two people. If you want Yuan Xiu to be the protagonist's messenger, you have to give a condition and write too much. You can really get along with the lower cultivator, communicate more and spread the word. If you get the golden elixir, you will stay silent, don't say anything and stay away from the lower cultivator. What's the difference between that and Lu Jiangxian?

You may be able to fill this gap🤓

Brothers, I see that people are now discussing how Jindan should guess who is behind the protagonist and how scared he should be if he is the reincarnation of the true king. But in fact, the one who is most afraid is Xuan Xu! He pretended to be so much before, but now it's so embarrassing to meet the protagonist. Not to mention Li Gui's collision with Li Kui, Xuan Xu might not feel that this was the real back-up plan of Lord Qingxuan. Yin and Yang are changing again, and they are entering Jimu with the sword. Xuan Xu probably thought that the sword master met Master Qing Xuan when he went out, and then the master arranged for a junior brother to come back and clean up the mess. How else to explain this powerful Taiyin method? Just because there is no one in Taiyin does not mean that Taiyin methods cannot be used 🤓

The biggest threshold for other fanfics is that they cannot understand it if they have not read the original work. If they describe a large number of original plots and settings, it will be unfriendly to the original fans, the largest audience. However, we Xuanjian are different Xuanjian's original work readers still cannot understand the original work. After all, we are the same as readers who have not read the original work hahahaha

It is obviously the biggest climax of the book so far, but you can write it so plainly, even the most classic shock reactions from all parties are not interesting, especially the latest two chapters 164 and 165. I feel that I should read Zhengjin and run away. The last sentence, now that Xuanjian colleagues have written about Jindan, they can only imitate Dachi and write their own things.

The wheelchair hero Mu Sheng proves to be the immortal Jimu Donghua, and the little devil Muchi next door can only continue to be the magic Jimu, and Mu De will be carried forward together! However, the author of this book should have referred to some Taoist theories of the Da Chixian Sect. I wonder if he will write about turning injury into enlightenment and becoming a hodgepodge in the future.

As expected, there was no showdown with Turtle Immortal. I looked at my own plan and did not put the path of enlightenment on anyone else. Just rely on yourself. I was frightened and cried a lot of the true king's Dharma.

I mean, don't sleep. Let's adjust the time difference. Let's start with ten chapters today.

Is this the first one? I have eaten up all the bonuses from the first certificate.

What readers want to see most now is the reaction of the subordinates and the admiration and admiration from all over the world, rather than writing a few dialogues about Zifu alone 😡. The impression given by these chapters is just like: after Trump became president, only a few friends gathered in private. You said "amazing" and I said "incredible", and then nothing happened 😰. There are no maga celebrations across the United States, no grand rallies and parades, and no super parties from various factions of the Sichuan faction... The last few chapters have really been written with a small family spirit like a magic set. It is said that the golden elixir is the first cause, so why not write about the changes it has brought to the world, the reactions of mortals, the reactions of refining Qi, and the reactions of foundation building? It will definitely be different at different levels and from different perspectives. Is it possible that only Zifu can hear the protagonist's edict 😒?

Isn't it true that the protagonist can rub the 78th-level Fetal Breath Refining Qi Foundation Building Technique with his hands? Just a bunch of this type of fetal breath refining and foundation-building exercises. As mentioned in the previous article, a dozen or so talisman cards of the same level can be exchanged. Then find some actions that can connect you with the tree. After doing it, change this exercise and make a spiritual vow. It is equivalent to saying that everyone can send charm cards. After becoming the Purple Mansion, I will definitely have to come back to seek benefits fiercely. When adults look at it, they will only think that they are being so generous just to get good weather from Jimu, and that there is someone behind it.

If you update another twenty chapters, I will declare that you are the orthodox Xuanjian

After all, the protagonist was born on the lake and his surname is Li, and he is inseparable from the remnants of the Yue Mansion. The later he gets certified, the less chance he has. If the protagonist is born in Persimmon and gets certified again, even if it cannot change the overall situation of Luoxiading, other adults will not be able to play Mingyang's little games casually, so There is a high probability of cultivating upwards and carrying magic weapons to counterattack and cultivate downwards 🙂 Unless you plug in the certificate directly, or steal the chicken certificate before Persimmon is born, you must be very strong just after you get certified, otherwise you may be beaten and killed by a group of people as soon as you board.

I hope the author doesn't write a story about lovers. The scene where Mu Chi takes in Ning Wan is disgusting, not to mention that the male protagonist is Zhenjun now. It's not a traditional fantasy. Some fans are really speechless when they read the original heroine and don't understand their mentality. The male protagonist in this book is the reincarnation of a ray of golden nature, which the Taoist couple can understand.

I see that you are treating me like a district king just because you wrote it. This is wrong. Also, Xuanxuan is definitely different from Guixuan to outsiders. For Guixuan, he can't bear to sink the world and kill himself because deep down he believes in Qingxuan's prophecy to guarantee the bottom line. To outsiders, it really doesn't matter. Therefore, Xuanzhen is more difficult to deal with and needs to be gentle. On the contrary, you need to be hard and fast with the district king, so that you can quickly force him to sigh and surrender helplessly.

I think the pace can be completely slowed down after the golden elixir, and the disciples can be taught how to farm. This can make up for the regret that the genuine Li family does not have the golden elixir, show more B character, promote the atmosphere of gathering trees into forests, and at the same time close the brand, focus on the sect, and create a Shu sword sect. The main line can be slowly pushed. If you feel that there is not enough time for you to operate, then find a way to destroy Yilvzhen 2.0 And operate 3.0 Yourself. In addition, the most reliable guess about the identity of the protagonist should be: Dong Huatian or Yuanfu's Five Dharma passed away, Jinxing reincarnated and re-cultivated, inherited the mantle of the No. 1 Yuzhen swordsmanship, and was the same generation as Li Jiangqun or Jiang Qing in the previous life. Chang Geng's era is too far away, and there will be no true king.

Let's talk about a difficult thing. Now that the protagonist is like this, Jimu may become a T1 level orthodoxy. Some brothers may want to ask why, but I have to say one thing. When Jimu was a demon king, he killed many true kings and gave Jimu a lot of restraint. Let me list it for you: being killed by the sword, fearing thunder and fire, being in harmony with the three yangs, establishing water in the palace, conquering Shaoyin, removing the qi, swallowing water, and the original set of trees can suppress and return to the earth. Do you dare to believe that Jimu can still restrain Sui Qi? The latest chapter of Xuanjian's "Sui Qi Supernatural Power" is so powerful. Most of the people will probably read it. It really lives up to the name of "Qing Su". To put it bluntly, apart from the three restrained sides of sword, thunder and fire, which have bonuses with Sanyang, Jimu has four remaining striking sides. Swallowing water may refer to the entire water virtue. My dear, this level is much better than Xi Qi who worked hard for Mingyang. You have worked so hard to rebel against the Lord, and you are as powerful as I, the Demon Lord, have accumulated over several generations.

This author's attitude is getting worse and worse. I have time to read comments and reply to netizens at 1 or 2 o'clock in the evening, but I don't want to update more. I'm afraid it will become normal to delay updating less.

After re-reading it, I found that it was indeed fed with pills to build the foundation. His talent was mediocre and has been revised However, among the four sons of the first generation, Li Chijing was the most talented. At home, practicing at the same time, Li Tongya was far inferior to Li Chijing. There is also a bit of the original talisman that is very strange. It has nothing to do with the cultivation qualifications, so this needs to be considered separately.