My Cellular Universe: An Evolutionary Theory

As for cancer, this is the ancestral method and cannot be changed!

Once again, Cancer Creation cannot get rid of its original setting.

Have you created the universe? Just write! 😃

Oh yeah, I was elbowed to death. I can tell that the author wants to write a female protagonist or something? But what I wrote is like the tsundere heroine in a light novel about ten years ago with a strong smell of two-spined salamanders. I'm already going to vomit.

Cute girl with cancer and dementia that remains unchanged for thousands of years

It looks unsatisfactory, with too many explanations of principles. It feels like the author wants to build a complete theory, and each concept has a specific process of creation, but the starting point of this theory is nothingness, so those long explanations also seem empty, giving people a feeling of self-pleasure, and they are completely incomprehensible. Don't have so many explanations, decentralize the perspective, and write more about everyone's use and development of extraordinary powers, and then combine them into major events, changes in the times, etc. This will give it a more epic feel. The current macro perspective of the protagonist is too single.

I feel that the author's focus is a bit off. We want to see the creation, the perspective of the protagonist, and the supporting characters, but it feels like there is too much space.

In fact, there is no need to build any extraordinary system, just eat it directly to improve the quality and quantity of cells. Stack up the white dwarf body, the neutron body, the quark body 🙂, and then behind the black hole body, the universe, the super star cluster, the Xianwu Great Wall, the universe network, and then the super universe structure.

In general, the main reason is that the system is confusing. I don't even know what is written after reading it.

Update one chapter in one day? Can anyone see you?