A Dungeon Just Appeared in My Living Room

The author said that he has 8 high-quality books completed, but I saw 8 eunuch books, which is a bit scary 🤭

I always like to write about large-scale wars and strategy genres. It's strange that the data is good.

For the dungeon, just write a single-player adventure story. For Infinite Streaming, don't write a total war story, as it's easy to die.

Even if a new book is released, I won't recommend the old one. If you don't recommend it, it will be difficult for old readers to find it...

The author is always competing with the self-created plot of the game. You are actually more suitable for writing self-created plots such as Infinite Flux and Fandom. You can't grasp the self-created plot and you repeatedly make the same mistakes.

Counting this one, I have written a total of 15 books, 7 eunuchs, and 8 high-quality books 🤫. This one has just tens of thousands of words, so it is a high-quality one, right? There are several of these 8 books that were finished in the early 1 million words, and they are old eunuchs.

Don't be afraid of the author's Eight Eunuchs. This kind of book is good-looking because there are many eunuchs, so you must write well before putting it on the shelves to attract readers. After it is put on the shelves, run away. No matter how good-looking he writes, as long as he has a particularly good writing concept, he will not be as good as Eight Eunuchs, so run quickly and don't look back

Is the great sniper considered to have exhausted half of his talent? Always copying my own previous ideas

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There are so many cuts, I almost don't dare to read your new book.

There is a copy of 2(ˊ•͈ꇴ•͈ˋ) in my living room

The dungeons range from martial arts, zombie west, fantasy DND, copycats, to the Romance of the Three Kingdoms Even when playing games, you should pay attention to step by step. You are too scattered. You neither focus on the protagonist's combat system, nor do you focus on the theme of the dungeon to connect the plot of the dungeon. If it highlights that the protagonist likes to play games, then there will be more interesting short and fast dungeons. Now it feels a bit unsatisfactory.

Would you like to work as an arcane mage and then go to a martial arts dungeon to become a vigilante? In addition to having an exciting story, the most important thing for a dungeon is to bring abilities to the protagonist. This martial arts dungeon is so different from a mage that it doesn't seem to be of any help at all. Just like the sword skills I learned before are immediately useless, it is very wasteful.

It's really not a good idea to not have a unified theme in the copy. You would think that having Western fantasy and Xianxia would attract readers who like Western fantasy and Xianxia at the same time. In fact, readers who don't like Western fantasy and Xianxia are excluded. It seems like addition, but in fact it is subtraction.

It doesn't feel like it's long. There was a copy of the book in the living room before which was quite rhythmic. After finishing the copy, the real world alternated. Now it feels like it's all a copy.

You're not the author, are you kidding me? In the last paragraph of the latest chapter, my dear, it took me several seconds to read the boss' lines. Did no one interrupt me for such a long time? This is a bit funny. It took such a long time to stick the gun in your mouth and give you a blowjob. It's still the second stage.

The updates are too slow and infrequent. Why are you still preparing for this second copy? I want to watch the battle and enjoy it!

Did you write whatever came to your mind in this copy? What's the point of setting up a career? Have you not even considered the career system of the protagonist? Will an arcanist who specializes in Western magic run an Eastern dungeon and have any growth effect on the protagonist? For those who didn't know, I thought I was working in an Eastern profession.

The author needs to correct two shortcomings. Novels are also a type of service industry. One is to have a beginning and an end. Can the boss feel comfortable? Time and time again, no big money came, it was all retail investors with no money who ran away as soon as it was put on the shelves. The second is to stop voting. Novels are not games. Novels are passive acceptance. The reader is just like the one being tied up in the bondage play. You can still get through if you let him choose. This whip is wrong, and the candle will not work. Just blindfold the reader and it will be over. Stimulation is the key.

You update so little, don't blame me for raising you, who knows if you will enter the palace

There really aren't many eunuchs, and they will be eunuchs if they want; there are not many eunuchs, and they will be rotten if they want 😰

It's so shameless to return eight "complete" works.

Alas, the main character in this book was poorly portrayed. I feel like a fool, and it all depends on the author's deus ex machina.

This book of eunuchs is not awesome. What is awesome is that most of them made me add bookshelves before I realized it was you. Your book writing is really on the top of my heart. Damn, I read the introduction and added the bookshelf without looking at the author's habits. Only after I saw it did I realize that it was you, the old eunuch, who was chasing me to kill. The big and small ones came in turns, and fell into your trap.

The copy is okay, but it would be better if there were less detailed descriptions of the reality For example, in the previous chapter about buying weapons and equipment, this chapter says that some people have been saying that this is bad and that is not good, or you just make it up and people don't know what you are specifically talking about, or you just check the information and don't let professionals find fault. Professionals are professional, which means you are not professional. If you are not professional, then what else should you read? Another example is the exercise after clearing the novice copy Is this intensity achieved by people? In a field that you are not familiar with and you don't check the information, the more detailed you write, the more uncomfortable it will be. If you don't write in such detail and just write a few sentences, won't you be able to live your life?

It's over, I feel like a former eunuch before this book is put on the shelves

Where is the finished book? Which one is not unfinished?

It smells like the book in the living room before, come on

It's starting again. The younger brother and sister in the latest chapter look like a real story line at first glance. Save your energy. Isn't it a good idea to include B in the copy? Write less about reality.

At first, I thought the setting and creativity impressed me, but what I didn't expect was that the pacing was too poor, the story was poorly connected, and I couldn't find any fun points. I did a lot of things, but it seemed like nothing had been done.