Celestial Official of the Violet Palace

Why is it a male gate and not a female gate?

What a crappy book! You actually start charging for it after it's put on the shelf. An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care if you don't read the book, just throw it out of the bookshelf and never see it again Σ_(꒪ཀ꒪∠)

Now that I see it, it feels too regimented. Whether it's the instructions for the protagonist's work or a set of standard procedures for dealing with difficulties, you can't say it's wrong. The author did write down the details of the protagonist's training, but the main body has become an official article, which is too rigid. When writing fantasy or fairy tales, there should always be a bit of personal heroism, a bit of passion, and in short, some feelings. As for the protagonist, if you talk about family ties, of course there is, but there are more benefits. When you talk about family and country, you don't emphasize it. What seems to be pushing the protagonist is to become stronger and control his destiny, which is the universal answer. Personally, I have no hobbies, no true feelings, let alone love. This seems like a standard answer for career advancement. All difficulties can be overcome at the right time. The protagonist of Taiwangdao. Of course, this is also purely subjective. I actually want to see the whole world, not just the officialdom. In a turbulent era, other heroes will sing and I will appear. The political wisdom of high-level officials, the daily necessities of ordinary people, the customs and culture of society, etc., Can completely cut the perspective and show the influence of the protagonist on the era.

Purely personal opinions for your reference. This book was recommended to me when I was reading "In the Name of Supernatural Powers". I came in after reading the introduction. I am not a publicist, but I quite like reading this routine. This book has the following advantages: 1. The world built by the author is relatively grand. At the same time, the system of the world is very complete, and the details are ingenious and reasonable. It feels like another real parallel universe, which is very good. 2. The combat power system is complete and still follows logic. There are many supporting characters, and they are flesh and blood. There is not a single person who is mentally retarded in the book. The relationship between the characters is reasonable and the interaction is smooth. 3. When there is a fighting plot, it is very reasonable and exciting to lay out the situation in the early stage, use skills in the middle stage of the fight, and get benefits in the later stage, but there are not many related scenes. It is a good book, but I thought of a few reasons why it is not popular: 1. This book can be completely regarded as an official novel, looking at the intrigues and the determination of the protagonist. 2. The main plot is not prominent enough, at least I can't tell. Immortality may be the main plot, but the plot is mainly about being an official, and the core is almost interesting. This is also the reason for the first problem. "Supernatural Power" handles it much better, with a golden spirit, a strong sense of substitution, and a hidden ancient god circle. There are also fights in the later stages. The protagonist there is destined to be a person of that time, but the process is very interesting to watch. Instead of becoming an official step by step, readers can see how to manage different departments. 3. The protagonist is too peripheral, not prominent, and the conflict is not intense enough. The protagonist is basically led along in the whole book. This is even less interesting than "The Supernatural Power". How can an online novel not have a pretentious plot? Among the masters of pretentious writing, "Supernatural Power", "Lan Ke Qi Yuan", and "The Age of Countercurrent Innocence", I feel that it is more interesting to pretend to be a little bit more interesting. The protagonist of this book is not that strong, and it is definitely not advisable to forcefully pretend, but it is not right to not pretend at all. The plots I can remember so far, such as "The Ancestral Land Fight", the contract with Lan Ying and other plots may be a little bit more interesting, and the others are very bland. I don't know how long I plan to write this book. It seems that there are very awesome existences outside this planet. It is extremely difficult to get out of the planet. There are still hundreds of thousands or millions of words to probably get out. The world out there is too big. So far, I have only seen the ice scum of the iceberg. I don't know if I will change my style at that time and adopt a pure fairy style. It's late at night, I wrote it blindly

You pick one, Gongmen's work notes on cultivating immortals, or the manual for patrolling immortals. The title of the book should still have some characteristics. The current mainstream book titles either revolve around a certain item in the book "Xuan Jian", or around the protagonist's ambitions "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" and "Bare Heart", or around the core highlights of the book "No Money" and "Who Let Him Cultivation to Immortality". At present, this book title really has no interesting points or features. It's not good for your traffic.

Can you write a book? Why are all those who cultivate immortality cultivating immortality? I'm really vomiting.

This book has made so much progress in promoting Qi training, but it is still the first level.

Could you please stop patting me on the shoulder? Since you are cultivating immortals, some actions of ordinary people are not suitable. What if I give you a dirty trick when I tap on the shoulder, don't you think so?

Thunder Nine Heavens... This name makes me feel like I have returned to more than ten years ago. If I don't know how to choose a name, I can ask AI if it works.

It's better to change your book to "I am cultivating immortality in Gongmen"