Extraordinary Voyage

The novel is very good, but the time span is too short. I really don't understand how busy the online literary world is now. I wish the protagonist would be number one in the world in a year or two. What would happen if the time span was longer? 😰😰 I just saw that the protagonist became a battleship captain at the age of 16. It's so magical. If you extend the span to 3-4 years, the sense of disobedience will be greatly reduced. I don't understand why the online literary circles now wish that the protagonist would conquer the world before he turned 20 😰😰😰

It seems that this book is good with more than 300 chapters, but I found a very bad phenomenon of the author, that is, he wants to write the protagonist's opportunities more fully, and the career setting is more rigorous. The protagonist's career seems to be very powerful at first, but have you ever thought about a problem? By the 300th chapter, the protagonist's methods are still the same as the old three. Swordsmanship, birds, potions, and new careers feel dispensable to me. Maybe he will be very powerful in the later stage, but you write that the protagonist can upgrade to wizard 2 quickly. It's been more than 00 chapters, and I'm not an official wizard yet. It's either less of this or less of that to level up. Why is it so difficult? Why do other people just take something and it's a good thing? When the protagonist takes a secret treasure, it has either flaws or limitations. Her sister can produce an all-round map with a translation, and it also has a three-dimensional map of sea, land and air. For example, I can't produce a dragon slaying dragon by defeating the most powerful monster, but you can produce a dragon slaying knife by slaying a scarecrow. Is it so casual? Is it appropriate for you to be so strict with the protagonist? And the upgrade is slow. Yes, maybe the protagonist discovered the wizard profession in less than a year, and the upgrade is very fast based on time. However, I have already seen chapter 300. It is not slow anymore, and your major events are not progressing slowly anymore. In chapter 300, Poseidon has already fought. The protagonist, you are still a wizard apprentice. What are you doing? Others are asking him to pick up things, and he often narrates the inner activities of the supporting characters. I think that is of some use. , Mainly writing about supporting characters, so I can't see the protagonist in several pictures. After reading it, I thought about it, why did I look at the supporting characters, and wrote such a long article about a few sentences? Oh my god, what do you think? In short, the author gave me the feeling that you are desperately trying to set up obstacles for the protagonist's upgrade to hinder the protagonist's growth. I wanted to write about him in more detail, but it was written that the protagonist was trying his best to upgrade like a Saburo, and then the supporting character accidentally drank water and upgraded? Also, whether you are writing about the protagonist sister or this young apprentice, especially the inner drama in the beginning of accepting the apprentice, have you moved yourself to death? Well, it embarrasses me to death. It is not you who caused her to be like this. Why not do this or that? How about you add a paragraph in the first few chapters because they met each other for some reason, or there is a transition. Also, the descriptions of women are all the same. When you meet a The woman is a stunning beauty, and the protagonist is stunned. Women always have a lot of small tricks. In my opinion, no matter whether it is the main female character or not, the drama is forced. If you can't write the emotional drama or the inner drama of the protagonist, then don't write it, or write it normally. If you don't write the emotional line in this book, it will definitely be better than fairy grass. But this is not important. What is important is to make the protagonist suffer less, speed up the upgrade, and don't be so cruel to the protagonist!

Olivia

After seeing a third of it, I can't stand it any longer. The plot here is just like in Dou Po, where the protagonist just fights the spirit, but there are a lot of Dou Zun and Dou Sheng hanging around you every day, and the protagonist even joins in on his own, and then he can only watch, "What benefits can't be obtained, and why do you want to kill yourself to provoke Dou Sheng?" That's outrageous. Give it up. Give it up.

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I think the biggest poisonous point of a book is the attribute of IQ (I didn't mention the blue bar). The upper limit of this thing is the author's IQ. In some books, the protagonist's IQ is off the charts at the end, but the thinking before and after is still exactly the same. It's a complete failure.

Every villain in this book, regardless of price, has a god-level skill - turn around and disappear. Once this skill is released, the true god cannot be found. The protagonist claims to be constantly upgrading his mobility, which is the best in the world, and still cannot be stopped by anyone. No matter how you are beaten, you can completely arrange the ending. Who do you think is the one favored by luck?😁

It's similar to the mystery, but not as good as it. It has a small amount of poison points. The pig's feet have made great contributions in major events and won many rewards. Then it was said that because the city was severely damaged and the nobles also suffered losses, they all donated it. . . In the medieval steam century, nobles valued face. You, a naval lieutenant commander, donated a large sum of money. Should your leader donate, and should other nobles donate? He also said that the city had suffered so much damage that it almost ran out of money to issue rewards to the navy. What does the loss of cities have to do with the navy? Isn't the bonus given to the navy issued by the navy headquarters? Will it cost nothing to buy extraordinary materials in the future? And you were reborn with memories. The second princess of the kingdom only paid you a bonus and didn't say clearly that you were her guardian knight. You started to snitch on a large-scale gangster as soon as you joined her. They can produce something similar to the water of life. There must be some senior officials in the kingdom behind it. They reported it because they couldn't bear the production method. How can you confirm that there is no such person behind the second princess? You still want to use the second princess to reduce your dimensionality. If the forces behind the second princess also participate, wouldn't it be a dimensionality reduction attack on you? Also, the ability of fortune-telling masters is too strong. Among the same level, they can find situations thousands of kilometers away from the sea. They can also lead people to use a spirit-like method to see what is happening thousands of kilometers away. The pig's feet are a little bit holy. They can't help themselves when they see some tragic things in other worlds. If you have past life memories, these people are aliens to you. Just like when you go to China and abroad, do you give support to those begging for food?

A somewhat idealistic world (ﾉ)`ω´(ヾ)​​​ How to say, there are many advantages So far, there are almost no poisonous points that are common in online articles As a prostitute, after ten years of reading At least I have read close to a thousand online articles But I am a very picky reader, I can be poisonous, but if there are too many poisonous points, I will abandon the book I can see only a handful of later novels, and most of them can't even read the paid chapters Like the character interaction is brain-dead, and the plot is for Creating conflicts and forcibly reducing intelligence and other operations It's really not necessary to do too much. Taking it for granted in world shaping is also a big poisonous point Judging from the current progress of 100 chapters The author has almost avoided all poisonous points. Although it is relatively plain but not boring, all the actions of the protagonist are logically connected There are no world villains who suddenly appear, and there are no inexplicable conflicts of interest It is really rare What's more, the author is actually a complete novice! It's so rare that I almost had tears in my eyes when I talked about it After reading books for so many years, I have seen too many authors who have mixed chocolate in their books I hope the author will work hard! After telling the story in my heart steadily I will definitely get results There is nothing to support, I can only order all of them Come on, author!! Be careful not to mess up your outline!

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