The Holy Maiden Comes, and No One Pays Grain

Taking the shelf as the dividing line, the front and back are completely different styles. Before it was put on the shelves, it was a funny novel with laughter and scolding. The protagonist was a liar who pretended to be a god. The author was crazy about adding jokes to increase the absurdity and drama of the article. It was fun to read it. After being released, this book is a very serious, dark and cruel rebellion novel. The author completely changed the tone of the entire book with only two supporting characters, telling the protagonist and readers that revolution is not a dinner party. He did not abandon the original funnyness, but added a lot of profound thinking and criticism. The protagonist's position is now closer to a great mentor who leads the people to beg for a living. This kind of transformation of the protagonist is really rare, and it is not abrupt at all. The author's psychological description of the protagonist is very successful, and the images of some supporting characters are also very vivid and three-dimensional. However, sometimes foreign names are really face-blind. The beginning of the book is quite venomous, with three golden chapters and a golden introduction by the author. The author claims that it is to increase the absurdity, but if it is too absurd, it will lose readers. I hope the author has time to make major changes to the first few chapters. As a reminder to latecomers, the plot of this book only becomes exciting when the protagonist arrives at the Gulag Monastery. You can just take a quick look at the first few chapters.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel that I must praise the author for one setting. There are many novels that like to set different physical laws in different worlds. There are those like the third young master of the Tang family who fill in numbers with their eyes closed and then fans will find fault with them, and there are also pure icons and new innovations that just talk about phenomena that violate the physics of the original plane. As for alchemy, the magic side and the technology side are simply separated. Such works abound, such as the famous "Arcane Throne" which claims to combine scientific research and magic. I also watched "Sword of the Dawn". Not to mention witches, the development of the proper magic side is completely dependent on the technology side. Most of them bind magic-side technology to practice, not to mention this kind of thing. And this is the only one that gives me as novel a feeling as this one. The nature of orichalcum is, on the surface, an ordinary magic converter. This kind of thing can be found in many novels. But its properties are actually very strange. According to ordinary people's intuition, objects have a tendency to resist external forces that change it. Breaking it with hands and injecting mana increase its elastic potential energy, so there should be no synergy. When the orichalcum is bent with force, there is a lot of internal elastic potential energy, which should have a tendency to be converted into mana. When mana is injected, there will be more mana and less elastic potential energy. There should be a tendency for mana to be converted into elastic potential energy, similar to a chemical balance. In other words, you can either bend the orichalcum by hand or "use magic power" to bend the orichalcum. This got me thinking about the inflatability of the material. Most materials are inflatable, which means they will expand radially when compressed axially. When stretched along the axial direction, it will shrink in the radial direction. For example, a rubber band becomes thinner when stretched, and a concrete column becomes thicker when it bears load. It's like a seesaw, press this way and lift that way. But orichalcum is different. The elastic deformation of orichalcum and the absorption of mana work together. The mana eliminates part of the elasticity of orichalcum. The elastic deformation of orichalcum causes internal structural changes, and the structural changes lead to the absorption of mana. This property is very strange and not simple no matter from any angle. Just like there are a few exotic materials with auxetic properties in reality, the unique properties of these materials are brought about by their special structures. It is conceivable that the microstructure of orichalcum also has this similar "auxetic property", and the difference in its structure is what makes it different from other ordinary materials. I personally think that this kind of setting is much more advanced than the alchemy in other novels, such as "reconciling the magic/medicinal properties of various heavenly materials and earthly treasures". A counter-example is the Third Young Master of the Tang Family. High-end metal materials with strange properties can be made by just inputting energy into them. Sometimes you even need to input vitality and sacrifice Yangshou to produce the best equipment. This kind of magic side technology can be said to be the same, which I think is very boring. Even the Arcane God's Throne fell into an infinite cycle of adventure and monster hunting in the later stages of collecting various heavenly materials and earthly treasures. If you need time characteristics, you can get a material with time characteristics. Anyway, they are different "elements", which are essentially different types of energy. This upgrade is essentially the same as the routine of ascending to the upper world and starting over with Qi training. Sword of the Dawn is about forcibly cutting off steam engines and electric motors. The intention is too obvious, the sense of deliberateness is very strong, and it's uncomfortable to watch. In short, I personally don't like it. The orichalcum setting of this novel is what stood out to me. It did not force anything, but really made something "different". It will make me feel that "the different physical laws of another world should be like this!" For such a reading experience, I must give special praise for this point alone.

This novel is not high-end in terms of writing skills. The various descriptions, characterizations, and plot arrangements are a bit immature. I had a lot of minor problems while reading it. For example, the intellectual manipulation in the first thirty chapters; for example, the advancement of the plot is not efficient enough; for example, the writing and ink of light and important points are occasionally confused, the key points are delayed and not written, and the number of pen and ink words is used to supplement the world view in places that should not be focused; and for example, flags and foreshadowing are too obvious. There is even a very strange thing. The name of this book is "The Holy Maiden Comes Without Food". And I have now finished the second volume, which contains more than 500 chapters, and my impression of the four saints is not even as good as Danji's. Most of their images remain before joining the Papal States. As the first female protagonist to join the male protagonist, Jeanne was actually the female protagonist who was the last to find such a person. The most common description of Jeanne has become that Horn gives military orders and Jeanne is deployed there. To put it bluntly, they are no different from ordinary supporting characters. They are not plump enough or three-dimensional enough. Since the title of the book is Saints, these Saints should have initiative, flesh and blood, and change, instead of being reduced to mere tools and backgrounds after joining the Papal State. As for the bad jokes, it is indeed the first time that I have seen so many jokes used in a novel. I don't like this way of writing, but after all, this is just an online article, which is less serious but more interesting. Even though this novel has so many flaws, I still think it is a good book. The author is truly telling stories that take place in another world, another country, and another nation. He has a clear story line and motivation for plot development. With Horn as the main perspective, supplemented by the perspectives of various minor characters, a peasant uprising emerges vividly on the page. At the same time, Horne's portrayal is quite good. As smooth as the character arcs of the Saints are, Horn's character arcs are as twists and turns. He went from being pushed and half-heartedly leading the refugees forward, to slowly becoming the military and political leader of a country. Every time he survives a crisis, he becomes less cowardly and more responsible. His growth and emotional experience are the biggest highlights of this book This story still has enough room for development. If the grades allow, the author is willing to keep writing. I believe this book can be written very long, enough for old bookworms to chew on for a long time. Worth recommending!

In the early stage, the protagonist has not yet grown up. It is basically a grassroots stage fight against a loser. The addition of Internet memes and humorous descriptions make this stage very happy But this has dissuaded some book friends who specialize in reading about bitterness, hatred and seriousness. In fact, this book does not lack these. After the early stage, various forces appear one after another and fight each other back and forth, plus the good description of the big battlefield is absolutely enjoyable It also took a lot of chapters to create the protagonist, who has transformed from a low-income writer who only knows how to read to an excellent, practical and responsible leader. The other supporting characters are also very carefully portrayed Sometimes the writing is not good, but it has been changed. Considering that the author is only part-time and can correct his mistakes and change the eunuch, it is already good All in all, it is ten or even nine points. I would give it an 8.8 Out of 10

Although it was awkward in the early stage and the writing was not very good, it is gradually getting better. Although some characters were developed too hastily, they are also memorable. The main reason why I like this book is because it is not a stallion. It does not have any descriptions of jade feet, jade hands, and big thunder. Even without those descriptions, it would still make people think that the female character is great because of her good looks. Last mention: A stallion without nausea is simply a winner!

As the author said in his closing remarks, the outline ends with our flag. I also feel that from the independence of Qianhe River Valley to the unification of the Holy Alliance and the defeat of King Jiji, the plots up to here are all well written, but the war with the Royal Court at the end is very uncomfortable to watch. The whole last volume gave me the same feeling as watching Lingao Qiming. The various little characters, technical details, various tactics, geography, etc. In the war were all overwhelming. As a result, as I went to the back, I didn't want to read the tactical details and various geographical descriptions related plots. I just flipped through it quickly. I really don't like to read such a large amount of descriptions of military tactics, geography, etc. It's very tiring. If I don't construct a map in my mind, I will feel a sense of irritation when I see those place names.

This book is one of the most red-flavored and realistic Western fantasy books. Compared with most farming and Western fantasy novels on the market, the most special thing about it is that it has very obvious character portrayal and character growth. The plot portrayal is completely prepared for the character's growth. Up to the latest, the author has successfully demonstrated the transformation of a civilian into a leader of the revolutionary army in two major plots: the Great Transformation and the Paris Commune. The worldview setting and structure in the book are well researched and highly recommended.

The idea is very good, but it's a pity that if I can't write it down, I will probably cut it off. First of all, you are revolting in Western Europe with the magical breathing method. Your subordinates are only a group of lambs who have been fooled by the people for hundreds of years. And the enemy is the aristocratic pope who occupies 80% of social resources. And I have relied on cheating along the way, and with the help of chance and other people, it is not difficult to guess what will happen next. It's nothing more than writing about an uprising, just practicing magic, or wandering bandits who are chaotic and chaotic. Even that force can't defeat it. This is caused by your background and the current environment you mentioned. I just feel a bit out of date. Relying on the force of the powerful world has been slowing down the upgrade of pig's feet.

After reading the testimonials on the launch, the author actually realized that the content before the launch was indeed awkward. Yes, it's just awkward, and the single essay is good, but the plot is rushed and the style is confusing. First of all, the plot is very rushed. Many backgrounds, including character backgrounds and world views, should be laid out in more detail. In terms of plot, the section from Moulin Rouge to the monastery is the most rushed, followed by the war, and then the monastery training and transfer. I haven't read the rest of the plot yet, so I don't know how it will develop. However, since the author wants to write about training soldiers, making equipment, and customizing systems in this paragraph, he shouldn't be in such a hurry. Either don't write it and leave it to the next stage, since you are going to transfer anyway. Information—including internal and external information—is the most obvious. It is too late to write, but it must be available, which seems very abrupt. In terms of time, there is no need to think too high about the speed of military mobilization in the Middle Ages. It only takes a few months in the village and half a year in the monastery. There is no logical problem at all. During this period, the world view and characters are clearly written and established, so this first part is more leisurely and grand. Let's talk about the confusing style. The plot is too dense and seems a little rushed, but as far as the plot itself is concerned, it's okay and the author is of sufficient quality. The problem is, how you use memes always depends on your future development direction. The book "Cultivating Immortality Without Money" is also very dense, but it is absurd from beginning to end. This does not seem to be the case in this book, and occasionally serious things appear, which makes it seem confusing. You can write about the misery of the people, or you can write about the misery sensationally; you can write about the misery of the people, or you can write about the misery of the people in a parody way; you can even write about the misery of the people and the misery at the same time, but it is difficult to write about misery in a sensational way and at the same time in a parody way about the misery.

Highly recommend this book! It is not a noob, the enemies are not clever, and the pace is very good, but the whole book is not serious, and there are many funny places. It is based on a Western fantasy, mixed with a development experience similar to that of the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom. The description of the war between hot and cold weapons is very enjoyable. The description of the male protagonist Horn is very good, with clear character arcs and changes in thoughts. There are also shortcomings. Sometimes it is too funny and affects the reading experience (personal opinion). The overall flaws are not concealed.

The writing is quite good and very interesting Except for the bad dance scene at the beginning, the writing becomes more and more exciting later on. Especially the war scenes use a grand and serious approach to depict an epic battle that seems powerful, like a dragon and a tiger fighting against each other. It is majestic in appearance, but in fact it is a village fight in Africa, where novices are pecking each other. The strong contrast makes people laugh A small pseudo-papal kingdom, with not many people, but a lot of outfits. The material spirit has not kept up, but the hat has been put on first I am looking forward to where this provisional regime will go next Good luck, author

It's quite confusing. Some systems and the evolution of some systems are not explained in detail in the book, and some can only be guessed at. Let me talk about it based on my impression. I remember the structure of the Pope - the Imperial Cardinal (the Council of Imperial Cardinals has a court and a privy council, the cardinal is usually the president of the court, only Chilvis is the abbot of the Holy Scythe Monastery) - various departments under the court, directly subordinate to the county chief - the rural religious order below the county - the town's Siyi Sisters - the traveling monks under the Siyi Sisters - the apostolic commander of the 100-house district, the 100-household chief - the 10-household chief. There are also three direct offices under the Pope and the Imperial Council, whose status is between the division and the court. There is also a directly affiliated Holy Father Worship Association, but I don't know how to define this level. There are also several staff departments separated from the Privy Council (I have the impression that there are some). I don't know what level they are and who is in charge of them. There are also the Governor of the Central Bank and the Royal Council of Natural Theology (forgot the name). The former should be in charge of Catherine, and the latter should be in charge of Wolf Girl. Both should be at court level or below. In addition, there are various monasteries (of an economic nature), the administrative status of several universities is not mentioned, and the directly affiliated institutions are not mentioned. I guess the latter should be managed by the Court of Truth or the Academic Council, and the former is either a separate department (Chilvis), or is managed by various courts. There are also the more important Speaker of the Parliament and the Supreme Court (I remember there was such a thing, elected by the Parliament, but it felt too strange. Didn't there be a tribunal? The system may have disappeared later). The Holy Union should be regarded as a dualist constitutional monarchy. The Parliament has corresponding powers, certain supervisory powers and certain legislative powers, but it cannot compare with "10,000 votes", so the power of the position of "Speaker" is not high. I think the status should be between the tribunal and the division. In the local new policy, there is one traveling monk for every ten hundred households, and ten traveling monks plus one Siyi leader form the Siyi Religious Association. Decisions are jointly voted by the Siyi Religious Association, and the meeting minutes are kept on file. The town where the Siyi Religious Association is located has corresponding buildings and facilities. In addition to the traveling monks, Siyixiu, the director of the post office, will also have various auxiliary officers/members and affairs officers/members. The religious orders in the townships and counties should be similar to this, but there are relatively few townships, so there should be several rural religious presidents forming the county religious association. In the Holy League, there are also franchising countries (Dawn Federation) and vassal countries (New Gemstone, Black Snake Bay). They have their own relatively complete administrative system and even have an army. This is different from the directly subordinate counties. However, the Holy League has a high degree of control over the vassal countries. The highest officer is Those appointed by the Holy Alliance must obey the orders of the Central Committee. You can refer to the alliance countries of the Soviet Union. As for the Holy Union's control over the Alliance of Dawn Federation, it should be weaker than that of the vassal countries. After all, the territories were not bordering before the Vampire War, but the alliance countries should also obey the orders of the Central Committee. Finally, there is the military control of Ruishiyuan. This is not mentioned in detail in the book. Let's take a guess. The highest officer in the military control area is the military commander, but the place should also be managed by civilian officials (counties, towns, and traveling monks). The army establishment book makes it clearer, so I won't go into details here.

I am really in the early stages of reading it. I started reading it today and I have read Chapter 18. I would like to share some of my feelings while reading it. For me, the best thing about this book is the author's words. An author's writing skills determine the reader's sense of involvement. I really feel that the author's words are very comfortable to me and suit my taste, so when I opened this book, I thought I had found a book of food. Unfortunately, I was pleasantly surprised when I opened the book, but now I am so disappointed. Let me talk about why I was surprised when I opened the book, but in just eighteen chapters, I felt that it was not to my liking. First of all, let me talk about my own reading taste. Generally speaking, I am a reader of light novels, but I can also read serious plots. But when I searched and read online articles, I still cared more about having fun. And my tastes are also very mixed. I can watch all kinds of male videos and like them all. But I think the plot style of the author's book is a bit fragmented. From the title and introduction, my first impression is that this book is labeled as funny, jumping, radio, funny, and meme. But after coming in, some plot arrangements and comments from book friends showed that the author wanted to write a more serious plot. For example, when the heroine fights with a knight, it's okay to be beaten badly, but the plot describes in detail the knight's mouthful of vaginal phlegm and the humiliation on the heroine's face. It's not that you can't write like this. Different novels have different styles, which will lead to different writing methods. It's just that for me, the combination of funny and funny jokes and the occasional serious and not-so-refreshing writing style is a bit fragmented, and I personally don't like it. The most serious problem is that the author forcibly lowers the protagonist's IQ through big hands. First of all, this is a magical world, secondly the male protagonist is a time traveler, and finally the male protagonist is resurrected with his head connected to his neck. Please tell me, these three buffs are superimposed, and then when something happens, the male protagonist keeps describing his psychological activities: Why am I okay? I am just an ordinary person. They are all troubled, but I am okay. I am an ordinary person. You say that grass grows but grass does not grow. Because the world view has not been fully developed, the subsequent descriptions of some of my design settings may not be accurate, but the meaning remains unchanged. The male protagonist was almost killed by the knight, but the female protagonist used an electric magic to kill the knight. When a knight wears iron armor, the first reaction of modern people is that the iron conducts electricity and electrocutes the knight to death. But when the male protagonist looks at the knight's corpse, it doesn't look like he was electrocuted. He also asked the heroine to split the armor several times and found that it did not conduct electricity. This plot is mostly for the development of a follow-up plot, but it basically illustrates a situation - different worlds are magical but not necessarily scientific. Don't take modern people's views and take it for granted as to what this world should be like. Nothing wrong? But the follow-up drama is coming. The male protagonist was taking the refugees with him, and he expected to run out of food, so he happened to find potato roots. One of the refugees was so hungry that he ate them and was poisoned to death. The male protagonist discovered that this description and this method of death looked a bit like cassava! Hey-hey! I know how to detoxify cassava. Then during the meeting later, he took out the potato roots and announced: Don't worry, I know how to do it! A little more psychological description: I guess this thing is the same as cassava, and I just know how to detoxify it. Anyway, the macroscopic (seemingly) physics of the two worlds are the same, so they should be pretty much the same. In line with the previous plot of testing conductivity, is this a human being? Is this a human being? Is this a human being? Brother, although there is not much food, it is not to the point where everyone will starve to death in one or two days! After you get the potato roots out, try to deal with them yourself first, then find someone to give you the Holy Communion, and then announce that it's okay after you eat it. Is that normal logic? What if the toxicity is inconsistent and your method fails, leading everyone to die together? Although you originally wanted to abandon the refugees and run away, there is no need to arrange such a plot with a pen, right? I'm tired of trying to force your wits down. The writing is 7.5, I like it, it's delicious The plot is 2, I can't give more, the arrangement is too witty.

The pictures below show the Papal flag, the Holy Grail flag and the Thousand Valley flag.

Internet memes plus politics, plus a little light novels. So far it seems that the author is doing well and seems very happy. I look forward to further developments.

Finished spreading flowers! Now that it's over, when will you write the next book

This is the second book to catch up on. I have only read this one before

I have read about 700 chapters so far, and the evaluation is accept Advantages 1. The plot is dense and the material is sufficient, and elements such as peasant uprising, political economy, clock/clockwork punk are reasonably interspersed in the traditional Western fantasy farming 2. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is carefully designed, and each female protagonist represents an interest group. Although the interaction between the male and female protagonists is out of emotion, they can both be subject to political scrutiny 3. The people's view of history and the heroic view of history are reasonably interspersed, and group portraits are included in the heroic narrative Disadvantages 1. Lack of in-depth exploration of elements, Western fantasy, clockwork/clock punk flavor is not very strong, it is sewn together, but the individual features are not enough and lack of beauty. I can only recommend it to friends who like farming stories. 2. The author's unitized narrative is handled very well, each chapter is very full, and the units are connected by the main line like reading a history book. However, just like a history book, the tone of the commentary, including the perspective, is the author's perspective, not the character's perspective, so there is no way to bury the point, it's all flags. From the reader's point of view, there is a lack of surprise 3. Perhaps because of the "historical narrative", the enemies are very dull, so the form of conflict or war is often that the enemy is strong but very traditional, the protagonist develops technology, the enemy enters the second stage/explodes blood/takes drugs/limits the protagonist's technology, the protagonist solves the problem, wins, and a cycle of new enemies. The enemy memory is very poor. The only one with a name in the whole story worth remembering is Prince Kong Dai. The rest can be summarized by the stereotype of feudal landlords, which also makes the overall main plot lack a sense of surprise

To be honest, this book has been on my bookshelf for a long time since I discovered it. I was influenced by the book friends in the comment area. I haven't read the book in the past two days and thought of giving it a try. The result is really good. I love reading it😁.

First, it can make civilians mildly infected with witch disease, thereby possessing magical power, and then they can use magic-driven guns and machinery Second, the protagonist's most powerful ability is debating. In a world with popes and angels, debating is really strong. You can take a closer look at the protagonist's debating with the pope supported by France, and the protagonist criticizing the former pope in the newspaper. It means that the protagonist has two super powers. One is called the weapon of criticism, and the other is called the weapon of criticism. Having these two abilities, no matter how tall or weak, is a kind of charm.

Introduction to King Daxi, the content behind the dog-licking nanny has serious spiritual tendencies

After reading the first ten chapters, I only saw an extremely weak plot. None of the various characters are in line with the actual situation. They are all forced and manipulated by the author into a clown show, and it is also a clumsy clown show. Some people say that the first part is not very good, but the rest is very exciting. Not everyone has the patience to experience the nausea in the front and the patience to see the back.

1. The painter of the Holy Armament Court is painting "Lord Jeanne in the Federation of Dawn Island", with Shengsun and Shilov on it. Passers-by asked, who is the man sitting next to Shengsun? The painter replied that she was Shilov, the dean of Holy Union College. Passers-by asked, what are they doing? Painters, discussing how to build a clockwork train. A passer-by asked in confusion, what about Sir Jeanne? The painter said that Your Excellency Jeanne is in the Dawn Island Federation. 2. In a cafe, one person asked another person, "Are you Cheka?" Another person replied, no. He asked again, were you before? The answer is no. He continued to ask, do you have any immediate family members working in the Cheka system? The other party replied, no. Finally, he asked the other person to move their feet because they were stepping on him. 3. In Hell, three people talked about why they went to Hell. Barneyforth: I support Prince Condé Duke Perjik: I oppose Prince Condé The third person said: I am Prince Condé. 4. The cardinal of the Holy Alliance and the vampire noble said that both sides are more powerful. The bishop said that our saint grandson can fly his head to form a body and use divine magic. The noble said that our Lilith can invite the Lord of Immortality to take over and drive the sea monster. The bishop said that if our holy grandson is resurrected, he can help us realize our dream of the kingdom of heaven. If your god comes, what can he do? The noble noble said that he could make us vampires come to your Holy Union overnight. 6. One day, old King Tommenggis, King Guinigis, and Regent Omes were making a carriage, but the carriage stopped moving. The old king said, let's go down and whip the horse, and the car will move. King Jiji said, why don't we kill the horse and eat the meat to reach the end. The Regent of Homes said, why don't we sit in the car and rock it twice, pretending that the car is still moving forward. 7. King Charles VIII announced that he would issue national debt. The Saints asked about its use. A Frenchman replied, "The royal family wants to eat the merchants alive again. It's a new excuse." 8. An old aristocratic soldier who was about to go to the battlefield was talking to an officer. The soldier "I heard that the Saints have clockwork muskets and cannons that can kill 100 people at once. Is there anything we can do against them?", The officer "We just had a hundred people."

Horn - Peasant Form Horn - Advent Form of the Holy Father Horn - Pope Form Jeanna Meliarty (Carrie) Silov

As a theme of medieval uprisings, this book has a relatively novel world view and solid basic skills in scene description and narration. However, the style has not yet been determined in the early stage. Some plot settings are still lacking. Some scenes are overly funny and easy to dissuade. However, when the plot progresses after a long journey of hard work, it gradually gets better. The important characters are well portrayed, such as Danji, Frick and other impressive characters. In the early stage, the protagonist's mentality is in a state of transformation, and some of his behaviors may not meet readers' expectations. However, after a long journey of hard work, a formal change will occur. Those who are patient can stick with it. When the comment was published, it had been updated to the plot of the Qiumu Island Departure and the Attack on Mayo Town. The development is exciting, but the update is too slow. There is another shortcoming, which is not necessarily a shortcoming. It is that there are too many characters, and it is easy to forget some Western names. When someone comes up, I always wonder who this person is for a long time (?). It may also be due to the reason of re-reading and not having a deep impression of some characters. (If the author updates it soon, it won't be like this. Jpg)

The plot is very dense and the characterization is very poor. First, Joan of Arc is portrayed as xxn, and then the protagonist is portrayed as a low-profile Hong Xiuquan, not even as good as Fang La. The hodgepodge of settings is both annoying and dispensable, and the book itself is even a low-profile "Let the Witch Go". It is rated as a book that can only be read by gold diggers in the niche Western fantasy genre of hegemony. As far as I am concerned, it is not a good book, but it can be if it suits my appetite.

It is recommended that 1,000 knight mechas come out when you hit the lord's castle.

The hand-drawn map still needs to be perfected and has not yet been marked to scale.

Frick (date of birth unknown, died on October 16, the first year of the Holy Calendar (Old Calendar 1444.10.16)), Was a native of Qianhe River Valley. Frick was a good drinker, a tactful man who could bring peace to troubled times, he was literate, and he had a wisdom that some of his fellow countrymen might not be able to match. Frick was a traveling minstrel when he was young. He sang and chanted poems and was very popular. Taste the Holy City, your poems are widely sung, and you can meet the Holy City. Unexpected events may occur, and he may be killed by bandits or bandits, his throat may fall into lacquer, and his fake son may also die. Later, he returned to plowing thousands of river valleys and no longer wandered around. At that time, there was a flood in the Qianqian River Valley, and people died of hunger everywhere. The pseudo-bishop Durdafo was unkind and lived in Qishi Valley, causing resentment among the villagers. Madeleine, a native of the country, rebelled, and Frick followed his change, expelled the puppet court, and welcomed the Holy Emperor, and the people survived. On September 19th of the first year of the Holy Calendar, Frick misunderstood the dress edict and repeated it to others, which triggered the Suimen incident. Fortunately, Madeleine had an idea and urgently asked Tang Li to protect the saint. The next day, the sage Sun Dazhao went to the Puppet Court to compete. On October 16th, Frick led a group of old men to cover the road to cover the road while racing, but died on the road. He left a poem saying: I have disabled my body, how can I regain my feelings? Concentrating your body like this, the pain from hard work will not change. The stings and sores are as old as before, and the stinging pain is not new. Also try to destroy them all and never see them again. Although I remember that I have it, I dare not speak out about it. The inscription on the tomb of Saint Sun Zhi reads: "This is where all the concubines of Qianhe River Valley were examined."

The previous mechanical design has been adopted by the author, so I will give a rough introduction to the structural design of the two. Preface: In the previous assumption, it was wrong to directly call it the ether solution (lunar mercury) for the conjecture about the magic solution. The author does not go into detail about the properties of the etheric solution. Nor is lunar mercury necessarily a magic solution. This is irresponsible for the design, so before the author identifies it, we will collectively call it the magic solution or simply the solution. The author has never referred to mana as magic energy, but mana is a kind of energy. To facilitate comparison with mechanical energy, elastic potential energy and other energies, we will temporarily call it magic energy. First, insert a picture for the magic energy generator As shown in the picture, it is basically a gear pump structure, driven by water power. When the orichalcum gear deforms and recovers, a small amount of magic power is dissolved in the solution. This is the property of orichalcum. It can be roughly understood that if the water is stirred vigorously, the water will become hot. During the working process of the pump, due to the increase in the dissolved amount of magic power, the orichalcum gear continues to soften. However, before the gear fails, the orichalcum detection valve will open due to the softening and release the high-concentration solution. The hydraulic circuit is very simple and everyone doesn't like to read it, so I will omit it here. As for the significance of this machine, the power source will not only come from hydraulic power, but hydraulic power will be used to produce magic solution. The solution is transported and used to drive the engine. Just like transporting gasoline. We can compare it to generators and transmission lines. The second is the magic engine The spring chamber and its ratchet Insert picture The spring chamber is configured in parallel and inserted on a main shaft. A clutch is used to transmit power. (Anyone who has driven a car should know this.) After the No. 1 Clockwork chamber is completely exhausted, push the clutch lever to the right, turn on the No. 2 Gear set, the gears will rotate, and the clockwork will be re-wound in the magic supply of the magic solution. The simplified diagram of the gear set is as shown in the picture (hand-drawn) Insert picture The spring barrel does not need to be replaced, just add the magic solution (add gasoline) The significance of this machine is that the power source will be away from the waterway, liberating productivity. It is no different than a steam engine in the real world. Trains and tanks can now run across the land. With these two machines, it is conceivable that the agricultural society in the novel will usher in a huge leap, and clockwork trains and clockwork tanks can be put on the agenda. But it all depends on the author's pace.