The Taoist in Uncle Jiu's World

... It's hard to explain in one sentence. The author seems to have some misunderstanding about dark literature. The protagonist of dark literature has always used all available people. He either ignores or abandons useless people. He is not a holy mother and has no compassion. He will save the weak and pleasing to the eye, in order to achieve some of his own goals, and then ignore them. The author is a newbie, so for this understanding, I suggest you take a look at Gu Zhenren. After all, the dark literature has always been a dark one. After the character design is laid out in the early stage, there should be all kinds of conspiracies, despicable methods, and all kinds of tricks. For example, Pingshan used Chen Yulou and others to seize six-winged centipedes, treasures and alchemy furnaces, and then used the Corpse King and Marshal Ma to trap and kill them, so that all the profits would belong to themselves. Then they used money to secretly cultivate their power and achieved the purpose of collecting medicinal materials. Let's talk about the exorcist Taoist passage. From the perspective of dark literature, what is there to be ashamed of? What's so ugly about your face? Since it is a dark novel, why do you want to do so much? You yourself said that you should be on your own. Since you are on your own, throw away the unnecessary emotions. Once you have made up your mind, don't be burdened by other emotions. Actually, author, you seem to have your own understanding of dark literature, but it is undeniable that your understanding seems to have fallen into some kind of misunderstanding. It is true that the protagonist of dark literature is not a pervert, but it is undeniable that the protagonist of dark literature must be selfish. You said this is a dark novel, but at least I did not see the selfish side of the protagonist, but rather he was somewhat upright and upright.

Author, if your subscriptions are not increasing, you have to blame yourself for not having a climax since you have been abusing the master, from the beginning to the end! Who told you to abuse the owner? It's strange that the subscription can increase! Both humans and ghosts are on show, only the protagonist is being beaten←_←The abuser is happy for a while, subscribe to the crematorium! I read novels to relax, not for torture! It's funny that just anyone can overwhelm the protagonist and beat him! The protagonist's cheats are not strong enough either, and he was tortured even if he tried to catch them! The protagonist should live in obscurity in the early stage, develop slowly, farm quietly, build high walls, accumulate grain widely, and slowly become king. The protagonist can become promiscuous in the middle and late stages!

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The world view of Zhengyue is quite large. It has destroyed the mysterious destiny of countless epochs. The perfect superhuman Pangu tribe, an eternal kingdom with the ability to create gods, the legendary human king who shot and killed the Nine Suns, and the Tathagata's Great Sun Tathagata Purifying Mantra, which allows people to travel through time and space. Avalokitesvara, as well as Rahu's secret method of annihilation, the five gods who protect the human race, the generals who can control time, the human Madonna Nuwa, the legendary tombkeeper Demon Star, the Madonna and Ksitigarbha who control the Book of the Earth and the Book of Man, Yaochi, and the immortal world that has never appeared.

The writing was too painful, and he was abused everywhere. The protagonist was abused in the early stage, the protagonist's power was abused in the middle stage, and the author was abused in the later stage.

I always like to wander around and almost get beaten to death. I won't watch it anymore. It's boring.

Why does it get more and more uncomfortable the more I watch it? 😅 Everywhere I go, there are women cheating on me, and they have to calmly pretend to be cool in front of them. . . .

How should I put it, in order to promote the plot and forcefully control the rhythm, every time I feel that I can survive, I will force myself to commit suicide, force the old man to commit suicide. The writing style needs to be strengthened, and the plot twist is too blunt. I hope the author can see it. Hey, I really like reading this kind of subject matter, and I hope the author can write better and better. It's a bit toxic, but you can see it.

🙂 It's useless to set 500 points. You should say it anyway. You are acting like a critic. Mrs. He and the little beggar are weak, and there is not enough foreshadowing behind them to be awkward. There was not enough preparation. Mrs. He was caught and rushed to save people. When the little beggar died, she said she was murderous. . . I can barely accept it. The explosive point is the description of the battle. It's enough for you to save people and say a few words to calm your mood. There are two pages of dialogue with Mrs. He in one page, and you also have to chat a lot with the enemy. Do you stop and stop during the battle? As long as the dialogue is more streamlined, it will be acceptable. In addition, the writing style is just average. The battle scenes should either be simplified or more work should be put into other areas. . . I was embarrassed by the battle scenes💀

There are too many flaws. How can a beggar buy a mule with his savings? The gangster actually brought gold bars? I don't want to talk about anything else. Just opening the chapter with these two points is a failure.