Extraordinary Voyage

After reading more than 100 chapters, I feel like it's not good enough. First of all, I feel that the protagonist's improvement in strength is too slow. Secondly, writing about wizards is very complicated and confusing. I originally wanted to see you on your sailing adventure, but it always ended up involving other things.

The content is good. As we all know, the end of reading is reading fun stories. Although I don't agree with it very much, all the plots in the fun stories in this book have been fucking removed. Although everyone knows what the section is? But to put it bluntly I want to see that I don't understand. Why remove it? Just skip it. Originally this book was relatively slow. Finally, I felt a little bit refreshed. I skipped it again, which is very annoying, you know.

This is an imaginary novel that combines wizard, clergy, and scientific backgrounds. The background of the story is roughly similar to the first industrial revolution to the second world war. The rules of the world are about to change, and the evil god intends to subvert the world to protect himself. It tells how the protagonist grows up in this world and eventually becomes the master of the planet. In this process, the shadow of the real world is shown. If you are interested, you can come in and take a look. It is definitely worth the money. I can give this book 9.5 Points

Damn, the writing is really beautiful. I haven't seen such a favorite work in a long time.

Generally speaking, sometimes he talks about joining the army, and sometimes he talks about knowledge. It's just all kinds of narratives, ordinary and boring.

It's not the voyage I want to watch. Too many mythological elements have been added into it, and it's too confusing.

Just average! The subject matter and the plot have a paradoxical feel. I seem to have read it somewhere, but it is too bland. I didn't find the main plot of the protagonist. It's quite boring.

This is a book that has merits, but also has problems. The advantage is that it is outstanding in the Western fantasy genre. It no longer uses ice magic and fire magic, which is a big improvement. The imagination is okay and I can read it in the early stages. Disadvantages... 1. The author did not control the main plot well and did not do a good job in allocating the focus of the plot. In general, if a novel wants to attract readers to continue reading, large chapters are necessary. A large chapter is a big event. No matter how many small events are interspersed in the middle, it must be centered around the big event, rather than a hammer and a stick here and there. There is no clear goal, so it is easy to lose the freshness of reading. 2. I personally feel that some details are very underpriced. For example, it was said that the protagonist makes money easily, but in the end, a group of Kalami's three melons and two dates, and their booger-sized belongings are all thinking about it. It's like a billionaire picking up bottles for just a few cents. It's very strange. The second thing is that the worldview of the Middle Ages and the worldview of the first industrial revolution coexisted at the same time, with bows, arrows, shields, plate armor, and sniper rifles and penicillins, OMG. What's more, during the first evil god's arrival event, the top transcendent turned invisible. That's right, a group of the strongest people actually acted as the audience, watching the protagonist fill the cup alone. It seemed that the world would not turn around without the protagonist. 3. The author wants to write about a transcendent worldview like "Lord of Mysteries", but it can be seen that the author has not accumulated enough occult materials, or that the worldview constructed by the author is still incomplete, so that there are some logical loopholes. If the circle cannot be returned (or the circle has not been thought about), it presents a strange and awkward feeling, which makes people wonder whether this is the 12th century, the 18th century, or the 21st century. Of course, you can still feel good if you throw away your brain. After all, you became a lieutenant commander at the age of 15, and you have to wonder whether it feels good to be surrounded by all the strong men. This is my reading experience after reading more than 140 chapters. I have been forcing myself to read the entire book before rating it, but I am really numb. I am afraid that I will not be able to persevere, so I can only comment first. If there are changes later, I will continue to add.

The author has a wide range of knowledge

It looks better in the early and middle stages