Rebirth of the Dominator

If you come from a low-dimensional game, please raise your hand.

After these chapters, I really realized a problem. In fact, there is a difference between what the author wants to express and what the readers understand. I always believe that readers can put forward their own ideas, but they cannot teach the author how to write. This will affect the rhythm of the article. I support the author here and sincerely hope that the author's level will get better and better, and this situation will continue to decrease in the future_(:з∠)_

Rational discussion, Lin Shu did something so outrageous that so many people want her to die. She didn't fall behind when she should stand up for the country. Because of the importance of the Sanyangguan elixir, they were directly locked with their own hands when they were sent to each other. The person was half-dead after being bombed and his hand was cut off. She also tried her best to stop the monster created by the alien scroll. I was puzzled when I read the description of this chapter about seeking death. That monster has a passive skill. , If you don't fight him, he will also freeze the city. How can she say that she is seeking death if she stops it from the perspective of the country? The reason for not entering the mountain and sea realm is because the country does not have extraordinary people in the early stage and needs someone to take charge. If there are three people abroad who can take charge, the country will send her there. After that, she will also contribute to the country's exploration of the mountain and sea realm. There is no description, but it is not without danger, so why does she become nothing?

I wanted to say it very early on, what totems, incense artifacts, they look powerful, but they actually tie ordinary people into chariots. Once a war breaks out, the enemy will definitely use weapons of mass destruction to reduce your source of telekinesis, and a massacre will be inevitable.

The rest of this book is fine, except why after cultivating an immortal you have to kneel down and down, so what kind of immortality do you still have to cultivate? It would be better not to become an immortal. If you don't become an immortal, everyone will be aloof. After becoming an immortal, it seems like your kneecaps will be gone.

I said why do low-dimensional people like to read it? I just like to read it. I didn't subscribe to this book. It turned out that I was disgusted by the plot with Wang Hao at the beginning. I really deserved the poor performance of this book.

It's so disgusting to watch. The Eastern Monk is powerful, has many opportunities, and the protagonist is very contradictory.

Looking at the dozens of chapters so far, it seems that the pattern is very small. The author describes controlling a time and space, which should be the earth. However, the events all happened in the protagonist's city, so the pattern seems to be very small.

The government took the initiative to attack and didn't fight back. It's been like this several times. It's poisonous, right?

After reading more than 300 chapters, I found that the controversy about Lin Shu has never stopped. To be honest, I don't like the character Lin Shu either. It has nothing to do with the so-called haters or G. It's purely from the perspective of character setting Compared with other characters, Lin Shu doesn't have anything particularly outstanding, but from the beginning of the book to the present, she has always been almost in the first echelon, a first-line master, only a little worse than one or two of the protagonists. However, from the book, I didn't feel her efforts and advantages compared to others. It gave people the feeling that the author kept giving her preferential treatment. Especially when he was three to four, Qingyang, as the first person to enter the mountains and seas, was among the group with the strongest Taoist heart, strength and opportunity, but he failed and died. Zhang Heming was also one of the first people to cultivate. He failed to advance to the fourth level and entered Shinto. These two people were no worse than Lin Shu. They both failed in getting promoted to the fourth grade, and then Lin Shu succeeded easily. Originally, the first two were supposed to be that the author wanted to show the difficulty of cultivation and the dangers on the road, but Lin Shu succeeded in making people unaware of the reason. In fact, the author described Lin Shu a lot in the early stage. His identity should be laid out and he should be an important supporting role later. Perhaps because the readers are more disgusted, the length of the later chapters was reduced. But the reduced length does not mean that she has disappeared. From the previous descriptions and speculations, Lin Shu has been remembered by readers, and she will be easily compared when something happens. Moreover, the reduced length of the following pages means that readers cannot feel her efforts and advantages, and she appears to be very mediocre in comparison. But other important supporting characters with talent, opportunity, and perseverance all failed. Lin Shu, a very ordinary supporting character, suddenly succeeded, which will be difficult for readers who like other supporting characters to accept. Compared with other characters, Lin Shu has nothing outstanding. She did not create her own martial arts or corpse exorcism like Lu Wu and Ma Ji, but just followed the sword immortal inheritance of her predecessors. She also does not have the courage and perseverance of Qingyang and Jia Yi who were the first to break into the mountains and seas. It is even said that she is not as profound as Taoist Taoist Qingyun's paranoid Taoism in seeking a breakthrough and massacring his entire family. But she succeeded. Maybe the author didn't pay attention to some details and thought it would be enough to reduce her length and make her appear less. But instead, it gave me the feeling that she succeeded without doing anything. ps: After all, the author's book is to make money. If the character in his novel is decent but not liked by most people, it will be considered a failure at least from a commercial perspective. It is suggested that the author caters to the preferences of most readers and makes money to make a living, not shabby.