My Undead Are Acting Weird

Bro, if you really can't do it, try writing a story without a female lead. Specifically regarding the romance scenes. To be honest, eroticism is a rather cliché literary concept in romance stories... And even your bedroom interactions lack that erotic feel. It's not a big problem if the romance isn't well-written, but your text is all about strong character development.

Some things I originally planned to say in the launch message, but with the recent smart promotion and a lot of new readers, I'll say them now to avoid misunderstandings. 1. I'm definitely not a newbie; I've published books on this site before. Double-digit initial subscriptions, 300 average subscriptions, but it was successfully completed. I won't mention the embarrassing parts of my past.

This style is quite interesting, light and enjoyable. It resonates with some players. However, I think the book's problems will fully surface around chapter 100. First, the main and supporting characters are indistinguishable. There are too many skeletons; the dialogue and descriptions are almost overshadowing the protagonist. The protagonist's personality is blurred.

I can't keep up; this drawn-out, tedious writing is just pointless. The fact that Yuanling is both dead and alive is just a setting; it could be glossed over in a short time. It's not like we're actually writing code or programming. Are readers really interested in this? It's over 170 chapters and we still haven't left the beginner's area.

Keep it up, big brother who writes books!

Shennong clarifies: the book is very good. Its biggest selling point is the banter and interaction between players (in my personal opinion). As for the so-called "yaoi/BL (Boys' Love) plot" mentioned in the comments, that's just the author creating different character settings for the female supporting characters to portray different player personalities. There isn't a single ambiguous scene between male characters in the book, so you can read it without worry.

The plot has been a bit bland lately; honestly, I prefer the skeleton interactions.

If you like the "Fourth Calamity" game, please skip this. This isn't about summoning players; it's about a transmigrator summoning other transmigrators, with the addition of game players being summoned to the game world. Aside from the background story, it has absolutely nothing to do with the game. The summoned game players are transmigrators. I'm curious what their professions are.

Can anyone, like Shennong, tell me about the difference between grains, hay, and poisonous weeds?

The dialogue between the skeletons has a strong feel to the transmigration online game novels I read in my early years. The protagonist's responses are also good. I sincerely hope that such a good book can be written to several million words and then be completed.