The Demon Hunter's Nightmare Carriage

This book is actually quite good. The key is not to read it in short, fragmented sections, otherwise it will feel very confusing. Just read from the first chapter to chapter fifteen in a row; it's a short description of the plot, and you'll understand it if you read it all at once. If you still don't understand, then your comprehension skills might be a bit lacking.

What's wrong with this book? It was written really well before, but since it was released, it's completely gone off the rails. I feel cheated. Unless there's a major plot twist later on, I guess I'll have to say goodbye.

When I saw that after being trapped for more than twenty days, the first thing that came to mind when the carriage arrived was women and long legs, I could only laugh.

A good book, a really good book. It's good enough to be nourishing; with a little more effort from the author, it could become a masterpiece.

Some plot points are nonsensical, and the author giving the protagonist a father feels like an added insult to injury for the readers.

I regretted subscribing to twenty chapters. It's pretty mediocre. The main setting is somewhat interesting, but there are just too many flaws in the writing. A chapter is filled with cheap, low-brow jokes and clichés, and the key is that they're all low-level smut, like something a middle schooler would write... I don't understand what the author is getting so worked up about.

I quite liked the novel, but many of the lewd jokes made me, a girl, feel disgusted. It unnecessarily lowered the novel's quality, and I really couldn't stand it.

Ugh, forgive me, I don't understand. The transitions are so weird. It starts with the predicament in the snowstorm, then a cheat appears, he takes a bite of an apple, and suddenly the scene shifts to a dilapidated carriage. What's the meaning of this? Is that cycle of predicament some kind of mental world? Then we enter the manor, inexplicably complete a dungeon, learn about the extraordinary, and then the storyline about saving his father begins… It all feels so strange, I don't understand…

The spatial transitions are written very awkwardly and are quite confusing. Oh well, the author can judge for himself.

I was writing it when I realized it was a book I had abandoned before. Why did you abandon it? It keeps using outdated tropes, like "Straw Man Town," and even asked if "grass" is a verb. Why are you using Chinese in a Western fantasy world? I wanted to make people laugh, but no one laughed; instead, I felt out of place. Seriously, there will naturally be people promoting this book. It's no wonder you're not popular; it's no wonder you flopped.