I Have an Evolution Point

Is this written by an "old author" who has several works? It doesn't look like it at all,

Alas, the author's writing is very good. I feel sorry for you 😭

Damn, come on, don't be a eunuch again, keep updating and you'll win.

It's a bit incomprehensible and messy, a bit like the story Fenghuo wrote back then.

After reading almost 100 chapters, the protagonist is still being hunted. He finally helped the countess a big favor, but ended up pretending to take a few things. Needless to say, the disgusting side effects were loss of memory, and now the intelligence has appeared. This is the first time that I have seen the effect of intelligence on the protagonist. The author's plot is not satisfying for readers. Do you still want to recommend it? What are you thinking about? I would rather the daily recommendation votes disappear than never vote!

Shennong is here. 1. After reading forty or fifty chapters, the biggest feeling I felt was that the content was watery, and it was extremely watery. 2. There are many plots in it that can be said to insult people's IQ, such as various exposures, various forced pursuits, and various deaths. The protagonist talks from his heart, but he clearly wants to die and still forces himself not to die. It is completely like the protagonist's aura is awesome, and then he is blasted, which is a crazy insult to people's IQ. 3. The most speechless thing is that the plot is very embarrassing. To promote the plot, it is to force the super boss to chase the protagonist directly. After all, it is all in my mind after watching it? ? ? ? ? 4. The golden finger is too strong. To be honest, this kind of golden finger is too strong in a power system like potion. As a result, the author also made the protagonist so useless. Anyway, I have nothing to say. Summary: The plug-in is too powerful. It should be invincible, but it turns out to be a stray dog.

The creativity is average, there are many books of the same type.

I have always been a loyal reader of Gemstone, and finally a new book is out

In Chapter 4, you are advised to quit. At the beginning, you can choose to evolve the magic mirror, which is an active skill. As a result, the next chapter will become a passive skill, and whatever it touches will evolve? ? ? ? ? A lot of book authors give wit to supporting characters, but this is different. The author gives wit to the protagonist at the beginning! He is worthy of being a "great god"!

The setting is like a god, the plot is like a pig, and it is too deliberately showing some things and psychological descriptions that should not be shown. I have not seen ten chapters so far, and it has successfully persuaded a large number of people to leave.

I guess the author is gone. It feels like the editor has kicked the author out and found someone to write for him.

Is this also a great god? Drawing on the mysterious potion system, the writing is nondescript. If I write a cool article, the ink will look like this. The gunman's name was revealed, and he was shot online?

A Westerner in a fantasy novel must have a domestic name, and novels set in the West should not be anything special. All the characters have a Western name, and the protagonist also has a Western name, especially Qin Nan. Otherwise, don't write a novel set in the West. I don't understand why some authors clearly write that the Western is set in the whole country. Some people say that they like the main character to use the country's name, but if you don't like it, don't read this kind of novel. Fantasy novels often have such names. This book is based on this background. I hope the protagonist's name will be changed to Qin Nan.

I thought it was good at first, but then every item had side effects and I lost interest. Finally, except for the beginning, the protagonist was either being hunted or on the run, and I lost interest at all. Goodbye

It turns out to be the author of Zhanzhanka, no wonder it's so poisonous! Farewell

The writing is very good, but I feel tired after reading it. I don't want to feel refreshed, but I want to not feel tired. Infinite evolution, infinite pursuit, low level, and mental scum. Items are magical and have many functions. Once you travel through time, you will be hunted down. I don't know why, but I'm confused. It's better to delete it to avoid feeling tired.

I just read about 30 chapters and summarized it: IQ: -90% Routine: the old batch Plot: mediocre Power system: the chaotic batch I know my posts will definitely be deleted, but if 13 of these 20 posts are negative, this book and your account are definitely over. The level of a great writer, haha, is not as good as someone else's level 2 or 3 In short, I read it in a confused way, with a max-level routine Book friends, eat with caution, it is highly poisonous! ! ! Farewell (never see you again)

This writing style? That's it? What villain said: I'm so scared. Protagonist: You... Don't come over! I can write this kind of thing. Am I the god? You are not required to work side by side with the secrets. At least you should not be too clever. This kind of novel of intellectual battles should be extremely rigorous when fighting! I think the sunglasses are a side effect, but the writing is so white and watery, isn't it poisonous?

Just look at the books he wrote before and you will know that they are completely following the trend of the times. They have no own style and the settings are not perfect. I didn't think it was too poisonous when I read it at the time. Now I read it. It's not a classic work, it's too easy for this great god to seal it.

Life is already very difficult. I read books to soothe my mood. This book is very depressing, and it is inexplicably depressing. Why the protagonist is being hunted is not explained clearly. The magic mirror is just for the number of words. Every time I read the magic mirror, I jump to read it. The logic is also unclear. It's very bad. A demigod chasing a protagonist who is stronger than a mortal can be killed in reverse. The side effects of the props are probably the author's attempt to prevent the protagonist from being too strong. But even without the side effects, the protagonist feels like a scumbag. If you, the author, wrote this book to make money, it has probably failed. I will not give at least a recommendation vote.

Although you wanted to write something funny, you really didn't hit the mark, especially the magic mirror, which makes people irritated just by looking at it.

Just like before, it must be a eunuch 🤭

What's the reason? The king wants to kill a fallen nobleman? For no reason! Baffling! Qin Nan has been on the run!

The great master has regressed too much. Is it possible to write a book that is completely plagiarized? I suggest you adjust your mentality and start a new book after a while.

I don't know how this author got the great label 😰

I haven't read Mao Da's novels for a long time, because Quan Xiong has been paying attention to Mao Da's situation. I just read the book review and wanted to say a few words of conscience. In the book review, you said that the writing was not good, but you all said it was a trainee, and you still said it was bad for free prostitution. An analogy to reality is that your family owns a restaurant, eats your food for free, and yells at the door that your food is not delicious. You are so embarrassed, why bother? In addition, I would like to say something to Mao Da: Mao Da, I really want to see you write officialdom novels. The current environment does not allow writing officialdom novels, but can you change the background and write it in an interstellar or ancient background? (Of course, this is just an expectation of mine. The specificity depends on Mao Da himself. After all, in today's society, life is so helpless sometimes!)

It was so frustrating to watch, such a strong Goldfinger, the protagonist is such a noob, it didn't feel exciting at all.

Rubbish, the preface does not match the subtitles! ! ! !

Can't the formula of a magic potion be copied, and the formula will be gone after it is used? Why is the formula so lacking? It is understandable that there is a lack of magic potion.

I couldn't stand it after reading more than a dozen chapters at the beginning. Your first evolution of a magic mirror was okay, but your second evolution of a pen? There are already ghosts. If you evolve a pen, can this pen kill ghosts or do other things? At first I thought he was going to evolve the sword on the wall, but...