The Fruits of Slaughter

This book has the potential to become a god before leaving Luoyang. But after leaving Luoyang, it started to deviate from the topic. The folklore, horror, and suspense elements that were originally amazing and clearly carefully researched all disappeared. It turned into vulgar dragon energy, willpower, and hegemony. I'm very disappointed. I don't know what the author thought. I can only say it's a pity.

I just want to say that the author has a problem. In the plot, adult men and children were killed, and the protagonist did not come out to save them. The next second he saw a woman about to be raped, the protagonist immediately jumped out to save people! I just want to ask the author, is your justice limited to adult women only? ? ?

Taoist priests cannibalize people, weird cannibalism, nobles cannibalize people, the Dragon Qi Law is only forbidden inside the city, there is not enough productivity outside, why are there so many people?

After looking at it, I see that it is just like Chang Sheng Yi Zhi, driving high and moving low. The previous ones are all about cultivating immortals, and after joining the world, they save the country and the people. It seems very contradictory. It is better to turn over the table after cultivating to become the Yin Emperor.

It would be better if the author writes less about female characters. The female characters in these two chapters are really not very good. First of all, cousin Huang Xiaowu's writing is too explicit, full of the author's own obscenity. And the character of Tao Xianniang is a bone-sucking villain from the beginning. I wonder why the author is so ambiguous? You shouldn't be ambiguous! The reason why many people are opposed to emotional dramas is that many authors do not understand emotional dramas and do not grasp them well, which really affects reading and makes the plots awkward and poisonous. Although the author is not to that extent, I still recommend being careful when writing female characters, otherwise they will become poisonous sooner or later.

I came here for fishing. I read more than ten chapters without the perspective of a fisherman. They were all about the protagonist falling into some kind of conspiracy, pretending to be a fool and pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. I was very disappointed. I felt like I was fished.

The writing is very good, but we, the elderly bookworms, are too tired to read it. The original Cthulhu system is very confusing, and this combined Chinese and foreign power system is even more confusing, unreasonable and imprecise. In addition, the assumption that knowledge is the source of all evil and chaos has been reactionary and absurd since its inception. Isn't this what the West is promoting now?

I feel like there is a bug in the world view in the book First Humanity Strength, the world in the book is the cosmology of the planet, not the round sky and the earth, and there are three emperors, five emperors and hundreds of schools of thought, so it is not a pure alien world, so it should roughly correspond to the earth. So besides Asia, where Chixian Shenzhou is located, there should be other continents, right? ? For example, what about their real-life European counterparts? What about Africa? Only people and dynasties from Asia and its surrounding areas appear in the book. Is this all the strength of humanity? If the sky is round and the earth is round, then it can be said that these are the only ones, but you have said it is a planet several times. As for the people and kingdoms of other civilizations, I have never seen it written that the entire planet is only the Chinese civilization The size of the second empire, the size of the empire inside is unreasonable. It can be said that the agricultural empire in ordinary history has the limit of the extreme wall of the empire and cannot expand too much (it cannot send troops to solve it in three months if it is too big, it cannot be digested, and it cannot be ruled), but there are extraordinary beings. I am not surprised that all planets the same size as the earth are within the scope of rule. Even if there is a Dragon Qi Law to suppress Taoism, the message transmission cannot be too slow. It should be transmitted within three days, and the marching speed cannot be thirty or forty miles a day. After all, they are inhuman Tao soldiers, so the scope of their rule cannot be small. The third output is too small and does not expand. The book says that the output is less than the input, so it stops expanding. But it is the same as the first point. The land in Asan can grow three crops a year, and the plains of millions of miles in Eastern Europe and Africa can have abundant output. If we say that it is like a history without extraordinary ability, it can be said that we have no ability to explore, but this is a magical world where you can fly to the sky and escape from the earth. Ah, according to the description in the book, it can be seen that it is the same size as the real earth, so it is impossible not to explore the whole world. Even if the yellow seal script is not good, then the green seal script and the purple seal script can definitely be done, but so far, these have not been written in the book. At its peak, it was powerful, and there were places that could be explored to produce rich output. Even though there were weird things, killing trees, etc., At its peak, it was suppressed by the Dragon Qi Law, and there were tens of millions of inhumane soldiers. The Taoist soldiers would not be suppressed, so I really can't figure out why the size of the empire is almost as big as in real history? Why didn't you go out? Taking up all the good places on the planet, the dragon energy produced by this volume is no more than countless times that of the Shenzhou in Chi County. Therefore, the output of the agricultural empire mentioned in the book is limited, but it is not in line with the output of the extraordinary world. So what do Jiu Bing think? Can't you see such a method that is obviously beneficial to improving dragon energy and humane strength? ? ? So it was very uncomfortable when I watched it. Putting the extraordinary world into the ordinary world framework makes people feel very contradictory.

In so many years, this is the only book I have seen where he killed an entire clan for himself. At most, they are orphans at the starting point, and they cannot accept it. . .

Discuss Yu Lei's character and plot, and seek to improve it by the way. First of all, the reason is because the author said that he plans to rely on the book of life and death to become the emperor of Yama, and then he thought of this. After all, Yu Lei himself is also the leader of the white tiger (it happens that the protagonist has the elements of the white tiger and the underworld) and the source is ancient enough. It belongs to the same period as Zhulong and Queen Mother of the West. (And this is one of the earliest mythological records about the white tiger; the tiger eats ghosts. I personally think that this should be the white tiger, one of the four spirits in the Han Dynasty and later, and the tiger is one of the sources of the myth that the tiger can arrest the ghosts) Shen Tu/Yu Lei are relatively unpopular gods, and are generally considered to be door gods. However, the origins of these two are actually very high. To what extent? I personally thought that there would be no problem in wrestling with the Queen Mother of the West. First, compare the two (The Classic of Mountains and Seas/Pre-Qin/Chu Land/Ancient times, not involving later Taoist myths and Ming and Qing myths): The Queen Mother of the West Position: Si Tianzhili and Wucan. (Disasters and the Five Punishments) Mythological events: Helping the Yellow Emperor to conquer Chiyou, Hou Yi seeking the elixir of death, Emperor Mu visiting the Yaochi. The spiritual root of the sacred mountain: Kunlun Mountain/Immortal Tree Leadership: all the female fairies, hundreds of beasts, and hundreds of birds Shen Tu/Yu Lei Position: the main ghost gate leads all ghosts Mythological event: the Yellow Emperor makes a ceremony To expel ghosts The spiritual root of the sacred mountain: Dushuo Mountain/Big Peach Tree Leadership: Ten Thousand Ghosts, Golden Rooster Compared with the Classic of Mountains and Seas, the latter does not have as many events as the former, but the latter's records are more majestic than the former. In addition, if we only talk about ancient mythology, we cannot avoid the fact that death was regarded as life as much as before the Han Dynasty, and it is clearly recorded that the dead gods and the ghosts and gods whose births were recorded after death are among the ten thousand ghosts. ps. As for the Great God Houtu, although her status is higher than that of the Queen Mother of the West, her appearance is recorded later. She was first seen in Chu mythology records as the son of Gonggong, a descendant of Emperor Yan, and there is no element that can be directly related to the protagonist. So I didn't consider it. Furthermore, isn't it true that the older the mythology, the higher the level, and the easier it is to fill in the content? 😏