Heavenly Mage

I have read more than 300 chapters so far. Let me comment on the protagonist. How should I put it? To me, this protagonist is more like the protagonist of the fantasy stallion novel ten years ago. He falls in love with every one he meets. There are a lot of heroines, and all of them must have beautiful faces. Also, before these female characters meet the protagonist, they are portrayed as if they have independent souls. After meeting the protagonist, they immediately become intelligent, as if they cannot live without the protagonist. What other superiors are there? You must know that as long as you are in a civilized society, and in a world with extraordinary power, no matter how hard the superiors pull their hips, they will not even understand the most basic ways of serving their subordinates. Look at this Duke, he is just like the two hundred and fifty who don't understand anything. The subordinates will become lame after being fooled. Although it is said that strength is paramount in this world, the formation of a civilized society cannot rely entirely on strength. One can conquer the world on horseback, but there is no one who can rule the world on horseback. And these big shots basically rely on strength to rule those below, without using any scheming at all. I don't understand. No matter how a duke can't understand people, he is still a duke, not an ordinary person who suddenly gains power. And even an ordinary person, if he has been in that position for a long time, even a pig can have some experience. This is good, it depends entirely on the protagonist to solve all kinds of troubles. Not only does he have a large harem, but he is also blessed with destiny. It seems that the world cannot survive without the protagonist. The first few pictures were pretty good, but why have my hips become more and more stretched since I met a woman? It says it's for magic, but it's just looking for a woman. As soon as a woman encounters something, her heart immediately softens. Those decades on earth were in vain. She said she wouldn't let go of the sheep in her heart, but she didn't let them out and just broke the sheepfold. All I can say is—— You can read the opening dozen or so movies with your brain, but at most you can give up most of your brain by the time you subscribe. After all, this is a standard fantasy harem pretentious template novel.

Start digressing from chapter 30💩, it's a waste of time

I've read about 140 or 50 chapters, and I'll tell you what I think. The author who wrote the opening is very smart and knows how to advance and retreat. Then when I wrote chapters 30-50, I had some new ideas, but after chapter 50, I felt that the plot was very, very dull, and it didn't make people feel bright at first sight. It felt like you could see the whole story at a glance. Also, I saw that in chapter 150, the protagonists had three women. According to the author's way of writing, I guess there is still one more to come. The protagonist is still a 15-year-old child. How did the author do it? Is it possible that he forgot how old the protagonist is while writing? I don't know if so many women are responding to requests from some readers or if they want to write this way themselves. Summary: The plot is okay in the early stage, and then gradually becomes dull, without any poisonous points. It is a novel that you can read and will not make you die from poison. If you like harem stories, you can read this book. If you have high requirements for the plot, you can withdraw it.

I have read Chapter 118, and it can be considered a good time-travel fantasy novel. Although it has Goldfinger, it is only used as a supplement. The article describes more about the interaction between the protagonist and various characters, and the collision of world historical events. However, when trying to integrate the protagonist into history, there is always a feeling that it is too smooth, and the detailed description and branch lines are slightly insufficient. It is even more short-handed when fighting in about 100 chapters. It is basically based on supporting characters and various surprises from the perspective of passers-by. It is recommended to add various adventures and thrilling scenes to increase the readability. In addition, the emotional lines between men and women are too complex and suggestive. Although it can satisfy the sexual interest of some readers, it ultimately lacks grandeur, which will also affect the overall plot arrangement over time. At present, the overall plot is quite stable. I also hope that the author will go further in the future and be more detailed in the character interaction. I hope the writing will get better and better.

This book is not bad, at least it is much better than many novice and brainless texts. Between grain grass and grass jelly. The book is spiritual and colorful, but it's just a bit too much driving. It squeezes out the expression space of other connotations... In a world with gods in such a setting, even if the protagonist has a lot of ambitions, the complex is too compact... It was fun to read at first, but I always felt that something was missing... For the same plot, if the time span could be extended several times, it would be better if there was less love between children, and more of the growth process, instead of being a simple novel

The author has written many Western fantasy and magic books. It would be great if he could use a translator... It's a pity... The dialogues are too Chinese... I don't feel that way!

Haha

There is no doubt that this is a masterpiece. The author imagined the existence of a mana field based on the four major forces, and the protagonist, a scholar, deduced the mana field equations and analyzed the three energy levels and energy band gaps. The results are very consistent with physics. The imagination is very rich and exciting. In the novel, the ancient powers used super-quantum theory to build a "River Styx" in the center of the galaxy, which is a mana field generator. The combination of the mana field and the physical world creates a colorful world. However, for hundreds of thousands of years, with the struggle for the supreme god in the highest energy band, Wait, there are some malfunctions in the mana field generator, and the world is in danger. The protagonist travels back with the soul chip, studies the mana field equations, fights wits and courage with creatures from all walks of life, rises from the bottom, and finally becomes the ruler of all walks of life, the supreme god, and builds his own Styx. The author has in-depth knowledge and uses superb writing skills to vividly write a highly rigorous and imaginative pseudo-science fiction text. It is highly recommended for everyone to read.

Have you opened a new book? Please don't ever see a woman fuck a woman. You are now a grown-up, so it's time to finish writing about it. It's perfectly fine to write a book and become a god with your imagination and writing skills.

The book is well written, but I hope the author won't keep writing red lines. The part about having a relationship with my teacher made me sick.

I have already given up on this book The first part is very good, and the overall atmosphere is okay. But later on, she turns into a fucking stallion, and the writing changes. Where is the author's original intention, to fall in love with a beautiful woman when you see her? What age has it been, stallion books are out of date!

After reading the first hundred chapters, there is a question that I still can't figure out: What is the motivation for the mages, including the protagonist, to publish papers? The gravity paper at the beginning was simply groundbreaking in another world, but in the end, he was only given a few hundred gold, and the formal mage qualification examination cost 1,000 gold. What's the point of posting pictures for papers? It could have been used as my trump card, but it turned out to be almost free of charge. I plan to post calculus and related spells in the future. Bethune from another world? !

There are very few readable novels like this nowadays. They are creative and have new things. Others are imitating, mixing weird things, and plagiarizing. Most of them make me want to vomit after reading them. They are poorly written and have not written anything new. They are still ranked high. I really don't know what the ranking is based on.

Master Tongtian❌, ace social butterfly√, master duck king√

Come on

I gave up when the countess gave the protagonist a test. Although there was foreshadowing, the baron's daughter died, and there were problems in the mining area. It is very likely that the previous evil god incident will continue, but in the final analysis, the flavor of the routine is too strong. Although the routine is good, it is a bit uncomfortable to use it directly from a personal point of view. The protagonist agreed to the test without any subjective initiative. In my eyes, this is clearly a breakdown of the character. From the beginning, when the male protagonist faced the two mage mentors, he at least kept the trump card of resistance. In many aspects, he also acted in his own interests. However, up to this point, it seems that he has not considered the pros and cons of the current test, or he has considered it, but I can't read it. In general, I have started to lose my sense of expectation here. This is just my personal opinion. By the way, for other students who have also given up, what is the problem?

The female character Vivian is so ugh, I can't stand it anymore. She can even wake up the evil god and wash it off, just because she is a beautiful woman. It's disgusting.

The world setting and force are disproportionate. Does a mentor with such a high combat ability live in a dilapidated wooden house? Do spell casters need to care about reputation? Mortals dare to watch the excitement of the spell caster? The money you got from inventing a general direction gravity spell is not enough to buy a stone house worth 2k? If this is the reality, the spell caster will let the rulers know what cruelty is.

The writing of this case in Chapters 40-50 is too retarded. In a world with extraordinary power, people can be convicted and exonerated at will. What if you see the murderer? A bunch of extraordinary powers such as disguise, deformation, illusion, etc. Can do it... In addition, the methods of investigating the case make people want to roar Not to mention going back in time to see the past scenes, asking the deceased to speak, or checking the memory of the deceased. This shouldn't be difficult, right? In the end, a cult organization killed a few ordinary people, and also specifically targeted foreigners who had just entered the city. It also killed people secretly and framed them. It didn't look like a cult at all. Other cults, at least sell slaves and spread plagues, and at most sacrifice hundreds of thousands of people in a city They have a petty spirit and no structure at all

It looks good in the early stages, and the protagonist's IQ is online. I just feel more and more dependent on soft rice, and then bound by various interests. Although he has always emphasized the pursuit of the peak of magic, he still engages in the lord farming style all day long. This approach is understandable, after all, people always have to eat in time. But. . . The author must understand that the road to the true peak is always accompanied by loneliness, even despairing loneliness. There are not so many people throwing themselves into his arms, and there are not many wives and concubines or a bunch of lovers. There is only himself. Many times, before a crucial step is made, almost no one will be optimistic about it. More often than not, all the pressure of change must be borne by one person. Once he has borne it, the sea and the sky are vast. If he cannot bear it, he will naturally fail. If everything is smooth sailing with Pig's Feet, it will be "The Master of Tongtian" If there are major ups and downs (and the author can handle the plot smoothly), then it will really be the Master of Tongtian.

The flow of clones is actually nothing. The main reason is that the predecessor of this clone is refined and then goes to pick up girls in the next chapter. It is easy for people to react. If it is the protagonist's own clone, without previous life experience and soul residence, then there will not be so many book friends complaining.

Harem Story I don't like it and I'm leaving

Again, it is not recommended to write detective reasoning in the extraordinary world.

I feel that the author has too much private information and always uses a third perspective to express his thoughts in the article. I read a lot of novels, and I have a high receptivity to plots. However, every time I see the author bringing in private goods, I always feel a bit offended, and I feel a bit inexplicably resistant, which greatly affects the viewing experience. However, I personally still like this novel very much, and I just hope that the author will not include too much personal information by publishing this post.

The little spider who accepted Lilith was a little bit unacceptable. After all, she was fucked by the fat man in the front, and the protagonist knew it, but she accepted it later. It was a bit uncomfortable. On the contrary, I didn't think it mattered to the lady of the Nightingale Society.

It's not good-looking, it feels like Douluo Dalu. It's even worse. The heroine is even more important. This is the first time I've seen a female heroine. This book also has a plot similar to Master Luo's common sense theory, which is a secret wisdom plot, why you need magic power to cast spells, you will be weak without magic power, magic power is the road to extraordinary, and other nonsense literature.

The author has either evolved or changed the writing style and plot, but the heroine doesn't like it because her character is too slutty, although the heroine is just an embellishment of the book, or used to advance the plot. Let's wait for the next book. I don't quite understand why such an old author writes a Western fantasy harem novel and still makes such a mistake.

Those who like to read pure fantasy stories are best not to touch it. The free chapters are scam chapters for those who like pure fantasy stories. The quality of the free chapters is quite high, with not many poisonous points. It is a very typical old-school fantasy novel, and to a certain extent, it is not too plain or boring. It uses red lines to add a little color to the novel. It is relatively pure at this stage. But once the free chapters are over, the color becomes unscrupulous, and it starts to move towards the flavor of a novice color novel. The growth and shaping of the protagonist are replaced by a large number of colors, and the protagonist's ingredients become more and more complex. At this point, it is basically a novice novel of Long Aotian, or the same old novice novel with color.

Does this heroine have something? It doesn't matter to me as a moderator, but to have a heroine like this at Qidian...😄💧

It doesn't really matter if there are many female protagonists, but few of the protagonists are really motivated by feelings. Either they don't want to worry about the lower body, or they just think about the pros and cons of how much this woman can have on him.