A Medieval Mount & Blade Chronicle

The map of part of the southern continent of Neh is not accurate, so readers can have an impression.

This is not a cool article in the popular style. To be honest, I have seen some worlds with mounted slashing and pseudo-warhammer elements. This book is the first one I have ever seen that made me feel immersed. The excellent writing, through the character creation and description of the world background, made me start to understand the main character. There is a sense of expectation for the future of the character Although the protagonist is not a time traveler but has a golden finger to ride and chop, the cooperation between the two does not feel disharmonious at all in the author's writing Although the plot may seem a bit small to those who are used to the refreshing style of the general starting point online article. Abuse, I felt a little bit like this in the early days, but gradually I felt that maybe I hadn't read a book properly for a long time, so I was almost completely accustomed to the fast-paced fast food. In fact, the so-called abuse in the early stage was just the training of the young protagonist who was just right. He slowly lost his innocence and matured. But the image of the protagonist who never forgets his original intention gradually becomes fuller, which is something that ordinary online writers cannot do This is indeed a good book, if you are willing to experience it more carefully ps: I rarely praise a book so much, give me some praise, hehe

It is not impossible to have a native protagonist. The key is how to write the growth of the protagonist when the starting point is relatively low. For example, an uneducated farmer must have a narrow vision and a small-farmer mentality, and readers will definitely not be able to accept it. But if you are just a farmer, but you are far-sighted and courageous, that is unreasonable. So how to make Corleone grow up and become a qualified protagonist that conforms to Chinese thinking (there should be no foreign friends among readers) is a difficult point.

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The ideal author The real author

Name: Senas Race: Human Occupation: Necromancer Gender: Female Age: 20 Faction: Order Talent: Summon Death (Death with a Sickle) Prophecy (A metaphor for avoiding disasters in the past and future and changing destiny) Weapon: Queen's Scepter Treasure: Death Book (records the death magic of the multiverse) Artifact: Kingdom of Death (summoning troops and magic) Character: Dark-minded Wish: Want to be promoted to God of Death with the Kingdom of Death Image: A royal sister wearing a crown, pure white silver hair and a gothic black and white dress Introduction: The mysterious royal sister who masters the magic of death likes the male protagonist I want to follow him all the time {"NickName":"A House Mouse","UserId":230973930}

Wearing armor

Why did I finish the book so quickly, only to feel that the protagonist is about to take off? The gears of fate just turned like this, but the gears got stuck and disappeared 🙂

It feels good to read from the beginning, the plot is online, and the characters are vivid enough, which is really good. But these plots are still too abrupt recently, and it feels like a lot of them were ruined just to start the arena plot. Personally, one is that the treatment of the Blood Gang is too abrupt and too anticlimactic. The blood gang that the protagonist has been living and fighting for for several years has a sudden discovery of conscience, and finally ends up with an unprepared and sudden defection, which is really disappointing. In fact, I believe that most readers will feel that based on the protagonist's strength and status in the gang, let alone reorganizing the blood gang. After all, there will be a gladiatorial arena plot, but I believe it is not a problem to be prepared and separate the gangs. Furthermore, because he feels that he has been stained with too much innocent blood, he directly abandons his friends and teachers who have lived, fought and taught with him for several years, let alone revenge. Is this sentimental or heartless? Righteous or unjust? The second is that the protagonist, who has few enemies in the Borderlands, was subdued by an old mage who had just appeared for a chapter or two with a guard. It was a complete subduing of "fatal level", and at the same time, he did not even pay any price. Leaving aside the combat power settings, the plot seems very abrupt and shocking to read. From the beginning to the end, it feels like it was specially set up to make the protagonist a gladiator. Of course, it is "reasonable" for the powerful old mage to defeat the protagonist who just left the novice village, but since what happened, I believe that in the eyes of most readers, the mage and king's line of "repaying kindness with hatred" must have formed a gap. At present, it seems that even angering the princess is normal. I hope the author will not forget the anger in his heart and deal with it too calmly. After all, the person who caused you to lose your dignity, freedom, and wealth and become the lowest plaything "gladiator" would be a lifelong enemy for another person, let alone repaying kindness with revenge. Personal thoughts after reading this, you can refer to it. Good luck to the author.

Brothers, what happened? Why did it suddenly disappear?