The Transcendent Creed

Not bad, not bad! It has the potential to be a fire, so please give it a try!

The author's writing style is good and level, and he doesn't look like a newcomer.

I read the one that was blocked just now. . . . In the end, it depends on the law rather than the conscience of the capitalists.

I always feel that... The author has misunderstood the ancient army, especially the combat effectiveness of the late Qing army that you used. The most capable army in the late Qing Dynasty was Beiyang, and even Beiyang was much worse than the fighting will of even a small soldier who became a gangster in your book. There is a famous saying in the late Qing Dynasty, fleeing when you hear the wind is a bad courage, fleeing when you see the wind is a medium courage, and fleeing when you see the enemy is a superior courage. Although it is an adaptation, not a copy, and although it is a game reality, every time I see these low-level minions working hard, I feel... A sense of time travel, I don't know how to put it.

The author is definitely not a newbie, tell me what your previous book was, 😏😏 I want to read it

This theme is really good, but the most amazing thing is probably the background setting. The story was set in the late Qing Dynasty, an era when heroes emerged one after another, and it was also in a period when the new dynasty had not yet risen and the old dynasty had not yet fallen. There were too many things that could be told. I am looking forward to the appearance of big bosses such as Sun Wen and Song Jiaoren in the future. At the same time, the performance of Kang and Liang in the fictional world is also worth looking forward to. So far, the writing about the real world is quite good, especially the description of people's motivations. It can be seen that he is quite influenced by the leader. He has a bit of a murderous and decisive temperament, but he has a little more human warmth than the leader. The only problem is probably the part about the Blessed Land of the Earth God. The overall narrative is weak and the plot progress is slow. It feels much more delayed than before. I still suggest that the description of the battle should be more accurate and faster, so that the overall look and feel will be better. Having said so much, I'll give you some tips.

You finally live like a dove that updates every day.

Is the prose style... I can't read it? There are too many messy things! I just want to relax and enjoy myself by reading an article and a story! This feels like watching a New World TV series... I can't see it in the fog... There are so many good reviews. Is it because my cultural level is not good? Self doubt

Is the author so proud of the profession of trader? Although it doesn't affect my reading, I still want to complain about it

This book is okay. I'll get excited after reading 10 chapters. I just don't know why there are so few people reading it. . .