The Immortal Sword Pavilion

Being affectionate and righteous is not the Holy Mother. If you are a grown-up person, you just want to be a nanny for others. In less than ten chapters, you will be a nanny for two mortal kids. I'm afraid you will be a savior later and be a nanny for the mortals in the world Look at how old the author is, he is still at the age of middle school fantasy Don't say you haven't failed, even if you are the protagonist who has failed, he won't dare to play like you. When you meet someone who asks you for help, you wish you could be his parent and hold him in your hands, fearing that he will break it Why do you have that? Where does one have the confidence to be a savior? Just because you are a time traveler?

Spiritual roots or talent for cultivating immortals are a must! The world of immortality where everyone can cultivate has collapsed since the beginning! Because a world of immortality where everyone can cultivate immortality must be a world dominated by a family of immortality cultivators. Ordinary people have no future at all! Everyone can cultivate immortality, why should a family of immortal cultivators leave the resources for cultivating immortality to you ordinary cultivators? Wouldn't it be nice for someone to monopolize everything and use resources to destroy their own family members? Only with spiritual roots can the number of people in a family who can cultivate immortality be limited. Otherwise, if there are hundreds of thousands of families cultivating immortals and millions of mortals can cultivate immortality, how terrifying do you think it would be? Can ordinary people like you get even a little bit of resources?

Now when I read the novel, I can see the arrogance in each one of them! Each one of them is so violent that I wish the whole world would die at your hands. I think the author's style is already very good. Even the sun can't make everyone in the world like it. I really have good suggestions that the author can refer to. I don't care about the keyboard warrior at all.

I entered the game yesterday and watched the protagonist kill an evil cultivator, slay a monster python, and enter the Turtle Mountain. He had a vague demeanor of a sword cultivator who came and went with his sword. I thought it was well written. But from the beginning of building the foundation of the Five Elements Dao and understanding the Five Elements Sword Intent, I have been very doubtful about what the author wants to understand when he writes about Yuanying, Yuanshen, and Yangshen? A minor practitioner of Qi Refining is about to understand the meaning of the sword. I seem to have seen someone writing about the artistic conception of gold, the secret of evolved gold, the rules of evolved gold, and the origin of evolved gold many years ago 🤭 Then it starts with the fire-killing exercise. I really can't stand it. How many chapters did you write to kill a small fire exercise? Will I have to write 50 chapters to kill a foundation player in the future? Do you want to write 500 chapters of Killing Golden Pill? In my opinion, swordsmanship is about "being alone with a sword from the sky", rather than making a fuss and beating up a group of people. Finally, I think most people write sword cultivators just write the magic weapon as a sword, that is, a "sword-carrying magic cultivator." However, as of Chapter 150, the author does not seem to have taken drugs to increase his cultivation level except for flying beasts, and he has not taken out magic weapons or talismans to fight. This is worthy of encouragement.

A person's Xianxia is ultimately weak. Xiaoxian already has the system of this book. So, next, readers, have you thought about the fairy tale scenes, magic weapon skills, and plot narration that you yearn for? Those who are willing to participate can join in together and the choices will be appropriately arranged. Above, thank you! (This book was originally planned to be completed with more than one million copies. How much you can write in the future depends on the results. You still have to save some love to generate electricity for the next time.)

The reading quality of this book is seriously inconsistent with the ranking

It's a good book, there are no weak villains, and there's no plot about a girl kneeling on her knees. It's worth reading. In the early stage, the protagonist's combat power was not very high, and the fights were not interesting. Later, after practicing the five elements, he became awesome.

Nice! Come on, author! Is there a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, please let the author tell me in advance. I personally don't like having a female protagonist. She feels pure, detached and free, which is called cultivating immortality 😳😳

It's boring... The protagonist has a good character! But the main plot is not clear, the branch plots are not full, and even if you want to tell a story about slaying demons in a small town, you can't tell it well! It's inexplicable that the importance is confused! Don't ask for a golden finger, but you have to be clear about it, right? No! It needs to be humane, but you can't just say that you are sad when you create new lyrics because you don't know what it's like to be sad, right? There is a comment barrier, forcing me to subscribe to a chapter just to comment... Oh! The style is really good, especially the sentimental and righteous part! But there is something wrong with the overall design, I really can't stand it! I'm bored after reading so many words. I don't remember what you wrote and why you wrote it.

What does "seeking longevity" mean? ? At least take the introduction seriously.