A Wizard’s Journey

Chapter Ten, "Knowing Old Age" - Defeat!

Author, you previously wrote about six spiritual cores forming an octahedron, and how every three spells would combine to create a spell card. I thought this spell card was a combination and enhancement of those three spells, which made me guess how the spells would be combined and what kind of amazing effects they would have. Turns out, they're completely unrelated? Was it just eight cheat codes? 😅

This is the book with the most overpowered plot devices I've ever seen, bar none. 🙂 As a wizard, the most basic principle is equivalent exchange. What is the protagonist? He gets everything for free. Cheating Guide: 1. A common transmigration/rebirth cheat, plus having a top-tier cultivation technique and exceptional talent.

Author, I'm not trying to be mean, but you really need to manage your comment section. I painstakingly recommended this new author, and as soon as they enter the book, they see a bunch of negative reviews and leave. I'm not asking you to delete the negative reviews, but at least find a few positive ones, highlight them, and pin them to the top. Don't let people see negative reviews as soon as they enter the book and then leave. ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

How should I put it? The author said that he wrote this book after reading Mystery. Let's take Mystery as an example. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he regards himself as the patron saint of the world and cares about everything. So does Klein. However, the protagonist of this book is not as smart as Klein and is more greedy than Klein.

Simply put, in a novel, the story drives the plot, and the plot creates resonance. This novel feels like it's losing its focus; it's full of settings and cheat codes, but the plot is so weak it's almost invisible. It's like wearing dazzling clothes on an incredibly ugly woman—it's very awkward.

I only read the first two chapters, and all I can say is: it's a bit tiring to read. It's just a background story, but a whole bunch of narration goes on and on explaining it.

This novel is truly speechless! There's hardly any plot! It's all about setting up the premise. I've read 36 chapters, and at least 10 of them are just setting up. There are too many overpowered abilities; it's utterly uninteresting! It's practically pure fantasy! The power system is incredibly complex, and it's just a bunch of pointless drivel. Absolutely speechless. ╯╰

This is my first time writing a long review. This book truly has the potential to become a masterpiece, and the author's grand concept is also impressive. However, its flaws are also so obvious: the plot is diluted by the concept, and Fanny is the public enemy of all readers. All of this makes the book either loved or hated. First, the setting is truly rich.

This book is quite controversial, but its excellence is undeniable. The controversy lies in the protagonist's lack of prominence. While the author may have crafted each character with depth and complexity, the reader's immersion diminishes as the narrative becomes increasingly fragmented due to a lack of focus on the main plot.