A Wizard’s Journey

Chapter 10, "Knowing the Elder" is defeated!

As the author, you wrote earlier that there are 6 spiritual cores forming an octahedron, and every 3 witchcrafts will be combined into a witchcraft card. I thought this witchcraft card was the combination and enhancement of those 3 witchcrafts, which made me guess how to combine the witchcraft and what wonderful effects it would have. Turns out it has nothing to do with it? Did you just open 8 golden fingers?😅

There is no book with more cheating than any other book I have ever seen. 🙂 As a wizard, the most basic principle is equivalent exchange. Who is the protagonist? All kinds of whoring. Guide to Cheating: 1 Common time travel and rebirth cheats, plus top-notch cultivation techniques and excellent qualifications 2. Bring a library in your brain, there is an old man in the library, and the protagonist can buy a book of "Existences in the World" for free every month Any secret book [With the skills, there is nothing missing] 3 The brain comes with the elixir garden, which can be ripened once a month 4 The brain comes with the awesome alchemy workshop 5 The brain comes with the brainless sealing technique, which can be used three times a month. The brainless force seal is lower than the seal. All objects with magic level, including creatures 6 brains come with pets to share vision and a bunch of other messy plug-ins, etc. 7 brains come with a dimensional trading house, free dimensional trading once a month 8 and above, all kinds of plug-ins are useful to the protagonist It has a permanent bonus, the bonus can grow, and the plug-in can grow 9 In addition to the above plug-ins, there are six more awesome plug-ins [I haven't seen it, I can't stand it anymore] 10 Finally, there is the so-called trump card-the ultimate invincible plug-in, which will appear in the later stage

Author, I'm not telling you to take care of your comment section. I'm a newbie here at Amway. As soon as I entered the book page, I saw a bunch of bad reviews and then left. I'm not telling you to delete the bad reviews. You should find a few good reviews and add them to the top. At least, don't let the people who come in see the bad reviews as soon as they come in and then leave ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

Simply put, in a novel, the story drives the plot and the plot resonates. I feel that this novel is a bit indifferent, with a lot of settings, a lot of cheats, and a plot that is so weak that it has no sense of existence. It is like dazzling clothes worn on an extremely ugly woman, which makes people very awkward.

I've only read the first two chapters, and I just want to say: it's a bit tiring to read. Based on an identity and background, a lot of narration took a long time to explain.

This novel is really speechless and there isn't much plot! I have been talking about the setting, and I have read 36 chapters. At least 10 of them are settings. There are too many cheats and it is no fun! It's just about obscenity! The power system is extremely complicated. I talked a lot of nonsense and was speechless╯╰

How should I put it? The author said that he wrote this book after reading Mystery. Let's take Mystery as an example. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he regards himself as the patron saint of the world and cares about everything. So does Klein. However, the protagonist of this book is not as smart as Klein and is more greedy than Klein. The problem is that he doesn't have the strength yet. Klein knows how to use the government and other forces to destroy the cult, and the protagonist is only thinking about doing it himself. He doesn't even think about whether you have the strength. The cult has such a big operation and there are so many masters. You are just a soy sauce. You give the information to those big forces and let them send masters to deal with it. It would be better if you seize the time to practice. If you have to go by yourself, I don't understand what it has to do with you. Is this cult going to such great lengths to deal with you, a little guy?

This is the first time I write a long review. I really feel that this book has the potential to become a god, and the setting of the author Hongda is also impressive. However, the shortcomings are also so obvious. The plot that is diluted by the setting and Fanny, the public enemy of all readers, make people who love this book love to hate it and others hate it. First of all, the settings are really rich, and it was a bit messy at first, but later the author reorganized it, cut off a lot of cumbersome settings, and concentrated on the development of the 6 secrets and 6 elements. If you keep reading, you will suddenly become enlightened. The first 20 chapters are a bit discouraging. In fact, it is better not to force many settings at the beginning, and to reveal them slowly. The setting of this book has been formed, but I still make suggestions. The reason why the author's setting dilutes the plot is actually that the author's secrets are equal to professions, and the endless secrets also lead to endless professions. The professions and abilities of the various supporting characters that the author has appeared so far are almost all different. I'm afraid that they are in the same camp, so every time a new character appears, the author has to spend a chapter and a half writing the setting. This is obviously not advisable. The author's magnificent imagination does not need to burst out all at once. It can be used in one book or even the next book, so that it can flow slowly. The plot enters slowly, and the main line is diluted by various settings. In fact, if you tolerate this point, the plot is still interesting, and the several major plot points have some flavor. It must be pointed out that the author's plots are handled very beautifully, and I even loved watching the dimensional transaction drama. But the big plot does have the meaning of digging and not burying. The author is following the path of a classical fantasy novel. The setting of the plot will not be limited to the level of the protagonist. High-level powers will appear very early. The advantage of this classical writing method is that it can create a grand world view and epic plot conflicts. The disadvantage is that the participation of the protagonist (actually the reader) will be reduced, just like watching a firework. Especially the author made all the bosses into Fanny 😅, turning the good witchcraft into the story of Fanny becoming a god, which dissuaded 70% of the readers. It is recommended that the author compress the length of the epic battle, give each plot a clean ending, rather than leaving everything unresolved, and increase the participation of the protagonist (reader), instead of having each plot arrange for the protagonist (reader) to flee in panic. Character creation is the main poisonous point of this book. The author has put a lot of effort into character creation, which is remarkable, and there are many supporting characters with profound impressions. However, the villain Fanny who runs through the book is not handled well, which makes people feel disgusted. The creation of this character is suspected to be based on the Golden Emperor in The King of Squid. They are all deep-minded, calculating and cumbersome. Even in the end, the protagonist may not be able to do anything to her, and will only destroy herself in the end. I feel that creating this kind of villain who is obviously a sadistic type is not the mainstream of books now. If it is not handled well, it is often the engine of defeat. Designing a final villain that runs through the whole book and always stabilizes the protagonist in all aspects has huge risks. The author can refer to the treatment method of Squid Girl. Don't let this kind of villain appear too early and repeatedly gain a sense of presence. Start to exert force frequently, and finally lead the plot to a climax. If you want to achieve the purpose of fleshing out the characters, you can introduce some less conspicuous foreshadowing and side descriptions in the early stage, instead of directly and crudely serving as the final boss of all major events. This will cause all the main plots to be unable to be completed. Readers will feel that every plot is a piece of cake, all in a state of unfinished status, and nothing is resolved after watching it for a long time. Finally, I would like to give two suggestions to the author: one is to consider the readers' feelings, and the other is to stick to one's own ideas. If the author is prepared to consider the reader's experience, he can arrange a grand plot, entangle all the previously unsolved plot conflicts around the main poisonous point of the book, Fanny, and then detonate the climax in a major plot conflict, and let Fanny receive a lunch box. In this way, the immature handling of the book in the early stage and the reputation can be restored at once. The disadvantage is that real fans of the book will criticize it for being kitsch and accommodating to readers. If the author is ready to insist on writing his own thing, he can stop introducing new settings from now on and focus on expanding the depth of the plot. At the same time, he can arrange Fanny as the final boss, temporarily fall silent (to carry out the final conspiracy), and no longer serve as the boss of other plots. Otherwise, if the protagonist encounters all the bosses of all conspiracies in the book, she will be this Fanny, but she will never die, which in all fairness will destroy the reader's experience. I sincerely hope that the author can stick to it, write better and better, and update more diligently. I came from piracy and became a regular, don't let us down, keep writing!

This book personally feels very controversial, but it is undeniable that it is excellent. The controversy lies in the fact that the protagonist is not prominent, and perhaps every character is made of flesh and blood in the author's creation. But in the eyes of readers, the sense of immersion is getting worse and worse. This is because "the priorities are not distinguished." Especially in the later stage, the protagonist's golden finger "main soul" can be used casually, which makes people feel a bit disparate. There are also some plots that are slightly abusive to the main character (of course, this does not mean that the main character must be very smart, but the sense of substitution of always taking the blame is very poor). Although it is to lead to the later stage, the author does not let the readers' frustration come out. Of course, I don't deny that the author's thinking and logic skills are very good. I just hope that the author can write down the cool points (not to be suppressed or not) and the priorities (clear), so that it will be more readable.