The Ghost Knight King’s Dungeon Project

It can be seen that the author is a novice. The rhythm, text, and narrative were almost a mess at the beginning. He only relied on his own literary quality and love to write. Anyway, the story starts to get interesting after 20%, and the subsequent development is also very interesting. Unlike most authors who work hard to follow the process, this author's brain has not been completely polluted by the commercial outline. It is rare that he does not put too much pressure on the battle, and he has also written a group portrait. But the shortcomings are also very conspicuous. If other content is scored six, seven or ten out of ten, the setting is scored three points. If you lose the setting method, you may only get zero points. Often after a few pictures, you will see a bunch of new gadgets indiscriminately smeared all over your face.

The quality of the recent updates is very high. Fish Tank was born out of the original Magical Line of Defense story. It is not easy to write a suffering family-style endless hell in a small environment in the Border Knights Ridge. The content of Oak Ridge can be said to be rich enough. The operation between factions and the division of political power are all well written. Especially Erdrich, who is under the influence of family culture, can depict a political hunt among blood relatives. Blood ties may bring stability and connection, but it also brings hopeless estrangement and huge entanglements. The distortion and decay of the ancient knight family, the oppressive internal struggles, and the deformed rule comparable to cholera, all leave a deep impression on people. At the same time, the appearance of each character is smooth, the factional positions are three-dimensional, and the motivations of the actions are clear. I really have to praise the writing power. There are also shortcomings, such as: the lack of heroic perspective of Samael and his party, the reduction of the description of the infrastructure in the heart of the heart, the lack of description of external forces, and the failure to better show the external pressure. Of course, a big reason for all this can be attributed to insufficient production capacity I believe that when reading novels, everyone pays more attention to quality, and quality is directly proportional to the time invested. However, the fish tank has become increasingly busy recently, and the update time is almost squeezed out. So I hope that all readers can try their best to understand the new author Yutan, give more encouragement and support to the story, be less violent and more tolerant. As his friend, I am extremely grateful.

I have read the 200th chapter so far, and the protagonist still has no power at all. He is just a grassroots team, exploring everywhere, and not one of the seven modern people knows about industrialization? They are all handmade in small workshops, or they are lost high technologies that cannot be copied and have limited production. What's in the dungeon? Apart from the farm, I don't know what else there is. What's in industry? Do you know that there are a few blast furnaces and nothing else? The output of even a county town cannot be compared with that of four empires? The undead also rely on small-scale farms here and there, without a unified industrial assembly line? So far, there are not all puppets, there are less than 20 people in the protagonist force who have self-awareness, and there is no automated machinery. The control of the undead and the control of Warcraft are also limited. In my concept, any factory, even a toy factory, is more useful than the half-baked factories of the protagonist. I don't know why the author didn't write about industrialization. The book is called Dungeon. As a result, the dungeon is completely hidden, and there is no mention of development, how the power becomes stronger, and how to achieve industrialization. It also doesn't write about the dimensionality reduction attack on the backward Middle Ages. The male protagonist explores everywhere and relies on the garbage dug out of the garbage dump to fight. His use of the high technology of the Gods is worse than that of those medieval countries. The power system is also a mess. Winning or losing depends on the author's improvisation. You should focus on the development of power. Individual strength is not important. I accept that the power system is a mess, but after 200 chapters, you still rely on the personal power of the protagonist and six knights. You have no idea what you will get from farming. Most of the readers who came to read your book came for the farming articles. What exactly is this about farming? I don't know if the author can read this long paragraph, but I hope the author can improve it. The writing is not bad, but the plot is a complete mess. Isn't it that we read novels just for fun? Has the author ever thought about what is so exciting about this book? There is neither the pleasure of developing one's power and increasing one's base, nor the pleasure of beating enemies violently in war scenes. The protagonist just explores everywhere, and the things he discovers are simply taken away, without any feedback at all. Has the author not considered these issues? Your book didn't get good grades. Think about it. What's the problem? Of course, if you want to say that writing is not for food, but for hobbies, then you are free to just treat what I said as a fart, that's it (personal opinion, if you have different opinions, you are right)

From the far world of blueprints, builds, and endless design, she tore through the veil where the lost souls resign, a half-blood of Ronove, with darkness aligned, to call forth the king that the fates had confined. From the far world of blueprints, builds, and endless design, he stepped through the veil where the lost souls resign, a wanderer from far realms, in cursed steel confined, the old wraith‑armor that binds him, dark and undefined. From the far world of blueprints, builds, and endless design, their paths now converge, two souls intertwined, her blood‑oath, his iron will, forever aligned, to build with nether copper a realm redefined.

It's quite good-looking. The narrative rhythm is a bit unconventional for a mainstream book. It's relatively loose and free, but the writing is very good. The characters are very fleshed out. Even the supporting characters who don't write much can still feel alive. The author's writing skills are quite good👍

The writing style and plot are extremely solid. If I just read the content of this book, I would think that he is a great writer. In terms of plot arrangement, it obviously feels like there is a very specific outline. The world view design is very interesting. It is not a very traditional Western fantasy world view. The addition of the time traveler protagonist also makes the look and feel of this book not a classic Western fantasy. However, the epic flavor and human touch that fans of Western fantasy themes like are very orthodox. The writing style is similar to Yuantong, but it lacks a touch of humor and the writing style is more focused on polishing the characters in details. The sentences are neatly divided into clear paragraphs, making it easy to read. The description of the environment is detailed, but I personally feel that there is still room for optimization in some places (for example, it is a little cumbersome when you first see Thornfall City, which should be more understandable if you are a listening book user) I think this will be the next Sword of the Dawn, a Sword of the Dawn with more three-dimensional characters, but the plot remains to be seen, and we will wait and see the author's performance.

I've started automatically subscribing to books. It's fun to save up and read. Each character is well drawn. I really like this book.

How long has it been since I heard this? When I first heard this sentence many years ago, my heart surged and I felt that I could do something great for the country and the people. Now I am in my twenties and have accomplished nothing. I can only indulge in the illusory online world to anesthetize myself every day. I have suffered and resisted, but in the end it seems that I have achieved nothing. Our generation is both lucky and unfortunate. We have received education from the country and learned a lot. But when we are ready to work hard, we are at a loss. We don't know what we can do. It is like being punched on cotton. The feeling of humiliation is indescribable. We long to change our destiny, but destiny always leaves us. People who read this passage, I hope you will always be like the sun at eight or nine o'clock, illuminating others and warming yourself.

Adventure in the beginning, expansion in the middle stage, and a sea of ​​stars in the later stage! ! At the end of each chapter, as much as possible, something like an introduction or reflections will be added It is regarded as a label, and it is also like giving an introduction to the character or a sentence that may be said It is the great explorers who challenge it What supports them are five motivations ——A. R. C Company Has the unified language disappeared? Now, you should be able to understand what I'm saying, right? You understand what you should say and do, right? Rational violence Oh hey hey, you can choose your own name White shirt with black stockings

As the title says, I wish you good health, frequent updates, and monthly votes!

It's really good, but it's a pity that there aren't many words right now, so I can't enjoy reading it 🙂

Looking at the introduction, I thought it was a traditional lord novel, but the first few chapters showed an out-of-the-box protagonist and the devil's daughter. The light novel flavor struck me, and I didn't know whether I should continue reading it.

As long as the author writes the book well, there is no need to worry about no one reading the work. When I was looking for books at Qidian, I judged whether a novel was a good novel by looking at the number of posts in the discussion forum. Now there are more than 200 posts discussing about fifty chapters, which means that there are still many people who like this book.

To be honest, the author's description of the armor and the existence of high technology led to this image of the protagonist in my mind

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As I read it, I felt that the direction of the plot had changed, and the focus of the characters had also shifted When I first read the title, I thought it was a construction/dungeon/farming flow in which the protagonist and the demon heroine build dungeons and pits together to make the adventurers prosper I saw 6 fellow characters popping up in the middle. The family and the world's giants/hating intelligence turned into RimWord, and the demon heroine turned directly into a fringe person who occasionally gives out sweets This change caused my expectations for the plot of this book to deviate. I really don't understand the meaning of these 6 people of the same race gathering 7 knights...

Looking at the gaudy introduction, I thought it was some childish and mindless one-click dungeon construction. If I hadn't seen so many monthly tickets, I would have missed it. This book is actually a hardcore group portrait script. The background is also much crueler than the introduction seems. I almost missed a good book. If you don't want to read the system text, you can give it a try. If you want to see the protagonist build a dungeon and kill everyone with one click, you can retreat.

How to put it this way, I quite like the author's writing style and worldview structure, and I can even say that he is quite genius. However, the protagonist is really... Unacceptable. If you want to call him rational, he has repeatedly emphasized that he is a man of science and engineering. I have not seen how rational he is. Apart from his insistence on the existing scientific achievements in this world, I think this should not be considered rational. After all, scientific inquiry requires thinking outside the framework. This feels like he does not want to accept the new setting, and is a bit arrogant towards people from another world. Take the example of the ghost. The female protagonist said that the souls in this world will be pulled by the moon and rise into the sky and become stars. The male protagonist corrected her thoughts on transcendent socialist materialism when she first arrived. The general meaning is: "What you said is all made up. In fact, stars are physical celestial bodies. However, your statement is also quite romantic, but this is the truth. You can believe your romantic statement if you want. I understand. Just be happy." Normally, if you are really a rationalist, when Taliyah explains this information to you, no matter which angle you follow, the narratives of local people with complete history and observation life experience are more valuable for reference. Then you might as well assume that there are real souls that will float into the sky and become stars. After all, the theory of souls has now been confirmed, then Explain that the science of the original world is no longer completely credible or reliable, and then try to understand the principle of the phenomenon of souls ascending to stars, instead of clinging to the original astronomical theory for no reason. After all, your argument has no basis in this world. (Golden Finger cannot be regarded as basis. As a system, it itself is not a modern scientific capability. To explain things, although there are many traces of biotechnology in this world, and this is system information, no one knows whether the system is rationalizing local information, and modern science cannot explain spiritual power), so in this situation, if you use modern science to apply it, you don't know what you are doing. The heroine explained below The city's ecology was different from that of the earth, and there was no reaction at all. Then it suddenly killed the planet without a soul, and finally said "you are happy as long as you are happy" (I really couldn't hold back on this). It had no basis and was quite inexplicable. Compared with the explanation of the so-called science and engineering man, it was more like a purely emotional drive with a sense of superiority that he didn't want to admit. Then there is the character of the protagonist, who is both sunny and dark, confident and inferior. Or rather, he is actually extremely self-centered, completely self-centered. Such a person cannot be good to others, or to be caring, but has no human touch. His good qualities are all The "I think this is good" kind of good, because he has never thought about getting into other people's hearts and thinking about what others really need, so it is more like "playing a good person" for self-satisfaction, but in fact he will not change himself for others at all, including recalling the plot. Is he a good person? Yes, it counts for universal values, but will it be comfortable to watch? No, because that kind of "goodness" always carries a sense of self-importance, and most of the readers' arguments in the first few chapters are centered around these points. Similar to Amomum villosum, he is just pretending to be a good person, following the social morality of the previous world and then forcing it on others, without considering the situation and feelings of others at the time, so he is called the Virgin Mother. This is the core issue of my personal feelings. Ah, there may be a problem with the title theme that has not appeared yet (building a dungeon). If you have different opinions, you can discuss it, but if you are here to purely express your emotions, then I am right. You can get out, and don't ask stupid questions about where xxx is or whether you have read the book. I did not finish it, or even how much, but I must have read it. Otherwise, can I still edit it? Of course, if there is a reversal later, or it is foreshadowing, or this is a growth line deliberately designed by the author, you can tell me, and I may be able to continue chasing it. Of course, don't mention it if you say that the later information explains why some of the protagonist's actions are reasonable. For example, if the world is really a celestial universe, my previous thoughts are based on the information and progress that the protagonist knows. As a God's perspective reader, my information and perspective should be more objective and comprehensive at the same time. I can't say that the protagonist knew the hidden information that I didn't know at the time. The second week was hiding something. Then the author's writing is too perverted (), and it can be considered very advanced. In summary, if you can accept the character design of the protagonist, it is indeed a good book, with a big setting and various detailed designs. Some of the character designs are very good, and the writing is good. It can be seen that a lot of care has been taken, and the setting pictures are also good-looking. It may be a bit slow. Unfortunately, the protagonist has too great an impact on the viewing experience of a book, just like you don't agree with a person's thoughts and actions, or some logical errors are fighting between the left and right brains. But you still have to watch him all the time and not interfere with him and argue with him. The characters around him are still guided and assisted by the author to promote the rationality of agreeing with these points that you don't agree with. That is actually quite uncomfortable. Don't blame the comment area for being noisy. People like us will also want to find some recognition after seeing this... These are all my personal thoughts. If you think there is logic, you can refer to it.

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The writing is very good. In fact, I feel that there is a bit of hardcore science fiction in it. Haha. The description of Lao Sa in recent chapters has successfully established the character of this character. He is considerate and thoughtful, but not weak and will not be slaughtered by others. Lao Sa has been working hard to bring the undead knights back from the edge of destroying the world. He succeeded. He did it. From the very beginning when he first met Lahadur, he was attacked by others. Later, he defeated various undead knights and successfully dominated the entire Heart of Heart Plains. The author's description of each character made me feel like I was reading the Transformers Leader's Evidence when I read this book. Old Sa is like Optimus Prime, Ansheba is a bit like a less cruel Megatron (think like it), and the legendary backstabbing expert Lahadur is like Mr. Starscream who can't even organize a picnic.

Good book I won't make too many comments. It has the same feeling as when I read ancient fantasy online novels (although I am a Penguin reader). The text is very detailed and the plot has a main line. I won't pick out individual mistakes, that's about it.

Reckless, fervent, pure. Heartbeats, the rumble of earth and peaks; Blood, the blaze of fire that never sleeps; stone? Jaws of iron, biting through life's harsh pain. When molten blood cools and hardens, Fate's loud call draws thee homeward. Silent hills are torn apart, Mountains quake as thy soul departs. Crash — what heavy treasure falls? Gold! Earth, hold thy child in thy mighty Breast! Fire, open thy warm forge hearth! Great Parents! Thy forged soul returns, in triumph! Reckless, enthusiastic, pure. The heartbeat is the resonance of the earth's crust and the mountains, the blood rushes like flames, the rock formations and veins hum in the soil. Children of rock, microcosms of the earth, in the arms of lava and fire, born in hot coals. What is shaking? The teeth are forged, gnawing at the dry suffering in the world. When the forged iron blood solidifies The supreme destiny calls you fiercely, The silent mountain is excavated and the mountains tremble. Collision—— What is this sinking weight? It's gold! O earth, open your generous embrace, O flame, open your warm hearth, The great parents! The cannonballs you forged are ready Return in triumph!

Rt, the writing is better than most authors at the starting point, and some of the foreshadowings are also very interesting. Looking at the monthly ticket list, you can tell that many people like this book. The early emotional descriptions are delicate, the protagonist is optimistic and resourceful, and the heroine is also very rich. I originally thought this was a story of two lonely souls redeeming each other, from being constantly threatened to being in a safe situation, building a dungeon in the central swamp, from being alone to forming a team, from redemption between two people to saving others, from being bound by rules to changing the world. But everything changed since a certain chapter added the setting of a depressed sister to the protagonist. Since then, she has become like a tool to purely push the plot. The heroine has become a background. I can't see the meaning of her existence, and the fact is dispensable. The name of this book is Underground City Engineering, but it does not enter the underground city until Chapter 50. It has 220,000 words and has not yet entered the theme of underground city construction. I thought everything would be fine once we entered the dungeon, right? The male protagonist and female protagonist can finally become stronger and stronger, and use the dungeon to have an impact on the world, but this is not the case. The protagonist's system is not directly used in the construction of the dungeon, but is used to fight wits and courage with several other time-travelers. The core conflict of the following 200,000 has been focused on these few people. I am not interested in my fellow contemporaries on the earth at all, and the construction of the dungeon is still not the focus. I have read about 400,000 words now, and the whole story is straightforward without a single climax or breaking point. The background setting is also not new. There are too many works on this theme of interstellar colonization based on fantasy, and it no longer attracts me. There are so many things I want to complain about, I am too lazy to type them, but if you can accept this development of the plot, it will still be very interesting. Obviously I can't accept it.

The first 20 chapters were really boring. I felt like I had to introduce every dog ​​I met on the way to escape. In chapter 33, a similar character's childhood tragedy suddenly appeared, which left me speechless. The beginning emphasizes that he is an engineering man, who gives the impression that he is calm and rational, and has a clear plan for the goal. The sympathy of the poisoner feels a bit overflowing, and then the tragedy of childhood suddenly appears. Go straight to the light novel. The title of the book deceives people into talking about infrastructure construction. After more than 30 chapters, the place to build a dungeon has not yet been reached. Prepare to skip and find out you have to pay to see the infrastructure.

The plot in the early stage all the way to the heart of the body was quite interesting. I thought I was finally going to start building the dungeon under the title, but it suddenly turned into a two-dimensional meeting in another world to enjoy delicious food, and a hundred chapters of team building? This rhythm is too fragmented

When I first wrote this book, I said that the content of farming is far less than adventure. It is an introduction to deceive farming enthusiasts. It is actually a road movie. Looking back now, it is still like this. There is basically no farming haha

Why are there so many brats in the comments section? Write a little emotional drama, write a little memory and it will be poisonous. If you learn a word, you will use it randomly, right? So amazing

This is a very good book. In my opinion, it is easy to get the average number of 10,000 and vote list last month (I have not paid attention to the previous results and I am sorry if I am wrong. I will stand up and take a beating). However, due to the author's health problems recently, the update is not stable. I read the whole book from beginning to end and found three problems ( 1. Update problem: The author can try to update every two days to stabilize the chaotic update caused by health problems. As a reader, a stable update frequency is an important factor in whether you can continue to read or maintain the book for a long time. After all, After all, the quality is here. As long as there is hope, everyone will not give up. Everyone likes the stable update of the Constant Era (one chapter is updated in two days or three days, in my opinion, both are symbols of the survival of this book). Stability is a sign of hope. Chaos Era is very interesting to me (you updated it a few days ago, but you haven't updated it in the past two days). Do you want to run away, I will be in a worried state and lose interest). I can accept that the author updates every two days for the sake of self-cultivation, or I prefer this. The author's health is the first priority, and the temporary reduction of updates is to return to the past in the future. 2. The difference between the title and the content: When I first saw the title, I thought it was a farming construction article based on the theme of dungeons. I thought the same way when I first started reading it (looking for a place to shoot a base at the beginning). But when I started to really start infrastructure construction, I found that I was different. This was not what I imagined. (Revolving around the construction of dungeons → Attracting adventurers → Spreading fame → Attracting more adventurers → Building more advanced dungeons) This cycle is a kind of territorial farming and hegemony idea, which is misaligned with the expectations in my mind. But it doesn't matter. The excellent writing and plot make me not care about these differences. 3. Score problem: The current score of this book is not good enough. I personally think it is a problem with the number of words. 1.5 Million words seems to me to be a pure seedling. With a new author, I usually only judge whether I like it based on the title and introduction and whether to add it to the bookshelf (my personal reading My habit is to start reading new books when they are over 2 million words). In my personal opinion, if you maintain the current quality and write close to 2 million words, you can usher in a wave of explosions. With a guaranteed number of words, you can trick people into killing them. Once you get in, you will not be able to get out. Keep reading and start reading books. (Laughs. You can find a new one and push it. I really think this is a book that can achieve very high results. The current data is not good, but no one knows her yet. I really like this book. Please subscribe more and vote monthly. I also wish the author a speedy recovery! 😆

On the contrary, I still prefer the plot in the early and middle stages of the book. The number of characters is small and prioritized. The rhythm of the writing is better controlled, so the plot and characters are written more realistically. Recently, in these plots where the knights are all dispatched, it is obvious that each character has an equal share of the plot, which makes all the characters less impressive, causing the dialogue to give people a flat feeling. In comparison, whether it is La and Pu discovering the ominous pig, or the protagonist dueling with An, because the plot is designed around one or two people, the details and expressions are obviously better. For example, in the Omen Pig Incident, Lahadol was not only known as a rebellious, foul-mouthed, and flattering character, but his sharp thinking and action abilities were also portrayed. Compared with the arrangement of following a large army and being responsible for making jokes, it is obviously more three-dimensional. It is difficult to write a group portrait by always gathering everyone together. Why not let them do their own thing, and let the protagonist or the plot lead the story of these knights. After all, not everyone is good at fighting and not everyone is good at exploring. Who does what? Besides, many characters have not yet been developed. For example, is the simple-minded and muscular sports student really such a shallow character image? What else do the demons who follow the protagonist to open the dungeon have to do besides their daily work? These can all be written in detail, but they cannot be written when everyone is bustling and going out together. I have talked with netizens about this book in the past two days, and they all feel sorry for the weak current situation of the book. It seems that the rich experiences like a road movie in the beginning when the demon girl sneaks into the heart of the body, the diverse and complex characters and stories no longer exist. Now the author is more interested in spending more space to describe the setting and the formation of the Death Knights, and even does not focus on the construction of the dungeon, which should be a more important plot. I'm not sure if all the relics and artifacts deserve such detailed description, but it does break the continuity of the story to some extent. In short, I still hope that the book will get better and better as time goes by, and I look forward to the subsequent development of the story.