Kingdom of All Nations

The book is very good, and the author listened to his advice. In this case, I would like to make one more small comment. The protagonist was an unbeliever in his previous life, but at least the world he traveled to has a large-scale, divine and supernatural power that is visible to the naked eye. In this case, it is unnecessary and illogical to emphasize that the protagonist is still an unbeliever at heart. From the author's point of view, it is recommended to avoid this part as it will not offend any readers (regardless of whether they have faith or not).

I don't understand why the author likes to forcefully promote female rulers in the Middle Ages, and also likes to forcefully increase the burden on the protagonist. To put it bluntly, he likes to torture the protagonist. Every time the plot seems to be gaining momentum, he will just pull a big one. If the wife was stabbed and was careless, she should have remembered it after dying once. She fell into the shithole twice. The plot was all plotted and forced to break up. The establishment of Rome was based on religion and conspiracy. The more it goes on, the more contradictory it becomes. The key is what are you trying to shape through these? I don't understand. The previous chapter has been foreshadowing how the male protagonist's three views are stable, which means that he deserves to suffer all the time. I really don't understand this author. This protagonist is not from modern times at all, and there is no such talent in modern times. I gave up. I really can't stand it anymore.

If you really think the protagonist is a living saint, let him go to the cross. A gentleman can be bullied. Writing a pure protagonist in a world with low combat power is okay. If you want to write a pure protagonist with a slightly higher combat power, it will easily become a turtle novel. The protagonist is so useless that I really want people to abandon the book. The reality is already very depressing. Why should I feel depressed while reading a novel? There is no need to act recklessly, at least you have to be happy with your grudges, and it's not like any second-rate guy can step on Cesar. Although the plot is advanced by the old bastard Lao Bo, although neither party has a bad relationship, the protagonist is too holy.

"I couldn't sleep anyway, so I read carefully for half the night, and then I saw the words "Nine Fishes" in the author's name. There were four words written all over the book, which meant "nine chapters a day"!"

This is the third time I have written a review of this book. The first two times were all deleted. I have already seen the latest one. Ever since Baldwin died, I have felt that the plot is like one bite of cake and one bite of shit. I don't know the author's background data. Did the data increase or decrease after Baldwin's death? If it increases, it means that readers like me are not the target group of your book, and I don't need to read it anymore. If it drops, please consider the feelings of us old readers. I came from Gray Detective, and I can only say that there are not many young people there who are ill. Before Baldwin's death, the two of them wrote about it as if they were gay, and then Baldwin, who was very colorful, died like a clown. You might as well arrange for him to die on the battlefield. You could write less about the protagonist's daughter and describe it from a more grand perspective. Nowadays, there are constant controversies in writing. The latest story is about being kidnapped by a conspiracy. I really don't want to talk about it anymore. It's an eternal conspiracy, always being passive, and always taking a bite out of it. You have to cheat, search and search again, write nitroglycerin, and only use it once. It's said to be a gift, but it's useless when it's deficient. This can be regarded as my complaint. If this post is deleted, there is really no need for me to read this book again. People like me are not your audience. I am not a masochist. I will ask for another whipping after being beaten.

I'm exhausted after reading half of it, so read with caution if you haven't read it yet 🙂 This book is like a strange-flavored candy. There is a sweet taste on the surface when you first enter the mouth, but as it melts in the mouth, the strange taste slowly comes out. The seasoned villain reuses it crazily to make it unique. It is an "advanced" conspiracy feast created by the fusion of the "Madonna" protagonists. The author's writing style is definitely experienced and powerful, but as described before, it definitely tastes sweet but tastes strange when you try it carefully. I don't know if it is because of the female author as mentioned in the comment area, but I can only conclude that men should be cautious (if it is more suitable for female channels, I don't know).

No wonder the results are not good. In this impetuous society, even the titles of books are getting whiter and whiter, but dozens of chapters are spent on the protagonist's betrayal and separation. I don't know how the author convinced the editor

I really like this novel. The author has handled the characters of Baldwin and Xiaosai very well. He insists on making up these routines and this kind of tragedy that can be seen at a glance. Who can't see this? Does the author respect the readers' wishes equally? Everyone is subscribing to read novels and paying for them. Why should we indulge in our literary youth disease? I can accept Xiao Bao's death but I can't die. It's pointless to be so sloppy and low-level. In addition to all the previous spoilers, everyone knows who the murderer is behind the scenes. I know that people who write online novels have more or less the intention of getting rid of the definition of popular novels, but they can't be so rough and fall into the vulgarity. In short, Jiuyu, what you write is not classic literature after all. Why can't you respect the readers' wishes? I really don't have the literary youth disease, can you take it back?

If you can't hold it any longer, just assassinate whoever you want. If anyone wants to die, just arrange for an unknown person to come out and assassinate him. As a person who doesn't know the Middle Ages at all and doesn't know Sibyl at all, I know that this person needs to be watched carefully. Then the two protagonists were assassinated as if their brains were not working. The queen mother was also an abstract person. Just like the conspiracy of the Byzantine court before, she became an invisible person through experience, right? It's messed up to advance the plot in order to advance the plot.

The writing style is so good, but it is written by a woman. I feel very sad. The Reign of the Dead, Louis XIV, is written in such a majestic style, but it is definitely written by a woman! I'm very conflicted