Has the Paladin Fallen Today?

When a book doesn't have a clear heroine. It can be assumed that the author wants all female channels to be accepted. It is very likely that there will be a carrion plot later

You can feel the author's huge and real world. The characters described have different personalities and distinct characteristics. There is no stereotype description for the sake of drama. The plot advances very naturally. All kinds of characters make people feel likeable or achieve the purpose of creation. The character of the protagonist is what I admire and like the most. He is firm and goal-oriented, tender, smart, capable, a gentleman, gentle, courteous and thrifty. He has a stable moral bottom line and moral standards, and he does not think that he is special or has a destiny. At present, various settings are very integrated, depicting a colorful different world style, but the settings have not been fully developed yet. I hope the author has an outline and design to maintain this level.

I can give 4 points for the character design, with clear positioning and clear memory points. The plot can be given 3 points, the hidden plot is very stable, and the stormy scene is well created, but it is too obscure and it is difficult to see. The writing style is also of excellent quality, especially the character dialogues. I can give it 4 points for the overall writing style, and 5 points for the character dialogue alone. In summary, it is a very good work. Although there are some slight flaws in the advancement of the story line, it is not harmful at all. Out of five points, I can give it a 4.2, Which is an absolute must-have, so feel free to read it. 👍

Are you kidding me to write so well? I'm really afraid that the author is an old eunuch who reincarnated and left behind half a good story before disappearing forever.

The writing is very strong and powerful, but the plot is flawed It didn't give me a sense of expectation. The further I went, the less I felt I wanted to watch it. Maybe it's because the main plot is too vague. I still don't know what the protagonist wants to do, and it's neither too shabby nor revolutionary. And then the girl also rejected it. So what kind of plot are you going to write that's interesting or exciting? There is also the previous revenge section. There is not enough foreshadowing and emotional rendering. It is like killing a minion, which is a bit different from the protagonist's suffering and hatred. Do you want to avoid the poisonous point of the enemy's procrastination? That shouldn't be arranged like this

When I saw that the god of the Apocalypse Sect is called the Goddess of Light, I knew who would win in the novel in the end. As a goddess, she would win against the Guanghui Sect too much in terms of gender.

3 Stars, adventure story from another world. The biggest problem is that there is no main line. The protagonist is running around completing miscellaneous tasks. As a result, his strength has not increased, his life has not improved, his relationship has not developed, and his enemies have not been eliminated. I don't know what he was doing along the way. He just lives his life without a goal.

It feels like there are just some crazy words and some incomprehensible people who can't find the point at all.

The original title of the book is "Evaluation Guide to the Cult of Evil God".

Let's talk about the advantages first. The characters are vivid and vivid, and the writing is good. You can take a look Then there are the problems 1. The writing has no focus, and the rhythm suddenly breaks off when it is about to take off. I talk about other things, and I especially like the meaningless appetizer 2. The protagonist has obvious weaknesses and is a classic laborer (although I really don't want to use this word). He suffers and suffers to support a large number of people who are free to eat, and others keep taking advantage of the protagonist's weaknesses to do this and that. As a novel, it is very good, at least better than the system. But as a web article, it's uncomfortable, frustrating, and contains long paragraphs of meaningless text. After I once again saw the omnipotent male protagonist being threatened by the second generation over and over again, I couldn't hold on and retreated.