Has the Paladin Fallen Today?

Reading progress: about 140 chapters A book that is not a web-text, it is about small stories, bitterness and deep hatred, overwhelming fighting ability, abusive master, virginity - in short, not "satisfactory" But good-looking Excluding the time traveler protagonist and one Some abstract bad stories, the decadent male protagonist gradually breaks through his inner demons to find himself. It is a very orthodox Western fantasy writing method. It is very readable (especially in recent years, there are fewer such writings), but it is conceivable that the results will not be very good Disadvantages: 1. The rhythm is really not suitable for reading as an online novel. It is very depressing. It is suitable for cultivating it to a certain level and then killing it in one breath, but I am afraid of cultivating it to death, which is very confusing 2. Maybe I want to cater to the appetite of a certain group of people, and I have forced some bad Internet memes into it (especially Genshin Impact). The purity of the originally excellent traditional Western fantasy novel has been reduced, especially at the beginning. Seedlings, Zhuishu Crematorium, raising and fearing death, tangled

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You can feel the author's huge and real world. The characters described have different personalities and distinct characteristics. There is no stereotype description for the sake of drama. The plot advances very naturally. All kinds of characters make people feel likeable or achieve the purpose of creation. The character of the protagonist is what I admire and like the most. He is firm and goal-oriented, tender, smart, capable, a gentleman, gentle, courteous and thrifty. He has a stable moral bottom line and moral standards, and he does not think that he is special or has a destiny. At present, various settings are very integrated, depicting a colorful different world style, but the settings have not been fully developed yet. I hope the author has an outline and design to maintain this level.

When a book doesn't have a clear heroine. It can be assumed that the author wants all female channels to be accepted. It is very likely that there will be a carrion plot later

I can give 4 points for the character design, with clear positioning and clear memory points. The plot can be given 3 points, the hidden plot is very stable, and the stormy scene is well created, but it is too obscure and it is difficult to see. The writing style is also of excellent quality, especially the character dialogues. I can give it 4 points for the overall writing style, and 5 points for the character dialogue alone. In summary, it is a very good work. Although there are some slight flaws in the advancement of the story line, it is not harmful at all. Out of five points, I can give it a 4.2, Which is an absolute must-have, so feel free to read it. 👍

3 Stars, adventure story from another world. The biggest problem is that there is no main line. The protagonist is running around completing miscellaneous tasks. As a result, his strength has not increased, his life has not improved, his relationship has not developed, and his enemies have not been eliminated. I don't know what he was doing along the way. He just lives his life without a goal.

Are you kidding me to write so well? I'm really afraid that the author is an old eunuch who reincarnated and left behind half a good story before disappearing forever.

Let's talk about the advantages first. The characters are vivid and vivid, and the writing is good. You can take a look Then there are the problems 1. The writing has no focus, and the rhythm suddenly breaks off when it is about to take off. I talk about other things, and I especially like the meaningless appetizer 2. The protagonist has obvious weaknesses and is a classic laborer (although I really don't want to use this word). He suffers and suffers to support a large number of people who are free to eat, and others keep taking advantage of the protagonist's weaknesses to do this and that. As a novel, it is very good, at least better than the system. But as a web article, it's uncomfortable, frustrating, and contains long paragraphs of meaningless text. After I once again saw the omnipotent male protagonist being threatened by the second generation over and over again, I couldn't hold on and retreated.

The writing is very strong and powerful, but the plot is flawed It didn't give me a sense of expectation. The further I went, the less I felt I wanted to watch it. Maybe it's because the main plot is too vague. I still don't know what the protagonist wants to do, and it's neither too shabby nor revolutionary. And then the girl also rejected it. So what kind of plot are you going to write that's interesting or exciting? There is also the previous revenge section. There is not enough foreshadowing and emotional rendering. It is like killing a minion, which is a bit different from the protagonist's suffering and hatred. Do you want to avoid the poisonous point of the enemy's procrastination? That shouldn't be arranged like this

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This is why it is necessary to have a clear female protagonist in a harem. Readers of My Wife is Ruyi won't care so much.

It's a classic routine, but it's written in a way that's not cliche, and it's rich in plot without making it too dramatic. It's very well written, and the writing is good. It feels a bit like Ember Gun. I'm following it.

The original title of the book is "Evaluation Guide to the Cult of Evil God".

Let the proudest person die the humblest death, the most dazzling person die the most silently, the person who is most afraid of death die protecting his companions, the most innocent and ignorant person does not know why he died until his death, the most humble person dies the most tragic and dazzling death, the gentlest person dies the most cruel, the most egoistic person blocks the protagonist's sword, the most cowardly one commits suicide for the sake of the overall situation, the homesick person dies on the way home, the one who loves each other dies in the hands of the other person, the one who talks venomously until death. Poison, the one who had a crush on could not express his feelings until death, the one who had suffered all his life could not live a good life, the one who had been proud all his life knelt down when he died, the one with mysophobia was filthy when he died, and the one who was afraid of pain died with a thousand cuts. In short, all those who least wanted to die died, those who wanted to die lived, and by the way, the protagonist had to be left alone. After witnessing all this, he could not even die, because his life was piled up by these people with their own lives.

It feels like the kind of plot where it's easy to get carried away at a moment's notice.

I once read a youthful pain literature that starts with "" and ends with "" written by someone who starts with "Jiang" and ends with "Nan". Heartbroken about this. So I kindly ask the author to give an accurate answer? Is this story, in the end, a story about good people getting rewarded? Is it a sunny story? Is it a story in which love and friendship are relatively clear, and the protagonist is not deliberately disgusted? I'm always a little scared, what kind of inexplicable pain will I encounter later?

Please continue to read, this is the last chance for you to recommend the new book, and I hope you will help me! It will be on the shelves next week, and there will be ten more updates. Please QAQ

It has the flavor of Limited Gintama, including time travellers, paladins, abandoned soldiers, executioners on the battlefield, and a group of anonymous compatriots. These people who were abandoned on the battlefield all have mental illnesses, so the protagonist cannot become stronger. He lives in a painful past, and now he only lives in the orphanage. The forces from all sides gathered little by little, forcing the protagonists and the group of people to come to light, and they turned history over step by step.

Overall it was good, at least it was very interesting to me. The main character was strong-willed and a good person, and many of the supporting characters also appealed to my taste. But there are the following issues that I am worried about: 1. At present, it seems that although the protagonist is a living person, he will definitely eventually embark on a revolutionary path. However, it is difficult for the revolutionary protagonist to implement the control and establish a high position, and it is easy to be written as either a paper framer or a utopian revolutionary. 2. As the mobile phone brother is also a time traveler, this is a small hidden danger. The starting point standard is generally that the time traveler is a human and the natives are just NPCs, so it is acceptable for the natives to serve the plot wholeheartedly, but another living time traveler (the mobile phone brother claims to be alive) is more troublesome. Anyway, come on, author, I don't know if they are extraterrestrial demons, but they are quite powerful.

It's time to arrange for the protagonist to upgrade as soon as possible. The enemies arranged for the protagonist are getting stronger and stronger, and the protagonist himself has been able to upgrade a long time ago. There is no need to suppress the protagonist because of the lack of rituals. It is too deliberate.

Although it seems to have nothing to do with the introduction and title of the book, it is indeed a good book. I like the character of the protagonist. Is it supposed to be chaotic and kind? The story is very good. I'll give you a monthly pass.

It's pretty good, the plot is good but not vulgar. In my opinion, the character creation seems restrained and mature. I especially like some of the dialogues. Enjoy your monthly vote

After reading Chapter 55, the author felt a little overwhelmed. My threshold has been raised, this book is still very good

The bad jokes are neither abstract nor happy, but they make the plot inferior.

😵 Just like the title, I personally feel that the introduction is a bit confusing, I almost crossed it out

I'm curious because the author uses the British currency factorial, so why don't they simply call the currencies gold pounds, silver shillings, and copper pennies?

Do you have any other books by the author? I would like to read them. They are so well written.

West Huanwei is right, but as a pure love warrior, I want to know whether the heroine is single or multiple?

So many updates? ! I'll give you all the monthly tickets

Like I read andlao's book before, the writing is really good