Dungeon Lord: My Dungeon Is Called Grans Forest

There aren't any major flaws yet. But the biggest problem is the protagonist's power growth. First, the protagonist's growth direction is unclear, which is a major pain point for lord/summoning novels. If the growth is too strong, what's the point of the subordinates?

I've just started watching, and I hope the protagonist won't blindly fawn over the Xia Kingdom in this world just because of his past life's identity. In any case, as of now, the protagonist has gained almost nothing except a little bit of soul fire from them that they themselves didn't know the protagonist could obtain. On the other hand, the protagonist has to give up various rare local products and valuable equipment, so the two sides' contributions are completely unequal.

If they can be resurrected, then there's no point in writing it. To be honest, these kinds of farming or behind-the-scenes stories are easier to write because the supporting characters have to die. If supporting characters don't step down, how can new characters be introduced? Don't write supporting characters as if they were the main characters.

Has the author considered how to handle monsters with antagonistic relationships? The three races of Grand Forest have a symbiotic relationship, and those of Sky City are all colleagues. However, a chain of hatred emerges after the arrival of the Celestial Behemoths. The lucid GBL cult has a blood feud with Lotus, the Bantu have a blood feud with Skasa, and the Kallet are also enemies of the Celestials and Dragons. If these issues aren't addressed, it feels like problems will arise.

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😥 The pace is too slow.

Author, what's your profession? Are there only dungeon monsters, no professions?

It leans a bit towards ensemble cast and behind-the-scenes story, and the male lead's presence is a bit weak. I'd rather see him build his territory, learn DNF (Dungeon Fighter Online) skills, and summon game characters and monsters. The Xia Kingdom team has a bit too much screen time.

The premise is good, but the action sequences are lacking. I suggest increasing the protagonist's development speed by half a level, giving them a definite solution a step ahead of the crisis. For the behind-the-scenes storyline, the crisis perspective should focus more on supporting characters. The protagonist's actions should be decisive; otherwise, the protagonist loses their cool factor.

How many chapters do you update a day? Not even 20,000 words a day! What are you resting for! You've already played Dungeon Fighter Online, you should be all liver and liver! Hurry up and update!