Reanimated, I Became the World's Bug

I suggest changing the title and introduction of the book. There is nothing related to bugs in the first 50 chapters. Bugs appear after 50 chapters. The name of the first bug you get is Atomic Slash, which sounds very damaging, right? But it cannot have any effect on life and can only be used for polishing and fertilizer... This bug is not a bug at all...

Now that I've finished reading it, let me know what you think. I came here to read the author's new book after reading the old one. In my opinion, the author's biggest problem is that the main plot advances too slowly and there are too many branch plots. Especially this alchemical law. This kind of law requires too much to explain and takes up a lot of space. But the fact that the protagonist is still an apprentice means that his level is low, but he knows more. This actually means that a small car can pull a big cart. The more he understands, the more separated he will feel, because he is obviously aware of it, but his level cannot keep up. It quite affects the reading experience. Good concepts and ideas have always been an author's advantage, but they should not be affected by this advantage. Telling the main story well is still the most important thing. Especially when the author throws out one concept after another. The main character is still a minor character and nothing will change. The imagination chapter and the upgrade chapter are two different things. How to combine the two is the most important thing

Well, you can see from the introduction that it borrowed bugego's settings.

The first time he was forced to join the military by gangs, and the second time he was forced to go undercover by the military. I don't know if there are any more.

This makes the protagonist choose a bad time to be an undercover agent. It would actually be more reasonable to become an undercover agent after being promoted to the advanced class. At that time, the protagonist has 8 to 9 whirlpools and has the strength to participate in all subsequent events instead of crawling around all the time, so that the strength is not enough, but he joins a mercenary, which can't even be written in a book. With the protagonist's talent and resources, he can completely skip the timeline of half a year to a year, and there are a lot of explanations when choosing an undercover agent. Why should there be so many explanations? It is unreasonable in itself. The author should re-imagine the plot. When I watched A Cat, I didn't find it attractive at all.

What the author wrote is too messy and has no main axis. In this fantasy world, the protagonist explores things in scattered ways. (Simultaneously distracting the reader) and making it feel cluttered. In addition, according to the progress of the timeline, scenes such as fog, snails, spiders, root-seeking meetings, etc. That are not experienced by the protagonist himself must be described simultaneously. Completely unattractive to readers. It was suggested that this way of writing should be discontinued. 80% Is written around the protagonist. Your grades must be better than now.

I watched the Magic Dice of Destiny again and missed Master Xiao Chen. The people of the Outland Territory are still waiting for Xiao Chen to save them.

What about the bug? Why haven't I found it yet?

What a pity that such a good worldview and power system in the previous book ended like this.

Isn't this the hidden skill of One's new game?