A Pair of Living People

Write your novel, don't read the comments. Your novel's style is very appealing, so you don't have to worry about a lack of readers.

Write your novel without reading comments.

I even suspect the author was possessed by a spirit offering flowers before Buddha. The beginning of the audiobook was indeed very enjoyable, with a touch of suspense and a smooth writing style. But the chapter about the Taoist priest was truly unpleasant. The scheming between people was written too far-fetchedly and awkwardly, especially that 5-yuan slipper—I was speechless. The writing about human relationships was too mediocre, but the writing about humans and ghosts was amazing.

The author is still amazing! This book has a much better pace than before, and the planning is clearly more reasonable. Please, don't abandon "You Are Jiangnan's Father"! Also, is there any hope of seeing what "Crying Mountain" is in this book? 🙂

This update frequency feels like it's going to be abandoned soon. Generally, books written by unofficial authors are updated slowly at first, several hours later than usual, gradually dragging it out until the next day, and then slowly releasing only one chapter at a time. Finally, I apologize for letting down the readers' trust.

Can you recall the feeling you had when you were creating this book? I especially loved the part about the fake people in your first book, particularly when the mother hinted that people only have one pair of eyes, and then it was revealed that the mother had more than one pair of eyes—that was truly satisfying to read. This book brings back that feeling!

The world-building feels a bit too vast. The top-tier Red Robe warriors lost contact after a brief confrontation with Yin Chong, and the protagonist essentially contracts with a ghost messenger at level one. This ghost messenger seems even more powerful than the Red Robe warriors, but while they can easily kill weaker monsters, they can't seem to defeat elite monsters in a few hits.

Chaowei, if you're going to write a novel, then just finish it! Every time you leave it unfinished, what's the difference between this and killing your own child? Listen to me, don't abandon this project this time, or Ye Ting might knock on your window in the middle of the night. 🙂

Could this author be from that paranormal forum on Tomato? It seems Qidian has had a few books abandoned afterward; it's truly a visible improvement.

Is the author a reincarnation of a powerful being or a demon from beyond the realms?