I Have a Quest Log

The author should change the price. It can easily cost dozens of gold coins. Especially for the antidote, you can change it to a weak antidote for a few silver coins. It is too poisonous for a stranger to give away 50 gold coins for free.

Looking at the introduction, the physical reward for dealing with rats 4 times is the same as saving the world. It feels like the mission system and attribute settings are completely broken 😅

Every time I fight hard, struggling on the line of life and death, the rewards I get are all tricks, and there is no feeling like a mage at all. As for the demon swordsman, he is not strong, and does not have the unparalleled pleasure of the goblin next door mowing down low-level monsters of the same level.

To be honest, there are many good parts in the writing, but mixed in with the bad writing, it is easy to give people the feeling that the writing is a bit bad. A typical mouse dropping ruins a pot of soup. Take the recent assault on the orcs as an example. In the case of attacking with two third- and fourth-level spells first, not only did there not be death, there was no serious injury and loss of combat effectiveness, and it was even possible to quickly enter the battle. Come on, this is already a million words. It can be said that the story has entered the middle stage. The protagonist has a golden finger, sophisticated equipment, and many powerful specialties. He can't fight in any one battle, and it shouldn't be so ugly. The other one is the profession of the protagonist. I wanted to write a mage, but I didn't want to just cast spells behind me. I wanted to go up and kill people, so I finally decided on the sword chanting method for the protagonist. But the problem is that in sword chanting, he is a mage first, and then the melee ability. Sword chanting does not focus on melee combat. Melee combat is just a choice, and it will never be the first choice under normal circumstances. But there are too many close-combat characters for the protagonist. When faced with a situation, it is more like an arcane cavalry, a war priest, or a poem of courage. It is not like a sword chant.

After a million words, it is still dangerous to attack an orc chief in a surprise attack. This is because the orc chief wants to escape. If the chief counterattacks and attacks the protagonist, will the whole team be wiped out? (PS: There is a golden dragon and it is impossible to destroy it all)

Speaking of which, I have traveled to several cities now. Would you like the author to make a regional map to assist and let AI help generate a version?

The approximate location information is adjusted by me based on memory. Discussions and corrections are welcome.

It's a good book, with a good pace, no poisonous points, no stupid plot, and the characters are well-developed. Even the little mouse that appeared a few times can make people smile. I thought it was a copy of Ninja when I looked at the name, but it turned out to be unexpectedly good-looking 👍👍

The writing is quite good. , The story is also good. , It just didn't feel that great throughout the whole process. , The fighting force is overwhelming. It's not that exciting with the ups and downs of emotions. What if you are just a diary, then you are indeed a diary. , Because you just record. , But you are a novel. Please have an outline rhythm so that the main line of your story can be refreshing when it should be. , There is an ups and downs climax point. The whole process didn't make me feel special. Impressive point, not that cool point. You can have your main story line, but please have a story with the ups and downs of emotions at the end of each main line, such as playing POS, with the soldiers in the front. , Or a manifestation of ability, letting me know that you are awesome. In every book, the protagonist goes into the past and hopes that he can become a very awesome person. , If the whole story were the same. If you suppress it just to suppress your fighting power, it will be boring.

It seems that you use the dnd background in this introduction, but are the attributes given too much? It can give you some constitution when dealing with rats (although this attribute is quite useless), and it makes sense to give you magic blade protection.