Warhammer 40K: Doom Slayer

The wicked Destroyer, leading the Night Guard, stormed into the Warp, committing atrocities of burning, killing, and looting. The once carefree and thriving powerful demons faced extinction, and the vibrant, teeming Warp was reduced to a deathly silence.

You can make anything seem powerful, it doesn't matter, just don't overhype it. I read another Warhammer novel where someone picked up a Saiyan, and wow, the emperor was comparable to the Omni-King! Wow, that's incredible! I don't even know how they hyped it up. A mere Imperial Guard recruit is stronger than a Saiyan, and even a few hundred power level characters...

As the title suggests, I can only say the author has gone mad. While there were previous scenes of eating green-skinned animals, at least they were glossed over, and there was no description of roasting a whole human. This description of roasting a whole human is truly disgusting. Can't you authors please finish this kind of rubbish earlier? Save my money and time!

The protagonist loses his memory and grows up as a baby in the Warhammer world. His personality is already formed. Even if he regains his original memories later, what's the use? Can a drop of water pollute the entire ocean? I'd say it just doesn't suit my taste. Judging from the title, I thought it was some kind of fun story about aliens causing trouble in Warhammer, but it turned out to be the growth story of a native Primarch. 🙂

There's no sign of him being a transmigrator or a Doomsday warrior; he's practically a native Primarch.

I think the author's thinking has become rigid. I can already predict the rest of the plot he's writing, and I've lost all interest in reading it. But I have a plan that will definitely inspire the author and make him a master, but I need to see some of his existing drafts first before I can make a reasonable judgment to help him. 🤔

That's too long-winded. Did everyone come here to hear you explain the Warhammer background?

Why isn't the full version of DOOM at 40K?

As a novice author, I've tried my best to create a logically coherent world with well-developed characters. Even though it's fan fiction, I'll still strive to write well both the original and original characters. Regarding the first dozen or so chapters, I personally feel they were necessary. I'm also very grateful that everyone read through the many chapters about the background.

The plot is well-written, but the author clearly doesn't have a clear understanding of the Warhammer universe. There are quite a few plot holes; for example, faster-than-light travel doesn't exist in Warhammer. The only similar technology is warp travel.