Greek Mythology: Drawing Cards from the Start, the Goddesses Desperately Want to Marry!

Judging from the protagonist's name, you know this book won't have much potential. It creates a world-building background but doesn't integrate the protagonist into the world system; it's just another fast-paced, superficial novel.

Are you serious about the protagonist's name being from Greek mythology?

The author's dedication is evident even in the protagonist's name. The protagonist's name is Jiang Li, and he transmigrates to a world based on Greek mythology.

1. The punctuation is awful, and it's too tiring to read. 2. It doesn't follow the rules of Greek literature (and indeed all Western worldview texts), where the name of the previous life can only appear in the first chapter. But you've left Jiang Li's name popping up here the whole time, making the reading experience incredibly difficult!

The sentence segmentation is really terrible. Some sentences don't need commas at all, but you insist on adding one. Break long sentences into shorter ones.

Seriously, I haven't seen an author with such terrible sentence breaks in a long time. If you read it yourself after you finish writing it, you'll find it's broken, utter nonsense, and doesn't make sense.