Echoes of the Old Days

Can the author close his eyes when writing? I have a mysophobia and don't want to read second-hand words🐶

First of all, let's talk about the advantages The world view is attractive; the plot is obvious and not boring; the character portrayal is individual, not rigid; the story is strong; the three views are normal; compared with other books from the current starting point, it is excellent Disadvantages The disadvantages are relatively few but they also affect the reading experience. The narrative is confusing, the picture is poor, and the details of some descriptions are blurred. The transition is abrupt, making it difficult for readers to understand, and the reading experience is more tiring. Some characters or settings are introduced without foreshadowing or introduction, or are introduced too late Narrative tense and perspective changes are frequent and confusing. For example, the protagonist starts from a certain event in the present and recalls the experience a hundred years ago, and then abruptly changes the narrative perspective from the current protagonist to the previous protagonist, and then abruptly changes it back after writing a paragraph.

When did the daily detoxification become so powerful? I actually recommended a normal novel.

As mentioned, I will set up a pot here. You can bring your own ingredients, and then wait for an opportunity to catch the seal in the pot, and then you can eat delicious seal!

I have never felt happier in Seal Mama's book club 😭

Write the transition carefully. The first sentence is still chatting in the room and the next sentence appears somewhere else. Although I can understand it, the viewing experience is too poor. I would like to insert a few sentences to explain and write more words to make the reading more comfortable. The character setting and plot are quite interesting, but the content sometimes seems too abrupt.

The author's description of changing perspectives is so poor, it's a bit hard to read.

It's so confusing I read three or four chapters, and the names of people appeared out of nowhere.

It's well written, but you have to pay after it's put on the shelves, otherwise you won't be able to read it, it's too greedy for money.

Emmmmm What I wrote before is very good, now are we going to farm? The protagonist now works as a bodyguard, a teacher, and finally a nanny for the heroine. Is writing a heroine just for the sake of being a breadwinner...