Echoes of the Old Days

Can the author please close their eyes while writing? I have a phobia of secondhand text and don't want to read anything reprinted. 🐶

First, let's talk about the advantages. The world-building is engaging; the plot is well-developed and doesn't get sluggish; the characters are well-developed and not bland; the story is compelling; and the values ​​presented are sound. Compared to other books on Qidian, it's considered excellent. Shortcoming It has relatively few drawbacks, but they do significantly impact the reading experience.

When did Daily Poison Delivery become so powerful? It actually recommended a normal novel!

As the title suggests, I'm setting up a pot here. Everyone can bring their own ingredients, and then wait for an opportunity to catch a seal and put it in the pot. Then you can enjoy a delicious seal feast!

Please improve the scene transitions. One line they're chatting indoors, the next they're somewhere else. While I can understand them, the overall experience is terrible. Including a few expositions in the middle would add more text and make the reading experience smoother. The characters and plot are quite interesting, but the content sometimes feels too abrupt.

I've never felt happy in Seal Mom's book club 😭

The author's use of shifting perspectives is terrible; it's a bit difficult to read.

Why am I reading less and less? The later chapters are all gone! Thumbs down!

It's all so messy. I read three or four chapters, and the names of the characters appeared out of nowhere.

It's well-written, but you have to pay to read it after it's published; that's too greedy.