I Have a Die of Fate

Where do low-level adventurers get so many women?

Everything else is okay, except that the few spells you draw are all disabled. You can't bring weapons with Burning Hands. The lightning pull can pull others normally, but you can also fly over. Thunder Wave is even more difficult to collapse. It can pull everything. It can be said that it is a completely disabled skill and is not as practical as the original version.

In this kind of adventure novel, why does the protagonist always have to form a group? You say it's just an ordinary person, but is it necessary for the protagonist, who is obviously a cheater, to hug each other for warmth? If you open up a little more, your strength will change every day. Even if you open up a little, it will only take a while to improve by a level. Can other teammates keep up? Moreover, how to explain the progress of the protagonist and the props that appear out of nowhere? How can they be hidden from people who have never seen it before, and how can they be hidden from people who have been getting along day and night. And how should other members be shaped? If there is more portrayal than the main character, it will become the main character. If there is less portrayal, it will be a mere accessory. No matter how you look at it, it's all thankless, not to mention that most authors don't have the ability to write about so many people The above are my personal thoughts and questions. I don't know why there are no novels where the protagonist is a lone wolf adventurer. I hope someone with ideas can answer this (don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that the protagonist cannot have friends and women. But friends and women are different from members of the same adventure group. Friends and women can only get together at specific times, while members of the same adventure group stay together most of the time. Any changes in the protagonist can be noticed at a glance)

It's still an outrageous economic system, and it's a common Western fantasy. The other articles are pretty good, you can take a look.

Wouldn't it be more convenient to call them bottom?

After reading the first three chapters, it attracted me to continue reading, but the author's name made me physically uncomfortable. I won't store it in the bookcase, otherwise it will always feel like Xiaoqiang is in the bookcase.

The writing is very good, and it is rare that there is no fantasy novel that fails. The only drawback is the price setting. Most of the rewards are not worthy of the life-and-death adventure, especially saving a village. In the end, the bounty alone is not enough to buy a piece of equipment in that village. As you can see in the latest chapter, the sorcerer whose presence has occupied hundreds of chapters has caused incalculable casualties. The bounty is only 300 gold. What is this money enough for? Is it worth the risk? 😅

Why is the data not good? I think the author clearly wrote it very well😁

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Are all the teammates female?😅

The most worrying thing about Western fantasy novels is that the protagonist is omnipotent. If the protagonist can do everything, why does he need his teammates to do it? The reason why the Stormwind team can write well is because everyone performs their own duties.

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To be honest, I feel that the writing is a bit ink, and some content just feels like pure content, accumulating strength, and then there is no very clear main mission, or it cannot be said that there is no clear main mission, it is that there is no obvious hook. Although the novel has some goal of going to the White Tower and looking for ancient magic content, these main lines are not very strong, feel too bland, or appear very bland in the story. It seems that it can be completed or not completed. So I feel like the story doesn't have the kind of appeal that makes people want to continue watching. Also, it was so smooth, it felt like a daily story about love and flirting with girls. Although the storyline of having to separate as soon as the relationship is confirmed will be cliché, it will indeed be more attractive and make people want to see the development of the plot of the story. This is a personal idea of ​​mine. I don't know how advanced writing methods should arouse people's emotions. However, accidents and stories that destroy the calm will always make the story more "interesting", that feeling of surprise. For example, if an accident occurs while the story is fighting a sorcerer, and Irene, who has just established a relationship, is injured and has to leave the protagonist and return to the earl's house, and is refused by the earl to meet the protagonist again, the story will become ups and downs, and there will be new and clear changes. And if the story follows the original plan of going to the White Tower, and then going there smoothly, if it really goes so smoothly, or if there is no big change in the middle and you go to the White Tower, it will be too bland. This is my personal idea, that is, the goal we should set with Irene is to go to the White Tower, but due to an accident, Irene returned to the Earl's house, leaving the protagonist alone. The protagonist tried hard to go to the Earl's house to retrieve Irene, but he came to the White Tower by mistake, and really reunited with Irene, but the result was that although Irene recovered, she could not remember the protagonist. This way the plot will have more ups and downs. Mainly, I didn't read the latest chapter until after 9pm, but I didn't expect that even if I read it so late, it would make it into the top 100 to read. It feels a bit magical. In fact, I think the writing is good, but the plot is a bit bland.

I don't know which one you like more?

Come on, brothers who insist on not using AI

What's wrong with you, author? You could still distinguish between thunder damage and lightning damage earlier, but why did you write that later the thunder damage changed to lightning? Thunder is a shock wave blast. I think your previous article was normal, but why did you mix it up later?

Do you like this style or the previous anime style?

This is my favorite Western fantasy harem novel. If you like it, please give me a like. I wish you a happy day!

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Doesn't Tina have a role in Chapter 29? I haven't seen it since I watched it, it's so weird🤔

A bit literary and youthful, with a bit more light novel style

The author writes fantasy novels in the same way as fantasy novels

The level of this book is very high, the writing and story rhythm are very good! Although it is still young, it is already a fairy seedling, and there is hope for fairy grass! If you like Western fantasy, it's well worth reading. Next, let's talk about some suggestions, First of all: there are a lot of typos, which shouldn't be done. Although they were corrected after the readers pointed them out, they should still be avoided as much as possible; Secondly, at the current starting point, under the heavy shackles, the author wrote out the desire calmly, which is very powerful. These are enough. These are the same as swear words. They are the condiments of the world view and plot. Naturally, normal is best, and excessive is not enough. Third, Irene's arrogant nature should be restrained. At the same time, the plot of her jealousy with the tavern maid cannot withstand scrutiny. The characters should be as equal as possible when competing on the same stage. Irene is a noble, possibly an upper-middle-class noble, and is also a formal mage professional. It is already a bit unbalanced that she can live in a tavern on the ground floor. Add to that the plot with the maid Lily, and it becomes distorted. In the previous first mission, it was described that the companions' huge change in attitude after discovering that the protagonist was a spell caster was described. When Irene first arrived at the tavern, she appeared as a mage without any cover. Therefore, in my opinion, this plot is the biggest contradiction and deduction point in this book. Fourth, the price issue mentioned by other book friends is already rare in Western fantasy novels, so don't force it. This is not a problem. Fifth, there is a big crisis in the world at the beginning, a small character saves the world, foundation building reverses the golden elixir, etc. In fact, the environment has gradually retreated. Society is changing, and readers' psychological needs are also changing. How big is your ability to carry a big bowl? Opportunity and experience are the same. The stage of the world is too big, don't rush to get on it so quickly. Sixth, the title of the book is not worthy of the content. As an aside, most online articles are fantasy, and those involving systems are also from games, but it is best not to mention these as much as possible. They are very subtle and affect the sense of substitution. Finally, I hope that this book will thrive and that the author will become a king, even if he is heavily dependent on it. There is absolutely hope that the quality of this book will be maintained!

Is it a more open-minded Western fantasy?

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So, what is the effect of the hair ( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ )? The crotch cloth is approved by the Goblin King. What is the effect of the hair?

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When will it be available on QQ Reading?