The Treasure-Hunting Ship of the Steam World

An exploratory fantasy novel rooted in the steampunk style, it focuses on the discovery and exploration of a new world view and weird species by a male protagonist who becomes a time traveler after a "big change in the world". Although the starting setting is a bit conventional: both parents are dead, and the brother and sister are dependent on each other, after all, this is not a day-long or urban love affair, and there is no need to worry about "orthopedic surgery" happening 🤓 As the saying goes, family love is also love, and the relationship between the two people needs no introduction. The interactive scenes during the relationship cleverly add a lot of personality charm to the originally monotonous male protagonist. Although the work "Goldfinger" is not a superior choice like the "Quest System" to make the protagonist's growth smoother, the "Exploration Guide" that covers a series of functions such as large maps, illustration collection, and professional skill (talent) tree development is undoubtedly the "hand of God" in my opinion, which greatly enhances the look and feel of the book. The mutated native species, "phlogiston", easily corrodes the human spirit. As an indispensable core element in the worldview, the latter is not only linked to the golden finger, but also implies that the male protagonist's growth in this life will be closely related to it. The author uses AI to operate the "Wen Sheng Tu" very easily. The chapter pictures that fit the plot are definitely a rare thing in today's fantasy literature regardless of details. The existence of the "flying big fish head" and the "sky-bellied shrimp" is not to explain the reality behind the weird pictures. They are not alien species with "Cthulhu elements", nor are they the product of a mixture of Eastern folk customs and Western mythology. The mutations of life forms in the native world all emphasize the particularity of this world. The gradual progression of the plot is quite suitable. Religious views and evil forces that are common in fantasy novels are inevitable. In the current plot, the two brothers and sisters who are targeted because of their special identities and strong talents also indicate the dangers of the subsequent growth process. It is obvious that the sister who tends to be a "researcher" cannot resist the covetousness of the hostile organization. The male protagonist who has become a "combatant" naturally has to protect the peace of the family as an elder brother. If you want to talk about the emotional line that is not yet clear in the book, it is absolutely nonsense to say "not looking forward to it" (✧◡✧) There is a saying that the "low profile" in the early stage does not mean that you will still be alone in the middle and later stages. In my opinion, The emotional interaction clips in the daily background are more like adjustments and polishes outside of the battle plot. To be honest, if the author grasps the proportion of "combat exploration" and "personal emotions" in the plot, the results will undoubtedly be able to reach a higher level.

Didn't you say that the protagonist has his own ship? Why did he join the official organization?

I really like the feeling of steam, sky, airships, mechas, apocalypse and semi-industrial and semi-medieval times. On the market, there are either pure mecha novels, old-fashioned Western fantasy magic, or thin steampunk shells. Only your book brings the collapsing world shrouded in fog, the roaring steam machinery, and the treasure-hunting flying flying through the sea of clouds. The boat, the knight mecha where steel collides with flesh and blood, the feudal aristocratic royal power, and the mystery hidden in the phlogiston, have completely formed the most fascinating look in my fantasy. I have been fantasizing like this since I read Hayao Miyazaki's works. If you write it out, I hope that it will be a Miyazaki-style adventure later. I must support it.

Very exciting🌹 (👍ᐛ)

Love to watch

Well, I hope the author will learn from the lesson of the previous book and not write about stupid people, and don't emphasize that the protagonist is particularly smart because if you don't write well, it will make readers feel disgusted. Also, you must bring in the protagonist's worldview and don't write about the Virgin Mary or anything like that. What readers want to see is a charismatic protagonist like Liu Bang who uses his charisma to win over his subordinates. Remember that in the early stage of development, you must not write pity for the people, feel sorry for the people, etc. You can treat them better than the normal nobles. If you want the people to live a better life, you can write it in the middle and later stages.

Because the adventure at the beginning is particularly attractive, I originally thought that the protagonist would be the adventure king alone with the system, and then slowly form a group, collect teammates, develop and grow, and come into contact with various rare creatures, environments, and ecology. Adventure, puzzle solving, creature collection, treasure hunting, role playing, steampunk, just think about it and you will be happy. As a result, I participated in some kind of selection inexplicably, entered the government inexplicably, and used all kinds of officialdom tricks to show off and slap in the face. Even forming a team to play a dungeon was a bit disgusting. If I want to see these, why don't I go to the city and reality categories to look for them? I couldn't bear to watch it because of the amazing opening. I don't know if I will take risks later. Why does this name and the opening have to be transferred to the system? It's just like the Pirate King Luffy just went to sea and started his big adventure. When you thought he was going to start his legend at sea, he directly joined the navy and started to get promoted within the system.

There don't seem to be many domestic steam-style writers. Writers who get into the genre after Mystery are generally a bit geeky; while Chinese-style steam is mostly a bit folklore; light novels are generally influenced by Hayao Miyazaki or the multi-turret cult (especially those with airships), which are somewhat silly and crude. But the oldest or fundamental steampunk style, also known as "Victorian Fantasy", is actually quite exquisite and gorgeous. Although there are many hell jokes nowadays such as "Victoria carefully selected people with white feathers", Britain in the Victorian era was indeed prosperous and "shining like newly cast brass". Therefore, the original steampunk was full of "the beauty of the rising economy", and the overall aesthetic was very high-spirited and uplifting. Nowadays, the steampunk style products that are searched for three-dimensional products are often exquisitely or even complicatedly decorated. Based on this background, the steam world is naturally adapted to the British style (such as mystery) and Spanish style (although Spain was the British mat at the time); it is also natural to match the American colonization and western pioneering; even the steam Ming Dynasty in the fantasy world line has its own unique flavor. But the author's combination of steam and Russian style is indeed very novel and something I have never seen before. In terms of stereotypes, the Russian style is gloomy and sad, which is most suitable for the equally gloomy and gloomy diesel punk (incidentally, the Soviet Union is also black, lol). But from another perspective, the Russian-style remote loneliness and steam (especially airship) adventure may unexpectedly fit together. The Russian aesthetic combines grandeur and delicacy with a steamy style. While paying attention to functional beauty, it also has exquisite decoration. If you can get it right, it's really full of flavor. When I communicated with book friends before, I mentioned the concept of "post-wasteland", which refers to the new civilization rebuilt from the wasteland regaining order and entering a new period of development. While picking up the legacy of the old civilization, it also carries out new development of its own. On the one hand, it retains the garbage-picking elements of the wasteland style of "scientific research relies on archeology"; on the other hand, it injects a pioneering and adventurous spirit similar to steampunk, abandoning the "sense of destruction" of the traditional wasteland and instead emphasizing development and rebirth. Highlight the aesthetic taste of "tree stumps\scorched wood sprouts". I think there are some similarities with this article. It's a long story, and it's basically all about himself. I hope the author doesn't find it annoying (laughs). It's really rare to see a steam world article with a strong sense of adventure. I really can't help but want to say a few more words. If you are lucky enough to have the author take the time to read it, please also talk about the author's understanding of the artistic style of steam and airships. I hope to see you again, so lucky! Also, the author's illustrations are great, I especially like the one about the big slug. I have to say that illustrations are a good idea to increase the authenticity rate after being put on the shelves; and the era of big AI has reduced the cost of illustrations, which is very good. However, the style of the character drawings is too different from the style of the scene and setting drawings, which can't help but make things look a bit awkward. I have seen a few Liantu ups at station B. The author can go and share the elixir prescriptions with them.

The author obviously lacks experience in online writing in the past two years. Two drops of fried eggs, his younger sister is studying, and the host did not expect anyone to improvise equipment. There are many, very many small poisonous points in this kind of strange problems, but on the other hand, the author can still tell a story clearly and attractively despite so many small poisonous points, which shows that the author's level is good. However, it would be better if some ancient plots and small plots that reduce wisdom can be avoided.

The author has completely missed the topic. Where is the ship in your introduction? Where is your hunter group? Why are you still writing about political struggles here, and writing non-stop? ? 😡😡😡😡😡

I have now read Chapter 34 of the Museum Project, and although I am still fully subscribed, I can't stand it anymore. . . I came here to see the monster hunting and treasure hunting adventure, not to see the zz fight, intrigue and deceit. I am a bit confused whether to give up.

The world view is really good, it made my eyes light up, but I am almost 30 this year, and I have watched the plot when I was 12 years old. It is too old. This routine is almost 20 years old, and I am sick of it. I hope the author can make the plot more adventurous, or mainly describe the wonders or creatures in the world view.

The author doesn't seem to understand what the point of his book is - it's a different world! To be honest, this subject matter is really interesting. The first few chapters of hunting in a completely different world are very interesting. Basically all the book reviews I read said this. What is interesting is the fresh subject matter, not the author's bloody plot design from at least 10 years ago. I was really disgusted by that part, but I couldn't bear to part with such a novel subject matter. After that, I jumped directly from the robot to the second volume. I sincerely advise the author to use your strengths and understand yourself. How is it different from others? Don't always use your plot design that is at least 10 years out of date to compete with the author who has been writing for more than 10 years to compete with the plot of conspiracy, political palace fighting, a completely new and different world adventure, unseen magical creatures, unique customs, and professional military settings. Write something that readers have not seen and that other authors have not written. There is no way that your book will not be popular. Which old dog oil authors are you comparing to those tracks?

How should I put it? It's too vulgar. You have to bring a sister. The key is to bring her with you. You still can't write well.

What our readers want to watch is an adventure in a completely different world, not these intrigues and political dramas! It's not these bullshit political camp fights that attract our readers! It's so unconstrained! And the countless authors you wrote are all bad and very bloody. Do you understand, author!

I don't understand why in a world where poor people can fly, the main character can't even afford meat. The cost of aircraft fuel is higher than the cost of starch. Or there is some mysterious power in this world that makes flight costs very low. Then the cost of mass-producing animals and plants using very low flight costs as a power source will only be lower. The high oil prices in our real world can keep material costs so low. Or is it that the sun of this world has gone out?

It feels like the author is writing in a stream-of-consciousness way, and his mind directly defaults to what happened when he was going through the plot, and he wrote some plot points secretly in a subtle way. Then every time a new plot is triggered, a lot of people will comment on the book and ask where the pre-plot is, and the author will explain it one by one without writing it directly. But it's better to prevent theft than garbled code, hahahaha

To be honest, author, if most of your career settings are based on AI and even more or less of your articles use it, I won't mention it. You wrote a good beginning. With the momentum at the beginning, you can write a fantasy adventure road novel. I believe that most book lovers who are attracted by the introduction want to read this. They want to see the protagonist form an airship, form a group, and explore the world in his own airship. However, as you write it, it becomes a show-off and a slap in the face. Personally, I think the story line of the sister is the biggest failure. It forces the protagonist into a story line that he should not go to, causing the tone of the entire book to change drastically.

The first few chapters were well written, and they gave me the adventure and hunting in the unknown world that I wanted to see. However, within a few dozen chapters, it deviated from the theme. Joining forces, completing tasks, and fighting between forces were all the same old routines.

The last time I saw an excellent work about empty islands and adventures was "Pillars of Eta". I didn't expect to see such a masterpiece again after so many years. Although the subject matter is novel, the conception of the content does not follow the same formula as the white articles currently on the market. The development of the worldview also becomes more stable as the story progresses. And having your own ideas about the structure of various equipment in the steampunk worldview is not something you can just take for granted and can give you a detailed description.        ，:，5% It can be clearly felt that the author intentionally lengthened the protagonist's growth process by reducing the intensity of the golden finger. However, the excellent adventure plot makes up for this lack of combat power. Currently, I don't feel that the part is particularly watery. The characterization is a bit deliberate, focusing on criticizing several teammates and instructors of the protagonist. There is too little ink and serious facial makeup, and there is not enough interaction between the characters. For example, the protagonist's instructor is portrayed as a tough guy, but he comes across as talkative. The feeling of being in a superior position is not quite enough. The winter coffin looks similar to that of a special forces unit. The sense of oppression given to an instructor like you when communicating with people is too low, and so is the sense of mystery. All in all, it makes me feel a bit like the bearded, smoking man from Valorantri. He may be considered tough, but his character is not qualified to serve as such a decisive and powerful special forces commander. Moreover, too little content about the interaction between the protagonists will result in the characters not being vivid enough. My suggestion is to strengthen this area more. Summary: The world view is novel, the content is substantial, the writing is above average, and the characterization is average. For readers who don't like short stories, I can give it 7.5/10. For readers who like steampunk, post-apocalypse, adventure and other elements, I can give it 8.5/10.

It's really hard to believe that I can read a novel written in 1926 in 2026. The clichéd plot was so embarrassing that I dug out an entire neighborhood with my toes.

What kind of book is this? Why is it full of words? How can anyone read it?

First of all, it is certain that the author has put a lot of effort into the setting, story background and combat background, but the plot of the story is blunt. The protagonist is how a trainee hunter in a small town was taken a liking to by a county's special forces. This arrangement is very rigid.                    Then he was selected by the secret service in the provincial capital. He is not known for any extraordinary performance. I was selected, which I felt was very blunt. The other thing is this secret force. Really unqualified. I don't know this story. How high is the level? But you say you are a secret fighting force, which is the sharpest knife among sharp knives. They are all performing secret-level combat missions. He recruited the protagonist, the level 2 leader of the combat team, just to arrange a rational adventure mission for the protagonist. This span is too big at once, that's how I feel. Go big, you are the team leader. He can accept tasks from the headquarters, but he is only level 2. Is level 2 too low? Let's not say it's the second stage of job transfer. It has to be the end of the first stage, otherwise your qualifications as a secret force are too low? If a story like this is set to include job transfer, second transfer, or third transfer, you will be in a secret department. The group leader should be of a very high level. Then why is it only level 2? Is he level enough? Especially in that kind of extraordinary world, your combat ability should be at least average. Otherwise, how could I tease you about that battle? Especially when you are performing dangerous missions. In stories like yours, it is written about capturing this third military field. That's such an important thing to send one. A team less than level 1. Okay, it is set that the requirement to enter the arsenal is less than level 1, just like there are restrictions in the secret realm. Then shouldn't there be some high-level characters and teams around you? Otherwise, this arsenal is not important. But you said that a huge floating island is not important for a place that no longer has land? I feel it should be very important. After all, it is still very important to describe the commendation through coming back. But for a very important mission, there was no team outside, just one frigate. There are no high-level personnel on the frigate yet. This is a very abrupt point for me. But this novel is very detailed in its settings and descriptions. It's just that this part of the story is very awkward when you think about it. The analogy to other novels is that there are 9 levels of extraordinary combat power. Or 19 levels, after all, he changed jobs. Level 2 team leader dispatched by the secret service. There are no hidden measures in secret missions, you just can't see the description. Are all the members of this group selected or elite? But it just feels like they can die outside, that's all. If the protagonist hadn't exploded or the plot control had been changed, I guess the team would have been destroyed, including everyone on the frigate, just to highlight the protagonist. Too deliberate. This secret department is like a fool. Even if you don't know that people from other organizations are secretly following you. It's not a mission yet. It's actually fishing, but there is no fishing guy. At least he's not reflected in the text. Then the protagonist follows him as the team leader, a level 2 team leader. Conduct cross-border operations. You could say that he is a low-level martial artist, judging from the profile he wrote earlier. He has a second turn. That's basically not very low. How do you say it? The setting is very novel, including the background setting and everything else. But the design of this bridge section looks awkward. I can't help but complain, I wonder if anyone feels the same way.

Maybe I didn't understand the details correctly. I thought it was an adventure story about building and upgrading airships, like searching for ships at the beginning.

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It's purely a personal opinion, don't read it if you don't like it I just saw the part about the end of the training, but I feel that the title, introduction and content are deviated; when I saw the title and introduction, I thought it was an adventure group article about exploring, taking risks, and collecting materials and equipment in the apocalyptic world; but after actually reading it, I felt that it was biased towards an apocalyptic savior article; it's not that savior articles are not good, but such an introduction and title will attract audiences who are not savior articles (such as me), but the audience with this tendency will not easily click in to read.

Author, author, I've read half of it. I've already talked about other issues, so I won't go into them. I just want to write about some of the transferred knowledge later. Can I understand it clearly before I transfer it? Since I'm applying real-life knowledge, don't make any mistakes. Otherwise, if I transfer the wrong knowledge, what I like will become what I don't like. For example, the shaped charge warhead is destroyed by kinetic energy breakdown mechanics. Every time it is mentioned, it is thousands of degrees high temperature, burning through, melting through, and hardening into chemical destruction. There is a lot of space. Every time I read about it, I feel uncomfortable. There are many related knowledge points like this, so I really don't want to come back to it later.

The book has been deleted. There is no well-designed plot in this novel. It is full of poisonous points.

This may be the story of Rorschach recruiting Yuri that happened in another world. Above the churning sea of ​​clouds, an ornithopter flew across the clouds. Sitting on the trembling Rusty Nail were two young men who had become first-class hunters. Same boat, same people, but the situation has changed. "Remember the days when we drove this broken ship to make a living, Rorschach?" Yuri shouted to cover up the sound of the piston. "What's wrong, descendant of the royal family, I miss the days when I had to hesitate for a long time to buy a gift for Natasha." The red-haired hunter looked at the clouds in the distance and yelled in response. "Screw you Rorschach, weren't you trying your best to get Wendy out at that time?" Yuri said angrily, "What's going on? Ask me to fly around in the sky!" Rorschach couldn't help laughing when he heard his best friend's familiar foul mouth. He called Yuri this time because he wanted to take him as the helmsman of the treasure hunt ship. He was about to speak when he heard Yuri yelling again. "Rorschach, Natasha and I are engaged!" Yuri's voice was unusually excited and covered up the sound of the piston, "Your boy must be my best man!" Hearing the news, Rorschach swallowed the invitation that he had already prepared, and he hesitated as he looked at the crisis-ridden sky that had carried most of Rorschach's life. At this moment, a huge dark blue shadow burst out of the clouds - a sky sail fish interrupted his hesitation. The huge fat fortress is worth 1500 centimeters, and it is the prey that leads to a turning point in his and Yuri's fate! It was also the first time he found green spirituality on his prey. Amidst the pneumatic sound of the piston, Yuri held the operating lever excitedly, "Rorschach, have you seen the sky sail fish in front of you!" Rorschach, who had already replaced his gun with a new first-level phlogiston equipment, said: "I saw it!" "Brother, do you want to earn another 1,500 work points!" Rorschach got up from his seat, connected a rope and stood at the side of the cabin. Yuan shouted to Yuri: "I'm ready, how about you?" When Yuri heard it, he laughed out loud, held the lift rod, and jerked the nose of the plane up: "Get a partner!" The red-haired hunter jumped out of the cabin again, but unlike the last time, he no longer fought with a hastily prepared aerodynamic wind spear for the sake of a chance of promotion, but instead used sophisticated equipment to conquer the sky. Listening to the whistling of the cold wind, Rorschach activated the phlogiston weapon in his hand and charged towards the once formidable enemy. Cool dividing line "This is really amazing!" "Is that guy bringing back a sky sail fish again?"… Sitting on the Rusty Nail, watching the orderly landing route go into chaos again, Rorschach looked at his partner who had fought with him several times and asked: "Yuri, will you still fly in the sky in the future?" Busily cooperating with the Port Authority for airship landings Yuri was obviously stunned for a moment, "What kind of problem is this?" But after thinking about it carefully, he replied, "No way, Natasha and I will move uptown in the future, so we still need to fly this crappy thing." "Yes." Luo Xia finally made up his mind, "By the way, I will be your best man. And this sky sail fish will be your wedding gift!" "You didn't want to pay, so you asked me to go hunting, right?" Yuri was furious. "Yes, I was discovered by you. I was lucky enough to meet the Sky Sail Fish, which gave you an advantage." The fine steel cable rope held the Sky Sail Fish, and the blond pilot was finally about to land, and there was a high probability that he would not fly again. The red-haired hunter will continue to take off because he is not qualified to stop yet. Watching Yuri arguing with the people at the Port Authority about the processing fee, Luo Xia found that the descendant of the royal family was still fussing over things like him, and the loneliness in his heart disappeared a lot. The blond pilot, Yuri Volkov, has landed. Wish you happiness, Yuri!

Did you see that this book involves Ai being removed from the list? Real or fake?