The Mountain and River Gentleman of Qingdu

I haven't even finished writing "The Patrol Captain" yet, and I've started a new book.

A journey of unrestrained asceticism, a unique way of getting along with the good monsters. The monsters are all quite eccentric, with the fun of a fairy raising a pet and the satisfaction of the protagonist as a worldly master. The protagonist lives in a group of monsters and opens his own dojo, which is quite interesting. The visuals are particularly good, the transitions are comfortable, and the characters are rich and vivid.

A few more chapters

At the beginning, the protagonist has no logic to start a mountain and become the founder. Although the protagonist is very Diao, it is also written that the protagonist has just started practicing Qi. Maybe the protagonist's Qi training is equivalent to a certain high level in this world, but it does not expand the world view. It is obviously very refreshing, but there is a feeling that I have to hold it in while preparing for sex. In short, it is mysterious and plays the role of Riddler with the readers. It is uncomfortable to hold in. I don't know how it will be after I don't see it. I don't know if it will come back.

It's strange these double-labeled authors! People can kill and eat demons at will, and they are also called to eliminate demons and subjugate demons! Monsters can't eat people, and eating people is a heinous crime? ? Is it fair? What do you let them eat if they don't eat meat? ?

Why does the main character on the cover have a tattoo on his face?

You can only talk about fake Taoist priests who look good, or you can kill them all the way and encounter a female swordswoman who raises cannibal foxes, and then catch and release them.

The protagonist, who has a lot of opportunities and no background, is very arrogant outside, but no one kills him to seize the opportunity. The logic does not match up!

The vernacular is mixed with bookishness, but in some places too much force is used, and some commas are given randomly, making it nondescript. As for the protagonist, he is so self-confident that he is so confident that he will be killed in the territory of the demon clan. The author will deal with the aftermath, right?

How long has it been on the shelves for a Taoist, but not an immortal? Just so many emotional scenes?

What should I say? The author's aesthetic may be a little different from the public's. I can't imagine an immortal wearing a white gauze (movies and TV dramas have led to the subjective belief that it is a female-only prop), and then having large scars or birthmarks on his face. (That's the cover character) It doesn't feel like a monk, more like a knight. But when the two are combined, the author is most likely a young man, and the plot is relatively immature. So far, what I have read is that the donkey leads the way back to the dojo. It feels like a hoe here and a hoe in the west. The protagonist portrays Brother B, and then the knight's pleasure. Anyway, that's all I feel subjectively. It's so high on the new book list, but there are less than 100 reviews. I feel like it's also due to the appearance of the protagonist.

It's very fragmented. The core of the underworld cultivating immortals is covered with the skin of traditional immortals.

With all due respect, do the characters in this novel all have mania? Facing a big monk who can hold you to death with one hand, one or two of them are like missing a brain, they just draw their swords and cut them without any reason. Isn't that a bit crazy?

In these two hundred chapters, the protagonist does not look like the same person. In the first half, he is like a fool, killing decisively. In the second half, he suddenly enlightens and becomes polite, and does not look like a person.

I don't understand. After reading Chapter 16, I don't know what the motivation of the supporting character is, and I don't know the motivation of the protagonist. I took the boat to find the reason why the conferment failed, but when the boat capsized, I inexplicably went to find a place to practice, and stopped looking. I figured out the reason by myself. As I said before, I had only been practicing for a while, and then for no apparent reason, I started going to the fox demon territory to kill foxes and sell fox furs. In addition, two inexplicable sect disciples, the inexplicable donkey, inexplicably went to snatch the fox demon's spiritual fish. The key is not to make enemies. If you want to say that you are above the human race and specialize in killing monsters, what about the tiger monster and that military advisor? Why doesn't it count? What is the protagonist going to do if he's not the protagonist? What's the motive? Purely with a basket? There are quite a lot of novels about sitting on a mountain and practicing meditation, but I don't know how to evaluate yours. It's not as good as a fifth-level writer 😅

The protagonist is constantly killing and killing, mainly because he doesn't have a few pounds, so his survival depends entirely on God's will.

I rambled on without knowing what the theme was, and the progress of a complete plot was too slow. It felt like writing a diary.

Isn't your title called Invincible Flow? Being beaten into such a horrible state is called invincible flow, right? Don't scream next time

The protagonist is just like a beast with power, there is no difference, so proceed with caution

This introduction has no desire for people to read it. It is nothing more than the second child of God and the third child of you.

It seems like it was written in a flash, and I feel like there is no outline...

He was not as chic and elegant as he imagined. He didn't even ask the little girl who led the way and was implicated by him in the first place. He knew even the fox recognized him, but she was still pretending to be cool.

The orthodox sect lives next to demons and is surrounded by demons. It is inconvenient for those who seek immortality and the disciples of the sect to get in and out, and they even give birth to people who live in harmony with the demons. They are not demonized cultivators like Fangxian heretics, and they are orthodox cultivators. What is the point of this? What are the pros and cons?

This issue of Sanjiang is too watery, and this book is actually the best among them.

Why do I have the impression that I've seen it before, but it's vague and a little different?

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There are poop and piss in the first three chapters. Is this a realistic way of writing or something? Spending money to ride on a submarine is like a black slave. Sitting in poop and piss, animals are not so disgusting.

I am a Shanshui man from Qingdu, and I am naturally lazy and arrogant. He Yu wrote the wind edict and asked Yunyong to borrow the moon chapter. Thousands of poems, thousands of cups of wine, caring about gods and waiting kings. Returning lazily from the Jade Tower and Golden Tower, Luoyang is intoxicated by placing plum blossoms.

This dog and donkey caused trouble for the protagonist, why don't you deal with it?

The author should change the cover, this picture really doesn't look good.