After Getting Cheats, I Became the Strongest Beast Tamer

Illustration of a brother and sister pet interacting 🙂

Why are we attacked so often? What is the government doing?

Putting aside the protagonist's idiotic attempt to steal the artifact after it appears as a baby, which is tolerable as long as it doesn't affect the subsequent plot, the second beast is intelligent and can talk. It has been imprisoned and tortured for a long time and yearns for freedom, only to be subdued by the protagonist after just two meals.

I don't understand. This is supposed to be a lighthearted, enjoyable story, but your update frequency is even lower than that of a novice writer's imaginative novel. The core of a lighthearted story is that it's enjoyable and plentiful, with a reasonable plot and no offensive tropes. But with your daily updates, I feel like following it every day was a huge mistake.

It's clearly a cultivation-type game with all the skills for researching evolution, and the family relationships are well-written, with the older sister being an even more important supporting character. Yet, it insists on taking the clichéd fantasy route of fighting wars and engaging in vendettas. It's truly a case of casting pearls before swine, and buying the casket and returning the pearl.

Please make your tamed beasts look more imposing, not dogs or cats. Most tamed beasts these days start out as either dogs or cats, it's getting really tiresome. And please, no humanoid ones either.

The latest chapter of Taotie's limit is 22 meters, which is a bit... They came to your home to treat you and even helped you evolve your rare creature, all because they saw your crocodile talent. Then they were all amazed by the age and size of the Taotie, but you're not even as big as that crocodile was in its youth? I think you should at least be on par with it, or even slightly larger, to justify all the build-up.

The writing is alright, readable, but could the premise be polished a bit more? 1. The connection between human and pet cultivation is too weak. What's the genius behind this? Besides the protagonist having a cheat that helps the pet develop, could we strengthen the connection between humans and pets through the pet space?

Beast Taming Dyeing

I don't understand. Instead of polishing it properly, why start a completely new book? Does cutting this one out will make the other one better? Clearly, if you write it properly, it could be a good one.