The Outcast: You Asked Me to Cultivate Qi, and I Became an Immortal?

I stopped watching when I saw the protagonist being threatened and involved with the Quanxing Sect's acupuncture techniques. I didn't know if the protagonist had actually managed to incapacitate or kill these people; it's disgusting. The Quanxing Sect is terrorists. The protagonist was kidnapped and threatened to learn their techniques.

You've all wasted your time watching, haven't you? Isn't it obvious? There is a female lead: Lu Jin, the childhood sweetheart who's a "loser," and Zhang Zhiwei, the confidante who suddenly appears in your life. Stop asking if there's a female lead!

Don't drink too much chicken soup; just take a small sip. I remember that the ending of the book "Five Blessings Arrive at the Door" was like this. Too much motivational talk is tiring for people; they don't want to listen anymore. The plot needs to move forward; frankly, what readers like to read is an interesting story.

The starting level is too high; with his current cultivation level, he's almost capable of single-handedly fighting off 100,000 Kwantung Army soldiers. This also makes it unreasonable for you not to destroy Japan; destroying Japan is historical nihilism. This is difficult.

In the latest chapter of the manga, Zuo Ruotong finally mastered the Triple Rebirth Technique. Unfortunately, this proved that the Triple Rebirth Technique was not the path to heaven. This shows that the Triple Rebirth Technique is just a technique, not the Dao. At best, it is just an enhanced version of the Eight Extraordinary Techniques. Therefore, Zuo Ruotong disbanded the Sanyi Sect and stopped misleading students.

It is true that the Quanxing act in this way, which is in line with their nature. But the fact that some people can say this from the perspective of the whole community shows that they themselves have a problem. If you remove the cultivation-themed filter, the encounters between Si Chong and Cheng Zhen are actually quite common.

The book presents philosophical arguments, but in reality, it's the author setting up a stage to answer his own questions. I wrote too much and lost control. Moreover, one person has many systems, so why is one high and this one low? To write well, it shouldn't be too superficial or too profound. Overall good

You can't even manage 4000 words a day anymore. If you need to rest, then rest; if you need to take leave, then take leave. You've only written 11 pages in 13 days this month. What kind of time discrepancy are you playing? You only update one page a day. Do you think you can fool people with this time discrepancy?

Lu Jin is such a good person! Zheng, as a good friend, didn't he know that Wugensheng was the direct culprit behind Lu's master's death? He even became sworn brothers with him, and still had the nerve to ask Lu Jin for help? I've become sworn brothers with the leader of the Quanxing Sect, your master's killer! Save my good brother! Where does he get the nerve? Lu even feels guilty for him; he really bullies good people!

Half Confucian, half Taoist, and half immortal; the truly virtuous and the wholehearted are the truly wise. He possessed countless hidden schemes and was known in the martial arts world as Old Man Li.