I Have a Pupil That Sees Immortality

Are these two families really worth the protagonist risking his life to help? Did these two families do your family a great favor, or are they going to pass on their legacy to you? Why not use that time to figure out how to find a successor instead of meddling in other people's business? In chaotic times, all you do is help others to protect yourself—a total pushover?

The book is good, but I honestly don't want to read it anymore. It's filled with suffering, numbness, selfishness, and constraints; there's no glimmer of humanity or joy in it. The whole book is too depressing. No matter how well-written it is, it's impossible for a book like this to achieve success. I'm not here to torture myself online.

My goodness, you're already interacting with the Netherworld Jellyfish, who's well past the Nascent Soul stage, at the Foundation Establishment level? It was one thing for a Foundation Establishment cultivator to get involved in the Nascent Soul battle in the Chessboard Realm, but then you started traveling with the Deity Transformation cultivator in the Azure Realm, and now you're traveling with…

The protagonist is a jinx; everyone who's good to him gets dragged down and killed. It's really toxic. I'm halfway through reading it 🙂. Every time someone close to him dies, a revenge plot unfolds. From the beginning until now, it's all about revenge, and everyone around him is dead 😒. All I can say is, the protagonist is a real jerk.

I abandoned the book after reading over 500 chapters. The later parts were poorly written, really poorly written.

The book is alright; the author's skill level is at least in the top 20% of Qidian.com. The main problem is the lack of a smooth transition; the author seems a bit rushed. The revival of spiritual energy should be gradual, taking at least 100 to 300 years for the protagonist to awaken his cheat abilities, slowly investigate cases, discover extraordinary beings, and gradually verify the revival of…

It's getting more and more chaotic, isn't it going to level up? What is this garbage? It's completely ruined, a complete mess. So many rare and precious resources aren't being used for leveling up. This is utter trash. I can't even look at it anymore. A Foundation Establishment cultivator dealing with Nascent Soul cultivators every day, how is this written?

The author's commitment to completing each story is commendable, unlike some authors who constantly start new projects only to abandon them halfway through. Secondly, the author's writing style is generally good, especially the early chapters which are very engaging and captivating. However, the weaknesses are concentrated in the mid-to-late stages.

All three books were good in the beginning, but started to decline in the middle and became completely bad in the end. This book's early eerie sense of resurgence was exceptionally well-written, and the fight scenes were also fantastic. However, it started to falter once it expanded to include multiple worlds in the middle, and a mere Foundation Establishment cultivator began to blend in with a group of powerful figures.

The book about Zhenjun could be written as him proclaiming himself Erlang Shen and leading an army to sweep away all demons and injustices. All the great saints would be terrified and behave themselves in his presence. Finally, you could write about the legends of Zhenjun and the lives of people in all walks of life, and that would be the end of the story.