I Have a Pupil That Sees Immortality

Are these two families worth the protagonist's desperate efforts to help? Do these two families have a great debt to your family, or are they passed on to you? If you like to meddle in other people's business, why don't you have time to think about how to find an inheritance? To protect yourself in troubled times, help others everywhere, and be a good person?

The book is very good, but I really don't want to read it. The book is full of suffering, numbness, selfish desire, restraint, etc., But there is no sparkle and happiness of humanity. The style of the whole book is too depressing. No matter how good the writing is, it is impossible to achieve results. I'm not here to find abuse online.

Oh my god, has Foundation Establishment begun to interact with the Netherworld Jellyfish, which has not yet been integrated into the body? Forget about the previous Foundation Establishment mixed with the Nascent Soul War in the chessboard world, the Blue Realm has begun to walk with the God of Transformation, and now it has interacted with the Netherworld Water above the integration stage. Mother, is it logical for you to have such a long span? It's just a matter of a glance that the Nether Jellyfish's ability has fallen to another level and snatched the Youpiao City where you built the foundation. It's missing a whole golden elixir, Nascent Soul, distraction, how many great realms have been combined, and it's still walking with you? Isn't it funny?

The protagonist is the villain. People who are good to the protagonist are all killed by the protagonist. It's really poisonous. I'm halfway through reading 🙂. Every time someone I'm close to is killed, I write a revenge plot. From the beginning to now, I have been seeking revenge, and everyone around me has died 😒. I can only say that the protagonist is a real dog.

I saw more than 500 chapters of abandoned books The writing at the end is terrible, really terrible

This book is not bad. The author's skills are at least within the first 20% of the sequence from the starting point. There is mainly no transition. The author is a little impatient. The recovery of spiritual energy must be slow. At least around 100 to 300 years, the protagonist begins to awaken the golden finger and slowly tries the case, thus discovering the truth. Appearing extraordinary, and slowly verifying the spiritual energy recovery, there are about 150 chapters in the middle. The protagonist slowly improves his strength, surpassing other natives by a long way, and the plot slowly unfolds. Unlike now, it is like the spiritual energy pouring down directly, and cats and dogs can become gods and ghosts.

The more I write, the more messy it becomes. Why don't you upgrade? What the hell? Completely broken, a complete mess. There are so many genius treasures that cannot be used for upgrading. Rubbish. I can't read it. I deal with the Transformation God every day during the foundation building period. How did you write it?

The fact that the author completes the story in each book is worthy of recognition, unlike some authors who keep opening up new holes and end the story half way through. Secondly, the author's writing style is still good, especially the early stage is very exciting and attractive. Let's talk about the shortcomings. They are basically concentrated in the middle and late stages. The plot seems very complicated, but at first glance it is confusing. After reading it, it is just that. It cannot stand up to scrutiny. Even after reading it, it does not leave much impression. I still remember that the author wrote in the early stage that the protagonist's three-party plan to build the foundation was in the dark moon and the wind was high. It can be said to be the commanding heights of this book, but he failed to maintain it. The plot in the later stages is very complicated and a bit rushed, which is not good. Finally, at the end of several of the author's books, the author intentionally or unintentionally writes about a grand worldview, jumping out of space or even time. I think it is okay to write two books in one book. However, writing like this all the time does not feel fresh and makes the article very boring at the end. I hope that the next book will be more down-to-earth, both at the beginning and at the end. No matter how many characters I want to write, I will strive to have a distinctive personality, so that people can quickly remember and leave an impression. The writing should be popular and humorous. In the chapter comments, readers put themselves into the comments, which shows that the level of characterization is in place. The above is my humble opinion, and I wish the author a prosperous future with his new book and a platinum and golden alliance.

All three books were good in the early stages, then went downhill in the middle stages, and ended up being terrible in the later stages. The weird sense of recovery in the early stages of this book is so well written, and the fighting settings are also very well written. In the middle stage, it starts to suck as soon as it gets involved in the world. A foundation builder starts to mix among a group of big guys~

The book about True Monarch can be completely written as the self-proclaimed God Erlang leads the army to sweep away all monsters and injustices. All the great saints will be frightened when they see it. Finally, it can be completed by writing the legends about True Monarch from all walks of life and the livelihood of people from all walks of life.