The Raven of Naples

The writing is quite good, but I am really curious about the future situation of the protagonist. Without mystery, it is difficult for the protagonist to have a wonderful performance. It depends on the author's performance. Okay, there is an element of mystery, a person who understands the language, but the presence is so low that I completely forgot about it.

The growth of evil fills the gap left by the government's loss of grassroots governance capabilities. The outcome is nothing more than "being" disappeared as the country is strong and the rule of law is improved and the power is gradually taken back/scientific enough to accept the imperial edict, or the evil continues to grow bigger/maintains strength. In fact, this country is not too far away from subjugation. Has the author figured out how to resolve this contradiction?

It's okay, but can the protagonist's name be unified? One moment Wang speaks and the other Zarath is very unimmersive, just like two people.

A very interesting Italian family business novel. It has a unique perspective, excellent writing, appropriate atmosphere, clear structure and most importantly, smooth narrative rhythm. Although the protagonist is just a "normal" crow, his role so far (120,000 words) has always been decisive but not obtrusive. Judging from the content, I always feel that the author is relatively young, but this kind of writing style, structure and the stability of updates so far clearly have the skills of an old author┐(￣~￣)┌ It has been a long time since I praised an article so much. If you can see it, I hope it can give the author a little more motivation. Judging from the current quality of the 120,000 words, the subsequent text is guaranteed to a certain extent, but this is an online text, you know, I can only hope that the outline of this book is solid enough, and the updates can continue to remain stable As for the view of the name "Wang Yu", I really don't understand the author's intention, maybe it is to make it easier for readers to bring it in? For me, it doesn't matter if I'm in the middle or the other.

It is really an honor for me to discover this book among a bunch of boring and impetuous works; I have forgotten how I discovered this book. I only remember that the unique title and the artistic painting on the cover attracted me immediately; I have also been a bookworm for more than ten years. In my more than ten years of reading experience, what I am most proud of is that I have developed the ability to "discover good books and discover my own masterpieces." In my mind, this book is enough to be rated as the "best" column. I'm a book geek. I don't like to follow the public to read books that are out of the ordinary or famous. I hate the feeling of following the herd. What I like most is to quietly dig out the fine books I want from a pile of complicated and boring works. They are like dusty pearls. The world cannot see its value, but I only enjoy its beauty and meaning. I especially like those novels with unique narrative styles, profound and realistic depictions of scenes and characters, profound themes, unique titles and introductions, and real but vivid and imaginative world views; I have already collected "The Dream of the Old God", "Back to the Past and Become a Cat", "Cat" "The Blade of Ren", "House of Worms", etc., And in the past few days, I have harvested it again - "The Crow of Naples". I think I will never forget this novel. I am extremely lucky once again that in my life, I can see this book. No, no, no, it is no longer a "book" to describe it, it should be a work of art - yes, it should be called a work of art, just like "Return" Like "Go to the Past and Become a Cat", it reflects a unique and real background of the era, the overall tone is light and interesting but shrouded in the trend of the times, the maverick protagonist, and the unique camera-like and cinematic scene descriptions every time a crow looks down in the sky and in special plots. What surprises me the most is the beautiful and strong soul image of the heroine shown by her ideals around Chapter 80. Yes, what I like is not the "decisive and decisive" that many people like. In my opinion, these are not what the heroine wants at all, and they are not the real her at all.            ，，， No matter what the world thinks, she knows she remains the same. Yes, she was originally a female college student. At the age of 22, she should have been able to attend school, have fun, and go shopping with her girlfriends without any worries like her peers. She should have gone home to see her dad during the holidays, found her true love after graduation, and lived her life in an ordinary way; this was what she had always expected. She has never forgotten her original intention. Therefore, this is what I really love about her. She was ordered to return to the family when she was in danger, win over people's hearts, handle matters big and small without leakage, and calmly use force to fight against foreign enemies... But throughout the whole process, what surprised me was that she was always her, never forgetting her original intention, never deteriorating because of the control of power, and never falling or getting lost because of the pursuit of power. She has never forgotten herself, that pure female college student. She is decisive, strong, and courageous; she is knowledgeable, cultured, and cultivated; even after she deeply understands the operating nature of society and the darkness and filthiness of human nature, she still insists on choosing a kind, pure, and ordinary future. She always remembers that she is working hard for peace and doing all this for a peaceful life in the future; She always remembers that bloodshed is so that no one will bleed in the future, and war is so that there will be no more wars in the future. In her, I see hope for the future, hope for society, and hope for the entire civilization. She is indeed a young lady studying sociology. To be honest, while waiting for the update, when I recalled the noble, proud and independent personality of the heroine, I actually developed a slight sense of inferiority - not status, not ability, to be honest, it was actually the most despicable simple emotion in my heart - a thought that I couldn't help but think, "If a wife is like this, what else can a husband ask for?" It is this kind of thought that makes me feel deeply ashamed and leads to a sense of inferiority - How can I, an ordinary person, have the nerve to stand on a high position and appreciate, appreciate and even possess such a beautiful soul from top to bottom? She is so noble, so strong, and so pure. I cannot bear and am unwilling to stretch out my dirty hands to tarnish her. I am unwilling to let my ordinary and mediocre life drag her down. What a nice girl. How ordinary I am. Sigh. So, author, You write slowly and I read slowly; You have planted a seed, and next year we will be delighted to see, Outside Naples where the spring breeze blows, such pure flowers are blooming everywhere.                                                                                                                                                                                                                   (laugh)

The explanation of "maintaining human cognition" is really not just a random explanation, because when I tried to change all the names to Zaratul, the style of the novel immediately changed to the animal world! "The breeding season has come again, and Zaratul is thinking about the major events of his life"... After changing all the names of animals, the words and ink about human nature in the plot are more like anthropomorphic descriptions of animals. Furthermore, it is normal for non-human transformation stories to retain the original name of the protagonist. What caused everyone's lack of sense of substitution was that "Zarathul" looked too much like a human name instead of a pet name. If everyone else called the protagonist "Xiao Hei", I'm afraid no one would want to change the protagonist's self-name to Xiao Hei. I have adjusted the description of the protagonist's self-awareness in the first chapter, which should be able to avoid misunderstandings among new readers. For readers who really feel uncomfortable, you can imagine that Zaratul is Wang Yu's vest, which should restore a sense of immersion. Thank you everyone for your opinions and suggestions. Decisions and modifications are made after careful consideration. I will pay attention to every comment. (Bow)

Hey, after all, this is guaranteed. I didn't expect it to be the pigeon spirit that emerged from the cat station.

Many years later, they will still think of that evening watching the sunset together

Originally, the results were okay, but then the author found a reason to take a break, and a large number of readers were lost. The author came back to update, and found that the results were not good, so he started to take leave again, updated intermittently, and the results further declined, and then gg. Standard process.

A very interesting novel, with leisurely sentences, unique characters, interesting enough story, excellent plot development, and fascinating background. It can be seen that the author is very capable. So far, I only see one shortcoming, that is, I discovered this book too early... Gkdgkdgkd