Adventures Adrift on the River Styx

There is something really wrong with this book. Obviously there is part of the plot that the author did not write out. The key plot is missing, which seems to have problems with the protagonist's character. I have seen this happen more than once. The author thought the reader understood it, but in fact the reader did not understand it at all. These days, everyone is well fed and clothed. The so-called lustful thoughts on a full stomach, except for Xiao Baiwen, everyone also pursues spiritual things. It also writes that the protagonist is used as a test subject, as a price, as a bargaining chip, and the protagonist is not ashamed but proud of it. What do you think, author? A very good conflict point in the early stage, the deep hatred between the magic tower and the protagonist, the ink stain was cleared by the tower owner in one sentence when the king appeared? Perhaps in the author's setting, the Magic Tower is very, very powerful. But the problem is that you haven't written this setting out yet. Second, what does he have to do with us? This is equivalent to the protagonist in "The God Solver" discovering that the women around him are all around him because of the master's mission, and since Haotian was planned and written, you can only forgive him/her... Do you think Dianhun Network will pounce? Your book is incomprehensible if it is not overwhelming. Originally, the protagonist looks crazy, which is quite interesting. What a pity...

"Writing a book is a personal matter" What I want to express is: The author needs to be responsible for his own words. If he is not satisfied with the words, why should he expect the satisfaction of others? Readers should be polite as readers and please do not interfere with the author's creation. Books are not for one person to read. If you feel there is a logical contradiction, please understand the two sentences separately. Reprinting is prohibited.

This book was added a long time ago, and I have read it many times. I also like this book very much, so I would like to express my opinions here. I hope the author can refer to it First of all, let's talk about the advantages of this book: 1. It is the easiest to see, there are a lot of laughs, there are always some complaints or psychological descriptions that are full of visual sense 2. It is more internal. And most importantly, the idealistic worldview and the power system of will-distorting reality are eye-catching and really attractive. Among the many novels that climb up one section at a time, other protagonists are still challenging each other at the same level. This kind of power division is definitely rare, and the author has diversified designs for extraordinary powers, and many of the articles talk about the principles and origins of these extraordinary powers. It can also be seen from here that the author has spent a lot of effort here to write out a suitable origin and development context for these extraordinary powers Let's talk about the shortcomings 1. Updates, almost every month. . . This kind of plot advancement can make many people abandon the book 2. The advancement of the plot, as well as the process of describing the owner's treatment of the characters, as well as the interaction between the protagonist and other characters, among the supporting characters, are well done in shaping, and the language is also very interesting, but the turning points in these branch lines are particularly blunt. Dick is always being led by the nose, which will make a considerable number of people who like to be the protagonist have a very poor reading experience 3. In terms of plot, I don't know what the main plot is, and it's very interruptive. To give you a typical example, I've read so many chapters. When I arrived at Franken's place, I talked to Dick about a bunch of titles such as Terminator of the Blood Moon Era, Lord of the Styx, etc. I was so excited that I could start to unlock Dicken's story. The secret of Ke's immortality begins with the main plot, and then a bunch of side missions appear inexplicably at the end, directly interrupting it. Although it is interesting to see other extraordinary powers, who can bear it if we are left to rely on Franken's words to figure out the main plot? And there's that lock, how long has it been since you gave it away? It seems that there is a tendency to develop branch plots, which makes people speechless 4. Excessive comedy. Dick's character is originally a tortured person, but he always does some nonsensical things. This funny description itself dilutes Dick's dark character and the darkness and madness in his heart. It's too sideways, and if you write too much of it, it's easy to get into trouble if you can't grasp the degree of control, causing a lot of poisonous points Let me talk about my thoughts again. The two major selling points of this book are the system of extraordinary power and the mystery of Dick's immortality. I feel that solving the mystery of immortality can be used as a main task. And it is gradually revealed with the emergence of a supernatural force. While experiencing the unique system of this world, I also get more information about Dick's identity. The author's shaping of the supporting characters is also very successful, but I hope that the supporting characters can switch more smoothly when switching scenes or transitioning to the next branch. The structure of the world view in the book and the improvement of the system of extraordinary powers must be as reasonable as possible. I feel that this is the biggest selling point of this book. Point, if this structure collapses, then this book will have no backbone and can only be read as a funny book. I also hope that the author can deepen the depth of this book. In this case, it can reduce the number of people who clamor for poisonous points The author must also be mentally prepared. After all, this style of book is relatively niche, and in the early plot, many readers feel poisonous, and it is not so easy to turn over. (The above opinions are personal opinions and have no reference value)

This is a book that stands out to me. I personally like it very much. I looked at the author's previous works and found that he didn't write a lot. I hope the author will make a good outline so that this book can stick to it. Most of the people in the book review section are critical, which doesn't mean anything. The author's writing is really good, but there are not enough recommendation spots, few people have read it, and there are also few talents in the book review section. There is no virtuous circle. The achievements of this book should not stop here. Come on, author! Update more~keep it up~

I have never seen such a mean-spirited protagonist. He was fed Yoneda Kyo and still called him sister. It was so mean.

I feel that this book is not unfinished, but it is a bit unprepared and the ending is a bit anxious. From the plot of the story, this ending is actually quite appropriate. After all, the protagonist cannot be expected to take risks after finding a way to die within easy reach. His goal from the beginning to the end has always been to put himself to sleep forever. I like the characterization of the protagonist very much, and the supporting characters also have their own highlights. Although the protagonist has a background setting of being tortured and full of hatred, he still has a layer of charade on the surface. I think this is reasonable. When life is so boring and painful from beginning to end, you always have to find fun to distract yourself. Looking carefully at the time he spent as a witch costume after each rebirth, some of his decisions appeared to be very calm and rational. There is also the arrangement for Momo and Nightmare at the end. Maybe I was overthinking it. He even took the princess's mood into consideration. It makes me think that he would have been a gentle and smart person before he traveled through time. He was thinking about closing his eyes all the time. He would feel impatient if he could not die in less than two days. It was true that if he could live less, he would live less. In a rare move of anger, someone prevented his death. The scenes of joy, anger, sorrow and joy are really three-dimensional. As for the setting of the world view, the mother goddess of cause and effect, etc., It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it. Some of the small designs are really exquisite and imaginative. It also gave me some inspiration for the setting of my own story hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha This book is really a pity, maybe because of the subject matter, but this is one of my favorite types of writing, what a pity! Finally, I wish the author good health and success∠(ᐛ∠)＿

After reading some reviews of this book, I have some thoughts here: Spending money to read books on APP now is like when a restaurant first opened and everyone could eat for free with their eyes closed. After everyone ate to their liking, after it gained popularity, they started charging. But you have to pay first before you can eat with your eyes closed. Whether this approach is correct or not is not mentioned here. Let's just say that some chefs (authors) are like me and I have prepared this meal. No matter how well I cook it, or whether it is appetizing or not, whether it is delicious, disgusting or not, and whether it is poisonous or not, the customer (reader) can only choose whether to continue eating, or to swallow it and leave quietly. If a customer (reader) leaves a comment on a restaurant's opinion book, the customer (reader) is being rebellious and does not respect the work of the chef (author). There is no such thing.

After reading Chapter 20, just because the princess was beautiful, I directly forgave her to kill me. I immediately died of poison 😅

As long as they have some roles, they are all female characters. It seems that there is only one male character in the world. A person who doesn't care about his own life and has strong suicidal tendencies will ask for a virgin from time to time. A person who is not responsible for his own life is so damn concerned about other people's studies. The whole story, both the characters and the plot, are a complete mess and highly toxic.

There's something wrong with facing death, especially the part where you're constantly being killed. This is the same as being killed by a blocked spring while playing a game. Especially the resurrection time is still constant at 10 seconds. You are still being killed from the beginning of the game to the end of the game. I don't believe who can behave so calmly. The protagonist doesn't regard his own life as his own, but asks others to regard his own life as their own. This is very funny. The protagonist has a problem with his attitude towards the Mage Tower, and the people in the Mage Tower also have a problem with their attitude towards the protagonist. I don't know what the author is thinking. I just want to ask the author whether the protagonist will become the savior in the end. If so, then I will have no choice but to abandon the book. That would be too disgusting. If you want to write about the Holy Light, don't write about this kind of past. It's disgusting that a person who enjoys the evil of the world becomes the savior. Or when the protagonist is different from this world. They are reproductively isolated and their brains are all different. Why arrange the protagonist like this? After being abused for such a long time, while writing about the sequelae, and at the same time showing that there are no sequelae, the author can stop being so precise. Is this an attempt to turn the protagonist into a saint to make him sick? It is impossible for a person who is indifferent to life to cherish life despite the protagonist's experience.