The Esteemed Sir Broom Knight

Your parents raised you to be healthy and strong, and owed you nothing. They didn't exploit you afterward. They just stopped taking care of you to better help their older brother, and then you became strangers. Isn't this protagonist a bit despicable? Is it only right that your parents love you?

This is even harder to read than Little Bear's story. Every time the plot starts to veer off course, it throws in a bunch of psychological shifts, then inserts a bunch of background information, or suddenly jumps in with a long exposition. Often, one minute the mother and son are having a chat, the next the story is about a foreign land, going on and on, then suddenly a sentence brings it back to…

The previous book didn't have many problems because players made adjustments, but this one has been plagued by constant sighs and complaints. 1. Write down what so-and-so did. 2. Reflect on so-and-so's intentions. 3. Write about yourself now. 4. Recall yourself before time travel 5. Compare with a certain 6. Advance the plot Simply put, the plot takes up one-sixth of the total.

The previous book involved players, so it was acceptable to look at things from the players' perspective. This book has a bunch of insignificant supporting characters, the main character is asleep, and it's incredibly padded. Half of the 2 million words are filler. I'm not reading anymore, I'm outta here. 😅

Those who say the relationships are messy and the story is fragmented, you've been reading too many light novels, haven't you? This is what a proper Western fantasy story should be like.

Wishing the author a surge of inspiration and great success with the new book! May it achieve even greater success! May it contribute to the book's mainstream popularity and reach a wider audience soon!

Is this insane? For dozens of chapters in a row, there hasn't been a single scene featuring the main character?! My god, in the last book, Hill would at least participate in some story events and appear in player dialogues. Is this book crazy? The main character hasn't appeared for dozens of chapters in a row?! It feels like it's been over half a month, and it's all supporting characters. The main character doesn't even deserve to appear in the supporting characters' dialogues?! 💀💀

I'm looking for Shennong (a legendary Chinese figure), but it seems the plot and the character development are controversial.

I'm a bit curious: 1. Why are there gods in a low-magic world? 2. Why are the requirements for bloodlines so high in a low-magic world? 3. Why does awakening spiritual power mean weak physical strength? I look forward to the author telling me the answers in the later chapters.

The Fourth Calamity is still the best. I've read it three or four times (although I haven't finished it yet), but Hill has a warm and happy feeling about it. Broom Knight was written rather hastily, too rushed, and feels like it was written using a template. Lowry is only 12 years old and has no ability to protect himself yet he gets caught up in the power struggles at the level of the king.