Mahjong Soul: Thirteen Orphans from the Start

This book is truly utterly useless. I don't understand Japanese mahjong, but based on the author's description, the protagonist is a skilled but unlucky player whose opponents all seem to have cheat codes. So, at best, the protagonist will only lose a little less; how can he possibly win?

The author's writing style is good, but they don't know how to write web novels. I suggest they learn from the Go AI next door. That was a complete sweep from the start, a professional sweep in the mid-game, and a sweep in the late game, resulting in both excellent performance and a great reputation. Like Go, Mahjong has no repetitive games throughout history, so there's no shortage of variations.

This mahjong game is too overpowered, it's ridiculous. It's like a mahjong game with a real supernatural element, like the ones in the Age of Gods where you can summon a god to control the whole game. What's the use of incredible luck if you don't draw a tile? Unless someone artificially alters the order of the tiles, it's like fixing the hand and eliminating one suit for all three players.

The way you're writing it, even if Yu Wushuang consumes Qi, it's still consumed when fighting weaker opponents. If you play cards continuously, wouldn't even a relentless battle of weaker opponents be enough to defeat even gods and demons?

Here's a suggestion for the author: get rid of all the role-playing elements and such as the system as soon as possible. You've already introduced four or five roles at such a short word count, and there will be more later. A beginner can't handle that, and the chapter length doesn't allow you to max them all out. If you continue writing like this, some characters will inevitably disappear.

To be honest, the way you're writing the protagonist's growth makes people feel like you're torturing him. When you combine dragon fruit universe and gastrodia elata, you will inevitably face the conflict between the so-called card wave and gastrodia elata skills. In Tianma, the portrayal of luck in the game is mainly focused on skills.

Which beginner table is better to play at?

Mahjong Soul cosplay pictures found in the group.

Honestly, the more I watch this protagonist, the more frustrated I get. Although he seems to win all the time, there's almost no satisfying moment. The beginning establishes his incredible personal strength, but he gets completely overwhelmed and suppressed by monsters. His cheat codes are rarely used and have a host of side effects, ultimately impacting his luck and even his strength later on.

In the early stages, it was considered a top-tier game, but from the middle of the national competition onwards, it started to have more and more problems. The worst part is the indecent content; they use all sorts of excuses to play with girls. If you really want to write about a snow-white character, just order a female lead and focus on the romance.