The Splendor of the Red Chamber

If Jia Lian is the protagonist, Chai Dai can't be the heroine, right? Miharu is even more impossible. Could it be that the female lead this time is Grandma Liu? Ma Daopo?

Don't be like another book, where you don't arrange for Jia Yuanchun to leave the palace when you have a cheat that goes against the will, but instead write that it's the first time that the dog emperor sleeps with Yuanchun because of the help of the protagonist. This kind of plot is really disgusting. If you don't accept it, just describe it normally, don't make any ambiguous plot about the male supporting actor (everyone understands it)

Author, look at the famous detectives you wrote before, and then look at the mess you are writing now, take a good look! !

The setting is not flattering, local and indigenous.

This Jia Lian is a small-headed man who controls the big head. In the original work, he engages in all sorts of mischief, including being a valet, stealing other people's wives (who are often promiscuous), and taking over his father's concubines. His life style is extremely chaotic. The key point here is that the original person traveled to modern times and then back again. With the sexual repression in modern society and the original person's romantic nature, he wanted to try anything dirty and smelly.

Don't really go against the comments in the comment area. Give away girls and miss girls, especially the famous detective you wrote before. Because the comment area said that Lin Daiyu didn't accept it, I didn't read it. Now is not the past. Readers' tolerance is getting lower and lower, especially the female characters.

It's mainly watery, with no content, and the writing is shallow. I feel that the author's strength is still in the garden drama. He's really not good at writing anything else. I don't care if I add more content. After all, you can write more female characters, but your career line is almost done. I can't tell the big and small kings. Every time I write this kind of career line, I just want to skip it. It's really boring.

The author wrote a book with hair in his mouth. The person who traveled through time really thought of himself as Jia Lian, and he had to give it away in three springs. It is far inferior to the other book "The Second Master of Red Mansions" from the starting point 🙂

I'll withdraw it first, I'm sorry, just keep writing your plot.

It hurts to see the protagonist match up Daiyu and Jia Baoyu, and then let Jia Baoyu join the Sheng family school, which makes me want to laugh a little! What the hell is this? Are you crazy about supporting treasures? Remember there was Jia Zong in the big house, right? At least it's easier than Fu Baoyu, right? Even Jia Huan is easier to support than Baoyu! Bullies from poor kids are easier to turn around than bullies from rich kids, right? I can't understand it at all! It feels so anti-human! And it also supports the second bedroom! How many good people are there in the second room? Yuanchun was sold as a daughter to seek glory, Tanchun was sold to someone else to replace him and marry the barbarians, Jia Huan was suppressed and gave up! It is said that a concubine and a legitimate mother also need to be educated! In the end, I could only follow Aunt Zhao. No one would think this was Mrs. Wang's kindness, right? You know, the virtue of womanhood requires the aunt to educate the bastard and give the bastard a chance to make a way out. If you don't care at all, you will die! Not to mention Jia Baoyu, among the garbage fighters, who would end well following him? Even Xiren, who clings to him wholeheartedly, has a miserable ending... Jia Zheng is even more incompetent! He doesn't have a good relationship with any of his children, and he doesn't fulfill any of his responsibilities as a father! You spend all day caring about yourself and raising a bunch of fans to support you! All the daughters were sold, all the sons were useless, the wife was very poisonous, and the concubine was very evil! What is the saving value of this? ? ? I don't understand at all why you need to support the treasure madman

First of all, this time-travel method makes people feel uncomfortable. Secondly, the author did not open the golden finger too much and deliberately made the protagonist never see the Red Mansion. As a normal person, it is understandable that he has not seen it completely, but you don't know what the Red Mansion is about and why Jia's house was ransacked. Isn't this funny? I can't stand it at all from behind.

Is the author watching too many female videos? The secret service is the direct representative of the imperial power. The county master dares to command his servants to surround and kill him. I dare not even think about what the prince dares to do. He didn't come to apologize afterwards and wanted to slap him down, offending the honorable nobles and the emperor at the same time. How did this prince grow to be so big?

The main character is a bit funny! The author really wrote nonsense! Let Jia Baoyu chase Daiyu's carriage in public? ? ? Seven-year-olds come to different seats! An eleven or twelve-year-old woman and a man paraded through the city in a carriage? ? ? I'm afraid that if I don't die, I'll just become a prostitute! ! ! You have no moral education in the government, and others will laugh at you if you are dirty! Are you doing this when you're out and about? ? ? Just any censor can put you in a dilemma of life and death! What a joke! Even brothers and sisters can't go out in the same carriage, okay? ? ? Fathers have to avoid it because they won't share a car with their daughter! Otherwise your whole family's reputation will be ruined! Does your daughter still want to get married? ? ? Marry a businessman or a farmer! Absolutely hilarious! When cannibalism is the most exaggerated, do you understand that if a woman in a boudoir is caught by a foreign man, she will become infamous? Unless your family is engaged in agriculture, industry, or business, this is the case as long as you are a scholar or noble! Not to mention aristocratic families! No girl from any family will show up! The background of the Red Mansion is based on the Manchu and Qing Dynasty background, and the feet are bound! Just to prevent women from going out! The smaller the feet, the better!

New readers can read it with confidence, but the author was indeed immature when he wrote his first book, Red Mansions, which led to the pitfalls of missing a girl or giving away a girl. But starting from his second Red Mansion, "So Many Prides in Red Mansions", he has avoided all the poisonous points of the previous work. The only bad thing is that Mrs. Xing and Mrs. Wang have been included. Now that the author is back to write about Red Mansion, he will be a little more restrained in recruiting girls. Brothers, just watch with confidence!

Classic time travel, substitutions, picking up second-hand goods, the original version of the classic is obsessed with protecting the Jia family

Write well and don't use anything stinky. I just missed Grandma Liu in the Red Mansion.

I was told that the court scene was boring before, but I am still writing it now. Does the author have trouble with money?

It's a huge loss of quality, with no environmental factors or logic.

Watching Red Mansion is about accepting girls. If you don't accept this one and don't accept that one, then don't borrow the name of Red Mansion

Is the author's book intended for transfer readers or the following? You, a native, can write about time travel and haven't read Red Mansions. You are the author and you have the final say. But the author's explanation is very funny. "I checked the information and more than half of the technical secondary school students have not seen The Dream of Red Mansions and don't understand the Dream of Red Mansions." Forced intelligence? Dream of Red Mansions is a recommended extracurricular reading for junior high schools. Basically every school requires it to be ordered, and junior high school textbooks include excerpts from Dream of Red Mansions. So, the author, don't talk about technical secondary school students. You should give it to the illiterate!

The group portrait started again, and the Jia family became more and more awesome. I'm speechless, why do you always have to use this routine?

Why should we link up with Zhifou? The world view of Red Mansion is not big enough or there are not enough women

It's watchable, but to be honest, the character has flaws. Jia Lian in the first life was just like that. He was reborn in the modern era and still accomplished nothing. He was dawdling around and didn't even remember the plot. This setting felt useless. Two weak people combined into one are not as convincing as one strong person. When you let him be reborn in modern times, you don't ask for success, but just work hard and make progress. Then I won't say anything about what ambitions he will set after he returns.

The author doesn't really want to find a marriage for Yingchun. To be honest, just having this idea makes me feel a little uncomfortable.

I won't order it anymore, it's far worse than So Many Beauties in Red Mansions 😅 The protagonist of this book is a pure cuckold, and he was fed poison at the beginning. When did I, Jiao Taro, suffer such a disadvantage back then? The same goes for the back, missing a girl and giving away a girl are particularly serious...

Don't accept it in three springs, leave some regrets, it's not beautiful when it's big and comprehensive, classics will be passed down forever, all with some regrets

To avoid lightning, the author said at first that he would accept Lin Daiyu, but later he almost paired Jia Baoyu with Lin Daiyu. The least attractive protagonist. This soul travel has no meaning except for a little more knowledge. The protagonist is essentially just one person. I don't understand why there are authors in Qidian who don't understand what readers want to see. They don't talk about self-defense and defense. They don't even do the most basic lightning protection. Moreover, they are still guaranteed to be accepted in the early stage. Does the author think that the heroine only needs to be fucked by the protagonist?

It's the same as written by zz. On the first day after time travel, I first didn't consider the stability of the situation and solved the survival problem, and then went for revenge and death. I just focused on the following two things 😰😰😰😰😰😰😰

As for Jia Baoyu, it has been a week since I finished writing more than ten chapters. Lao Ao is no longer water, but a mudslide!

It's okay to just write about the Red Mansion. Do you know what kind of garbage this is? I'm so disgusted that I vomited.