
Super Sorcerer: The Weave Crashes Again from the Start
超魔术士:开局魔网又崩了
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- Ongoing
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- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
Honours
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Why do you like being a lord so much now? Nowadays, almost all novels require a job change from adventurer to noble lord as soon as they are published. What's wrong with that! The story of an adventurer is not good at writing about science and technology, right? Forget about one or two books. Nowadays, anyone who writes novels has to start a company. If you can't write well, you can just become a lord. But there is no actual change at all. It's just good writing and fixing many bugs by yourself.
There are actually a lot of Paladin Oaths in version 5
The Oath of Dedication (Keep your word, help those in need, and lead by example.) The Oath of Glory (Strive for the top, move forward courageously, and inspire people.) The Oath of the Ancient Sages (Light up hope, protect lives, and bring happiness to others.) The Oath of Revenge (to eradicate evil, face injustice, and mend the situation.) The Oath of the Crown (Law, loyalty, courage, responsibility.) The Oath of Conquest (to extinguish hope, rule with an iron fist, and have the supremacy of strength.) The oath of salvation (peace, innocence, patience, wisdom.) The oath of watch (vigilance, loyalty, discipline.) The oath of the ocean (freedom is supreme, high heaven is faith, change is like flowing water, Explore the unknown territory. ) The oath of fanaticism (revealing corruption, eliminating heresy, abandoning mercy, and doing whatever it takes.) The oath of drinking curses (becoming a sword, a shield, and a magic spell.) Stream of the River Oath (the stream will never stop, the water will rise and fall, the rapids will advance bravely, and you will reach the sea.) The oath of carnival (obey the teachings of the Brodish Canon, celebrate every celebration, invite friends and foes alike, and fight to hold a party if necessary.) The Oath of Punishment (burn away doubts and fulfill your duties; purify sins and forgive the innocent; repay blood for blood, tooth for tooth.) The Oath of Heroes (walk before your will, fight as a test, accept your fate, hone your body.) Oath of Guardian (Choose your own creed according to your camp; Chaos Creed: Affinity, Beauty, Freedom. Evil Creed: Dominance, Opportunity, Profit. Good Creed: Courage, Sacrifice, Dedication. Lawful Creed: Loyalty Honesty, protection, service. ) The oath of the giant spirit nobles (take destruction as a foundation, rebuild a new life; use brilliance as a banner, use elegance as a guide; respect the elements and fear their anger.) ps: It is equivalent to not being able to fight elemental creatures, the restrictions are quite large. There are also Oathbreakers who have no creed and need to spend money to redeem them.
In view of the fact that there are few female advocates, let the harem party make some noise.
Since the author said that he will decide whether to arrange a female protagonist based on the plot development, then you can take a look at this vote.
Games and systems ruin the plot
If you have played Baldur's Gate, you should understand that the charm of DND does not lie in various overpowering structures, but more importantly in RP (role playing) and immersion. Among them, occupation is the core part: the profound wisdom of the mage, the witty words of the poet, and the aboveboardness of the paladin. The Oath of the Paladin itself is both unique and can be used as a driving force to advance the plot, but as a result, it is combined with an inexplicable djinn handkerchief and the whole section collapses: this is just a player sitting at the table and fussing over data, not a living adventurer.
Very boring
The protagonist's strength is always in an embarrassing stage. He is weak or not, and can beat many people, but he always feels like a man on the roadside.
Discussing the issue of Shuangwen
To be honest, this book is really uncomfortable according to the DND rules. The construction is really not strong. In other words, the author actually doesn't know what he needs to build. The author basically has no understanding of the DND5E professions. He has read that the opening of cards with high charm is strong, because the charm professions in the 5th edition are strong, including paladin, warlock, and magic. Companions and poets are all charming, but seeing that the author is still that super embarrassing paladin at level 18, it can only be said that the author does not know what the strength of the paladin is. The end point of the part-time paladin is level 5, and there is no need for it after that, because level 5 can fight two people. It is so outrageous, but the author has done both but does not use the paladin, so it is okay. The same reason why the Courage Poet is strong is that it is also a level 6 two dozen, so the idea of building it is simple. According to the author's needs, the whole level 5 paladin/level 6 poet/level 7 warlock can basically make two two dozen professions (pure waste) with a full charm identification profession of super magic. The spell casting level is 8 levels, and the magic learned is the most commonly used 1 to 3 levels. The high level spell slots are just for super magic. There are not many poets' spell tables. There is no need to cheat and force the warlocks with spells. , Can't tearing a scroll? There are only a few who really need super magic. Then open an origin specialty. The whole priest apprentice or druid apprentice can get two corresponding links. If you have to upgrade to a mage profession, it is actually unnecessary to upgrade to a level 2 mage. 3 Professions are outrageous enough. Adding a mage will weaken it In fact, the total is 5 paladin/15 courage poet. At level 6 of the courage poet, you can cast magic after attacking, at level 14, you can attack after casting spells, and the poet's spell table is There are many and good, and you are guaranteed to get 9th-level spells. After choosing defense, your survivability is stronger. It is much better than the above one that only has high-level spell slots and can only learn up to 3rd level. This is also better than the whole inexplicable construction plus a bunch of useless plug-ins. There is nothing good above the level except for the wish spell. The spell slot is just for super magic Level 6 Courage Poet/Level 14 Dragon Vein Warlock can also be used The most noble skill in DND is immunity. How to maximize the use of your strongest attribute is the key, just like the magic contract master uses charm instead of strength to pass the appraisal. What is the purpose of adding strength points? There is no difference between not using it and not having it, not to mention that it can be obtained by using some structures. The hanging skill is the same as not opening it. Adding points is not as good as saving skills. Anyway, the essence of adding points is to pass the appraisal. Except for the upgrade of Son of Slaughter, I really don't see anything cool about it. It just saves a few physical feats in the front, and has enough spell slots in the back, and both can wear armor and hold shields. Who calls the mage's level 20 characteristics rubbish? This level should be replaced with more useful ones DND background books are like this. It's awkward to keep writing about them if you don't understand the rules. Or just write them purely in the background, don't add this and that like other game articles, because the characteristic of DND is that the character has been set up by the unscrupulous people from the beginning, and the follow-up route is set up. Level construction is based on extreme ideas, maximizing the benefits within the rules according to the purpose to be achieved, and most of the running groups are in T1T2 state. Diao Min mainly concocts rules and concocts spells with the DM. As long as the DM agrees with your question, how can it be weird? Speaking of DND, I have my own special understanding of spells and then use spells to complete my life. According to the group running, it is not a functional structure for running a group, and it is not a powerful structure according to the PVP. So what is the fun of cheating? I can only say that cheating is intended to be used by one person as a group, lone wolf mode. The problem is that you are a charm profession. The mage intelligence profession can also be said to be my lonely homemaker's mentality and one more person to form a group. What is the purpose of forming a group of one person with normal conversation therapy and team motivation like charm? Even if the magic bonder calls the sect or summons monsters to form a group, and organizes several bases and recruits a bunch of people, it is not a one-man group.
I really like this book. It's great to keep fighting. Other books are just nonsense and no fighting.
Poison spot
1. The protagonist who established the Federation should be called the Speaker, why is he still called the President? The Federation is in the past tense, and the others are just members 2. The old arcanist in the Miser Energy Core, that is, the Spirit of the Spirit Network created behind the protagonist, why is it not set to be a female? Males are too incompatible and are monitored around the clock. It makes me feel uncomfortable just thinking about it 3. What do you think of this trait when the adventure group invites people to upgrade together? I share the golden finger of the protagonist. It is obvious that no one has me but I am the coolest part of this book. Suddenly I feel that the protagonist is no longer the protagonist 4. Why keep the divinity of the platinum dragon god Bahamut? Why not just do it directly It has been decomposed. The previous tone was obviously that all the other gods had decomposed and evolved into Goldfinger, but here it is like being parasitized, and it is mainly of no use 5. The moon elf of Moon Shadow Quiling suddenly became a marginal person. It was originally supposed to be the protagonist's spare tire 6. The protagonist's surname is Hall Leiwen. It's so weird, it's okay to call it Hall Raven, and the federation that was established is called Hall Raven Federation. It's also weird 7. The protagonist's race is called Six-winged Spirit Dragon. Why should we add a six-winged spirit dragon? Can't we just call it Spirit Dragon? Besides these, there should be no other poisonous points, but the results have also deteriorated because of these.
Dragon picture
At the end there is a mage tower
Can it be made into a style with women but not mainstream? Anyway, I feel like you don't have the writing style to write any emotional scenes, but if Warlock Garon is to follow the eunuch style, it doesn't feel right, so I hope you don't make a heroine design, just a tool figure or a maid type. A cup style design is more in line with the painting style. Conspiracy, trickery, coercion and inducement are all fine, just don't lick it, and you'll be done with ruthless objectification.