A Dream of the Red Chamber at Dawn

If you don't include Jia Mu and Grandma Liu's Red Mansions, it will look dull and boring. You can only make up for it by the number of updates. Why doesn't the author update more?

I already feel that after reading this fanfic, unless the author opens the Red Mansion again, other Red Mansion fans will really not be able to stand it anymore 🙂 Although there are some uncomfortable parts, there are more outstanding places, and the flaws cannot be concealed.

In the beginning, Qin Keqing was nothing but a white flower. No matter what, she had committed adultery with her father-in-law, so what kind of thing could modern society be?

"Wan Tian Qing" is over, and this work that looks like shit can still make it out of the entertainment industry! I feel like the author's research is not as detailed as the author!

The writing and plot are all passable, but the male protagonist is like a fanboy, always submissive to women, and can be controlled by anyone. Baochai is almost written as a control freak.

Come on, author, I have read more than a dozen Red Mansions fanfics. This book is really the best in terms of writing and plot. You should be careful when writing historical articles for your next book. Try not to care about reviews when writing a book. Come on, I hope I can write more.

Hurry up and write, Mrs. Wang, Li Zhi and Jia Mu will all accept it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

It was well written but I felt that the focus was off-center. Baochai, Daiyu and others had too few scenes, and other characters I didn't like much had too many scenes. It was really boring to watch the protagonist and these people fighting each other. For example, Mrs. Xing, although I have no objection to taking her away, I feel that her position is unclear. She was originally a lover, but she regards herself as the main palace. She is jealous of this and that, and she is coaxed by the protagonist. She is still a loser. Are you really not afraid of being discovered? There are also characters such as Mrs. Xue and Second Sister You who are not popular and have no charm in this book, but they have a lot of scenes.

Doing a dojo in a snail shell, scratching your eyebrows and beard

I read a lot of Red Mansions fan fiction. Personally, I think the writing and the coolness of this book are excellent. I think Red Mansions fan fiction should focus on descriptions of emotional garden dramas and other aspects, rather than the kind of official fiction about power struggles, which are fake fan fiction using official cover, which is disgusting to read. The author's writing is very attractive, but the updates are too slow. It took me a long time to read it again before updating dozens of chapters.