The Spring Blossoms of the Red Chamber

The most powerful novel about Red Mansions, except for the romantic figures and the world-shattering novels

Two eyebrows that look like frowning but not frowning, and a pair of eyes that look like weeping but not weeping.

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The writing is good, but what about the plot? Most book friends accuse the protagonist of not doing his job properly and flirting with women every day. However, considering that the new book has just been published, it is the time when the plot is integrated and the context of all parties is clarified, so it is not appropriate to criticize too much. Secondly, I don't know the general outline of this book. Is the inner courtyard the main focus and the inner courtyard supplemented by the merits? The former is about uniting everyone's thoughts and developing a grand plan, while the latter is about fulfilling Honghong's fantasies and getting happiness. It all depends on the author's choice. The lyrics and the text are already rare masterpieces among Red Mansions novels. I hope the author can make early decisions and make good choices, and it will surely become a masterpiece in the future.

There are too many garden plays, and the authors are great. In fact, many people started writing about Red Mansions without even understanding the ancient feudal social system. A lot of authors also wrote randomly about recruiting girls everywhere, and they are not little yellow hair. They don't care about the girls at all and only care about their own pleasure. They just know how to recruit girls. To be honest, there is no corresponding power and position. You can't even accept a maid. Let's talk about it carefully (don't be brainless, accept the argument logically). First, let's talk about the maids in Dream of Red Mansions. What is the ultimate dream of the maid? I just want to be a concubine and have a title, so let's talk about who can take a concubine. The Ming Dynasty stipulated that there were 10 princes, 4 county princes, 4 first- and second-grade officials, 2 third-grade officials, 1 fourth-grade official, and a fifth-grade official had to reach a certain age to have a quota. The Qing Dynasty had the same system as the Ming Dynasty! So let me ask the masters who have been writing garden operas, why do you take concubines? By mouth? By love? You can't even give the maid a place in the concubine, so why should she be with you if she has no name and no status? In ancient times, your social status was closely linked to your official rank. You had privileges only if you had status and rank. Some TV dramas showed businessmen having a bunch of concubines. That was only TV dramas without brains. In addition, many of the so-called concubines were actually foreign concubines, nameless and titleless. They were basically slaves who had fled and could not make a living. So what are these maids in the Jia family? Obviously, if you want to take in some maids when you go to the Red Mansion, you have to be qualified to take concubines and hang these women, otherwise why would I follow you? In the same way, let's talk about Sanchun, Sister Lin, and Baochai. Regardless of whether they are legitimate concubines, as daughters of aristocratic families, or of noble birth, if you want to marry a real wife, you still need to be an official, and you also need to have a certain rank. Even Xue Baochai, who was born in the worst family, was also an imperial merchant. Not to mention some mindless people who say that it is enough to take a concubine. The main wife is not worthy. Please use your own brains to think about whether the protagonists in some books have a fourth-level official status and whether they can take concubines. It is very funny. Some protagonists are still studying for fame and business and have already begun to fantasize about taking concubines 😅 So, as a writer Dear sir, don't keep having sex in the garden. You have to improve your status. Only when you have power and rank can you play in the garden. Otherwise, you will be like Baoyu. Baoyu is not even qualified to marry a concubine. We hate Baoyu just because he doesn't do anything. If he doesn't have the ability to protect a woman, he still wants to provoke her. Isn't it just a little yellow hair behavior?

The Xue family is, to put it mildly, one of the four major families, Huangshang, but it is just a family of merchants, not the richest one. Moreover, Xue Baochai lost his father when he was young, his brother was sued for his life, and he was suffering from heat poisoning. Coupled with the fact that he was a merchant, the negative buffs were almost full. Why do the fics I read always make her the main wife? It seems that being the concubine would wrong her, no matter how high the title of the protagonist is. The Lin family is the fifth generation of princes and has a lot of property. When it comes to Lin Ruhai, she is still a junior high-ranking official. Her mother is the legitimate daughter of the Jia family. I don't know how Xue can compare with Lin. Of course, Lin Ruhai died like a lamp going out, and there was nothing he could do about it, everything was in vain, but people in the fandom generally don't die.

Very strong, I would like to call you the strongest new book in Red Mansion so far

I don't understand why I have to put back the maid who was originally following me. To put it bluntly, you have no preparation in front of you. There is no credit for following you since childhood, only hard jail. After getting a Xiangling, he hurriedly kicked someone out in two days. He is also a devil.

Nice or not

The recent chapters are too dull. There are a lot of things that can be mentioned in one sentence but have to be described in detail. The promotion process and planning of the protagonist should be used as side plots to supplement the main content such as the garden drama and the plots of the various heroines. Readers came in because of your book title. Don't you know what the author mainly wants to read? For example, there have been many roadside characters in recent chapters who were supposed to be used as plot promoters to promote the plot. As a result, the author wrote a lot of things about this roadside character and a lot of things about those other people. There are already a lot of roadside characters written, so let them talk a lot. Author, your writing style is good, but your writing method is weird, at least for me personally. Now the desire to read has dropped significantly. Now that this writing method is written, the role of the character on the roadside will be far greater than the role of the heroine. There are more than 100 chapters. Except for Lin Daiyu, Sister Feng appears a little more, and Baochai is almost missing. There are few descriptions and plots. The characters, the protagonist, and Qingmei are all like this. They are not as good as the characters on the roadside, let alone the other heroines. Now, the author, your side text seems to be much more than the main text. To quote a few readers (if I want to read the intrigues of the court, why don't I read other novels about the intrigues of the court, such as Three Kingdoms Fanren)? You are attracted by the Red Mansion and you show so many roadside characters. Blah blah blah, blah blah blah, those fake people in the Jia family are outrageous, it would be weird if the readers don't run away. Aren't you describing those characters just to let the protagonist do it and make the readers happy? Now that you give them so many roles, it just adds all kinds of obstruction to the reader's perception, and there are quite a few such characters. . . . . Author, if you can see it, please refer to it and change it to this way of writing. If you write in this way, your writing style will be in vain. If your writing style were not better, I would not type so many words to give you some reference suggestions. I can only deal with this writing method and this book.

The protagonist is also quite insidious. To say that the villain is flattering the protagonist is to flatter him. He is a hypocrite, worse than Jia Baoyu.

After all, he is not Mr. Bao. He neither seeks fame nor wealth. He just messes around with a bunch of women every day. After watching it for a long time, he didn't even make it to the exam. Another thing is, can you stop acting like a big boss behind the scenes, and then play hard with women every day, and say that you are not such a person. Which one of Xiangling and Qingwen is not anxious to death, which is outrageous. Can there be some text? Maybe the types of likes are different. I really don't like this woman or that woman in Tiantian. I can't describe her career and fame, and I can't even write about my classmates or teachers. .

The more I write, the more confused I become. The inexplicable plot has no main line and no daily routine, so it's very incomprehensible.

Didn't look ahead. I read a bit after it was put on the shelves. The writing style is very good, and the wording and sentences have the flavor of Red Mansion. . But the story is very flat, relying on women to complete the plot, and the young lady catches it. . It's time to take the exam, and the girl has to stop her to express her love for the young lady. . Can't prioritize things. . That's why so many women are jumping to see Sister Lin.

The protagonist was born in the imperial examination, why is there almost no participation from his tutors and the same year? Without these, can he still be considered a civil servant?

What's so good about a woman like Wang Xifeng? She's jealous, pungent, and cruel. She can even murder the children of Jia Lian's concubines. This kind of woman will only make the house restless. . This kind of controlling woman, if you get her, she will always want to ride on a man's head. The backyard is never peaceful.

Why are you both having a prenatal transcarnation and your original body? If you want to have a prenatal transcarnation, then you have to do it in a serious way. But then you have the original body and it is related to the soul transmigration. It's a bit strange.

The writing style is really awesome, I won't accept it.

Chapter 11 was written by Shu Xiangling in a very bad way! Discouraged many people

The positives have been basically covered in the comment section. Let me talk about the shortcomings: 60 chapters, and I write about trivial things inside and outside the house all day long. There is almost no career aspect, and the occasional appearance is dealt with in a few strokes. There are a lot of female characters, but the progress bar is too slow, which does not match the title of the book. It is suspected of trying to sell dogs. The biggest shortcoming is that the male protagonist is as glib and frivolous as Baoyu, and the impression is very poor. If he doesn't hurry up and climb up or cultivate his power and start a career and then start a harem, he expects to study in the imperial examination, play with the female character, quarrel and eventually fall into a serious relationship?

I can only say that the collection was too slow. The lady won't say anything. She was very reluctant to accept a maid. Currently, all the latest chapters have been ordered. I don't know what the highlights are.

The writing style is really good But to be honest, compared with the writing style, the grasp of the plot is far from enough Whether it is Mrs. Wang's inexplicable hostility, Jia Zheng's lack of attention to the protagonist, and the obvious inflated description of money, Jia's family's 16 The lack of attention paid to Sui Tanhua and the large amount of blank space for the main character's troop-gathering route are all lacking in meaning It's red and it's not just a garden drama. Readers' requirements for these aspects are actually relatively high But I think overall the flaws are not concealed, come on.

The recent plot with Daiyu returning to Yangzhou to get engaged was really well written, and it was written at a higher level than the previous military dramas.

This book does not include Jia Mu and Grandma Liu

It's well written. It's one of the few new Red Mansions books that I can read now😊

The writing is very good, the writing style is daily, the garden scene is very comfortable, and the interaction with Sanya makes people smile 🤫. I hope to continue to maintain this level. In addition, there is no need for the author to specifically describe the protagonist's "deliberate" or "intentional" expressions or actions under specific circumstances. It is not necessary.

I really feel that Daiyu is only suitable for falling in love and not for getting married. 🙂 I'm jealous. Coupled with the hidden diseases of "congenital deficiencies" and subsequent heart and lung diseases, a single joy, anger or sorrow can even kill her. The protagonist doesn't have any golden fingers to save him, but he just won't talk about it. So, I support Baochai more

The author's writing style is good, but the character structure has fatal logical errors, and the character swings between stability and escapism. The key point of a good book is that the protagonist's character must be logical. This is the basis and premise for the plot to proceed reasonably. Many of the protagonist's behaviors seem inexplicable, like a split personality... It's a pity

I gave up before it was released on the shelves. I have been holding back since I entered Beijing. I have been doing business, fighting with a few women and a few wimps like Jia Zhen. I don't study or prepare for exams. I am really a Wenquxing and a nymphomaniac descending to the earth.

After reading dozens of chapters, I still can't understand what the main character is trying to do. He is rambling here and there, here and there. How to read the book? It is always laying out the layout, but it is not clear what the layout is. What is going on in Shandong is writing letters 😅