Germany, 1903

The murder at the beginning and the subsequent search for the mastermind made me dream back to the past. The main plot of the beginning is written in an ancient way. Judging from the comments, the writing style of the old author is indeed acceptable, but I personally feel that there is a problem with the plot writing of this book. Occasionally, it's a bit fun (the Count took the fancy of the Intelligence Section of the Ministry of Foreign Affairs and pretended to be a bitch in front of him) and soon came up short (the baron who was caught killing his wife was still in jail and hired a murderer to assassinate the protagonist, which led to him being found out for killing his wife. Then the political police threatened to solve the matter and asked the protagonist to help. After that, the protagonist succeeded in pretending to be a bitch, but personally felt that this promoted the plot. The method of love can easily make people feel bad, that is, the protagonist is passive or even semi-coerced to do things) Speaking of this, I reviewed the plot and found that the subsequent events of this baron are really full of flaws. The wife he killed was the sister of the protagonist's boss, the count, but we put it into the perspective of the count: the person who just killed his sister was caught and imprisoned, and he can still continue to do things and prepare to hire murderers to kill his favorite subordinates🤔. No, buddy, you are a powerful intelligence officer who can report directly to the Prime Minister. You can keep the baron alive in prison until he is sentenced according to the procedures, all for the sake of the dignity of the nobles. But you tell me that the count just sits there like nothing and doesn't care that he can still use money to prepare for revenge in prison. The political police from other departments down there have to help the protagonist solve this problem. They accuse the baron of freezing his money and shutting him up. It's very... I just realized what kind of flying reaction the count is. Back to the topic, the protagonist successfully taught the political police waterboarding to pretend to be a little bitch, and then was quickly manipulated by Krupp's big hands (this time it was controlled by capital😭). To be honest, I didn't do the plot of Krupp. Understand, I somehow got involved with the eldest lady, and the eldest lady handed over the important side task of helping to postpone or even solve the arranged marriage to our loyal part-time forensic doctor of the Berlin Police Department, a second lieutenant medical officer of the Royal Prussian Army Reserve, an external physician of the Political Section, and a non-staff intelligence analyst of the Ministry of Foreign Affairs🤗. The halo of the protagonist of this plot is too heavy. Normally, we would not be exposed to this kind of branch line so early, and in this direction, the protagonist will not be preparing to control the Great Bell Tower. 😋 The above are personal feelings and some complaints. The main attraction of this book is that it is a rare Western historical text, and it is an even rarer time before World War I. It is okay to like foreign historical texts. After all, it can be seen that the author has carefully researched it. Everything else is a matter of plot description.

The writing is good, but the plot of Anna in the middle is too abstract. The author may have good ideas, but when it is written, it completely becomes Anna's dog training record.

The comments in the comment area are overwhelming. Few of them hit the point, but they all just scratched their heads and commented at random. I read 71 of this book in one breath. I have been explaining the background of the protagonist and laying out the character's image, personality, skills, and describing the relevant characters to lead to the subsequent characters. The general direction has not been developed yet. I see that I am still thinking about whether the author's purpose is to write about World War I or World War II. I feel that these two paths are fine. If I skip World War I and go directly to World War II, it will probably be about the same with 170 chapters. Or write about World War I first, and then start a book about World War II after finishing the book. In this way, the book about World War I cannot change the historical line too much. Perhaps the breaking point lies in the East and Africa. In fact, the Germans fought quite well in Africa during World War I. Seeing that the author has now given readers a huge space for imagination, wait for the follow-up. In fact, this kind of book with detailed writing is the favorite of bookworms. Come on, you are the best.

20 Years ago, in the name of revolution deeply affected me.

It was originally a good book, but when it came to the plot involving female characters, the IQ dropped. In the last chapter, he was still fighting wits to write the perfect crime, but in the next chapter, he was so horny that he suddenly took in the fiancée whom he had only met once and whose husband was killed by his own hands. It's not that you can't accept girls, but it's just that you accept them so hastily, without any foreshadowing or foreshadowing, and the protagonist's character of lawful evil goes straight to chaos and fun. This is too dramatic.

It is indeed very good, the plot is very coherent, and the writing is not bad. It can keep me reading for a long time. It is much better than most new books. Of course, the author is also an old author after all. Also, please update more quickly. I finished reading it in one go, but it's still not enough.

The drugs and surgical methods used in this book are basically applicable to Europe in 1903, when technology was not advanced, and the risks were extremely high. Based on this, the various formulas in the book are just for fun and should not be used on humans or animals in the 21st century. Remember! Remember!

In fact, the conditions in Germany during World War I were much better than during World War II. If it were not for the hoarding of Jews, they made a huge fortune and destroyed the German economy. It was possible for Germany to win the war!

This book is much better than the author's previous work. It has made great progress. It has cut out a lot of complicated background character introductions and plot twists, and the concise text is very comfortable to read. The theme selection and background design are just right. The most rare thing is that the author's foundation-the profound historical heritage is truly brought out. This top-down implementation perspective is very enjoyable to watch, and it is also in line with the true meaning of history-big cuts, small characters, great causes. As you accumulate, come on!

The previous writings were all good, but when I arrived at Bertha's place, I suddenly became wiser. The low-priced thank-you fee, the talkative maid, and the help in canceling the wedding were each more outrageous than the last. There is no need to use mechanical methods to introduce new characters and plots. If the writing is not good, don't use it. It will not have any effect on the results except to screen readers.

I have always been a non-vegetarian, and I usually don't bother to read the list. This issue of Sanjiang really has all kinds of rotten dishes on the menu. When I opened it, I thought it was tomatoes.

The narrative is too scattered, resulting in no focus on the development of the protagonist, and everything is involved. This speculator's mentality doesn't know what the protagonist wants

Since we are going to write about the struggle for European hegemony, why should we set up a medical student with a disabled right hand? He also does forensic medicine and solves crimes. Forcibly increasing the difficulty, I don't know what it means

Chapter 3 Seriously? Just after leaving the ward, I happened to meet an officer investigating the case, so the protagonist agreed to go and have a look Let's just check it out. If you say she committed suicide, you still have to find the evidence yourself. If the protagonist has no work to do, he can go to the construction site to move bricks😃

It's very good. It's much better than those books with serious homogeneity of starting points. At least it can be seen that the author wrote it seriously. It is much better than those books where you can't tell whether it was written by someone else. No typos have been found to affect the reading experience.

Well, all I can say is, you must not write about war scenes... Let me just say two things that make me uncomfortable. First, the writing method. The author always likes to mix forward and reverse narration, so that you can't tell the timeline at all. For example, if a person falls into the water while walking on the bridge, the author will write: Andrew is walking to the bridge from the quiet mountain village; Andrew recalls the hardships on his way to the bridge, the scenery he saw and the mushrooms he picked; Andrew is walking to the bridge and he takes the first step , this mountain was built in 1693 by Count Bonaparte. Count Bonaparte was born in 1654 and participated in any wars: Andrew is on the bridge again. He walks very steadily and greets the old farmer... In short, it is all kinds of reverse narration in a circle. Second, there are too many characters. I have read more than a hundred old books and thought about hundreds of related characters. The big map has been changed to three, and there is no central character. The protagonist and this book should both be the illegitimate sons of the Kaiser, who are hunted down by their families, but it took more than a hundred chapters to explain. All in all, I can't comment on the writing, and the plot is very draggy. Of course it is not without its merits, that is, the veteran author still has his skills and basic knowledge. The above are complaints about old books. There are no complaints about new books so far, but they are all good.

It seems that this time the goal is to integrate Germany and sweep across Europe, and maybe take over Roman Orthodoxy by the way. This time the mustache's ideal will be realized in advance by the protagonist. My new book on Minimalist European History came out here before I finished reading it, so fast.

The author wants to portray the protagonist as a shrewd, rational, meticulous and conscientious person, but his identification with Manstein, Guderian and others conflicts with the protagonist's character.

The author should really pay attention to the names of the characters in the novel, such as boss, senior brother and junior brother, because they are too Chinese and colloquial. What you write is not an urban web article with a modern Chinese background. What you write is a historical web article about modern Germany. The boss should be an adult, and the senior brothers should be alumni or classmates.

This was the case in the last book. The movement of some commas was very unreasonable, and the sentence suddenly broke off. It felt bad to read. Could it be voice input? The writing is good, but I feel like I have an obsessive-compulsive disorder breaking out.

I didn't feel that there was anything obviously unreasonable about the plot, but it just had a strong AI flavor, and in some chapters Che Lulai talked a lot.

1903 Still needs you to pretend to be a scientist Brother, don't scare me There are a bunch of physical biologists Super powers don't need you to pretend to be a scientist

IQ is online, stop writing about female characters, and write more about the career development of the protagonist. This part is written well so far.

I've been reading it for 10 days and caught up to the latest chapter. Except for the author's poor handling of the female character and the fact that the protagonist is more targeted (author, you can be nicer to the protagonist, I quite like the protagonist you wrote)

How many people still remember the author's book In the Name of Revolution 😅

Let me go and write a book in 2006? I just searched and found that the author has written a lot of French stories. I also read a few chapters of France 1794 in my version of the reader.

You have to be very sneaky when posting a new book preview there, otherwise you will delete it and you have to search to find it. I send you a book review and delete it casually. I'm convinced! The external god preaches, don't ask for it casually, that book on France taught me a lot about French history, which I wasn't originally interested in! Come on

It turns out it's you. I've read your book France 1794 before. The problem with the book France is that the protagonist often disappears, and the writing is simple and not detailed enough to speed up the pace. There are too few protagonists' lives and stories. I don't know how this one will be.

It's not easy to keep the protagonist's IQ online all the time. Thank you for your hard work.

I really like your France 1794😭😭😭