Warhammer: Hail to the Void Lords!

Those who say that there are no women in Warhammer can only say that it is Yun, and those who say that opening a harem to provoke Slaanesh can only say that Yun has reached home.

I think the author's research and attention to detail are the indisputable strengths of this book. But the rhythm and plot of the third volume made me not want to continue reading for the time being. In terms of rhythm, nearly a hundred chapters are all about what happened within a day or two. It's a bit tiring for someone like me who is not a follow-up reader, let alone a follow-up reader. Actually, the bloody battle in the church at the beginning of this part made me quite enthusiastic, but later on the protagonist went on to engage in a void artillery battle non-stop. Is it reasonable? Nothing unreasonable, but I just feel tired. The hard dishes are delicious, but if you eat them continuously, at least I can't eat them. The combination of rhythm and plot also makes the promised enjoyable novel less enjoyable. Objectively speaking, the protagonist of the third volume is really happy: he performed well in ground battles, artillery battles, and anti-jump gang battles. He successfully completed the emergency mission, was recognized by the Astartes, became a naval lieutenant without taking the exam, and also established a relationship with the heroine. But the feeling after reading it is this: the protagonist has gone through hard battles many times, and the heroine's father has disappeared. Especially the latter, which washed away the joy of winning the previous lengthy battle. The conspiracies of the Four Gods of Chaos are endless, and their minions are countless. In this way, there is no more enjoyable experience. Let's talk about the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I think it has to match the author's brainwaves so that it doesn't go against the grain. The heroine is just like her father, and the hero comforts the heroine and sings a song. The more they sing, the more they are driven by the lyrics to hate and anger towards the four gods of chaos (this is about turning sadness into strength). Then? Then they both fell asleep. My father-in-law is probably still hot at this time (joke from hell). It's actually not that outrageous, but I don't think it matches the brain waves. I guess I will read this book again someday when I feel like it. If you want to read a more rigorous text, I still recommend it.

I think we can do some girly things

With just one piece of identification, the person with a lot of tricks will get no less than 30 chapters. Forehead. It feels like I pooped out a year's worth of shit in one day

Could the author consider linking up with the Alicia Airborne Corps of the Astra Militarum? It feels more like the author's idea. In addition, I'm looking for a role as a governor or captain of a planet in the Sun Star Territory 😁

First of all, don't just say that God Slaanesh chose Slaanesh when you see the harem. I don't know how many times I have said it. The key to Slaanesh is the word "evil" and not the word "sex". Why can't Yunzhui understand this? You are ten women playing Jenga and the Prince of Joy doesn't even bother to look at you. A short story in Warhammer Dark Pictures mentions the way to pay attention to Slaanesh. The governor plugged his male pet into a life support system, and then ate it raw while doing it. From the arms to the internal organs to the legs and the last remaining things and the head, he was so good at it. This was only glanced at by Slaanesh. The black picture also mentioned that the daily entertainment of the Slaanesh warband is to play the piano, which is played by living people. The body of the piano is a human body and the strings are the nerves of a living person. However, the living person still maintains a clear consciousness. This is the believer of Slaanesh and the chosen god of Slaanesh. If you don't open a harem, you will be looked at by Slaanesh. Salish is not that free. Second, Warhammer grimdark refers to the misty hope in the endless darkness and the struggle to survive but can only sink deeper and deeper into despair. It does not mean that you cannot have a female protagonist and have a harem. You hammer the most popular Kai Xiaobao Kefas Cain in Europe and the United States at least five or six wives and confidants. Euphrates Kirle, the first saint of the state religion, has two auxiliary military lovers and is ambiguous with Lokengaro and other well-known Astartes. Grimdark is the tone of Warhammer, but it is not an excuse for female channels and single female protagonists to enter the ky enclosure in harem stories, understand?

Warning⚠️: The author of this book is a great demon corrupted by Tzeentch. As long as you take one look, you will be tempted to keep looking until you become a devil egg😭

As a veteran reader of Hammer articles who have visited various websites, I think this should be the best Imperial Navy article written by the domestic Hammer circle, bar none. The author's writing style and story are both good. The details of the navy are simply stunning and immersive, as if you are really an imperial naval officer.

Captain Horatio's first look at Belike after a busy day at the Admiralty:

At first, the two terms Horatio and Hood attracted me, but after reading it, I have to praise it. The mortal story of Warhammer 40k is still the navy. It can only be said that it perfectly hit my strike zone. The author's understanding of the relevant details and story is very refreshing. (The actual USS Hood is very beautiful. Are you a fellow author?)

A harem attracts Slaanesh, just like killing a pig attracts Khorne, a cold attracts Nurgle, 1+1 attracts Tzeentch, it's pure fucking fart

This is one of the few Warhammer fics on the bookshelf that I have been following for a long time, but now I feel more and more pressure to read it. I have been organizing an orbital airborne troop for almost a month. I don't know what to say. I'm going to read it now. Maybe someday the book famine will come and take a look...

I can't stand it. It's not that the author's writing is not good, but I can't stand the entire Warhammer world. The lower class will never get ahead and are treated as consumables, just like the farmers before the founding of New China. Western ideology is too strong. I don't agree with the culture expressed in the Warhammer world.

You have so many heroines and you have to smell like a hammer. I'm really not afraid of Slaanesh messing with you.

Navy special warfare swimming🏊 training

Warhammer fans are all extremely misogynistic, but it's a pity that GW doesn't tolerate them and has already released the Female Custodes.

The more I read, the more boring I get. I can believe that it takes more than a thousand chapters for a brigadier general. A small mission has dozens of chapters, and a big mission has two or three hundred chapters, and you may not be promoted after completing it. I came here to see the big ships and cannons, but I ended up putting on Mortal Kombat every now and then, with dozens of chapters at a time, and then half a book with a bad battle patrol. And did the author equate the battle patrols in Warhammer with the real ones? The battle cruiser in Warhammer is just an ordinary cruiser that has been repaired and modified. It is different from the ordinary cruiser in one level. It is not as good as a heavy cruiser. As a result, the author wrote it as if it is close to a battleship. It is really based on the actual level. The most intolerable thing for me is It's very good. I've written half a book at one level from colonel to brigadier general, so you can tell how good it is. According to this progress, it is estimated that it will take more than 2,000 chapters to reach the sector admiral, then 3,000 chapters in the star field, 5,000 in Terra, and then 7,000 in the end. I don't know if I can finish it before 2030.

Why do you feel like the candy people here at 7 o'clock are sweeter than 🍅? They are all middle-aged old women who care for their stomachs b I really want the author to change the harem to have no female lead and have a golden alliance If it's not enough, just give me a few million privately I think the author will definitely be willing to change the article as long as you give me enough money

There is no Hammer flavor, it is like an urban novel with the Warhammer brand. In the first forty chapters, there are three female characters who have an affair with the protagonist. If you say that the background is set in a Japanese different world, there is no sense of violation. It is both a eldest lady and a cat girl. This is not the audience for the article. Hammer Comics should be about iron and blood, war and disaster, about brothers on the battlefield trusting each other to support each other. Instead of flirting with three or four female characters all day long, I might as well read a Japanese light novel

Now, the protagonist of this 1,400-word book has little improvement, and the pace is too slow. It takes half a day to build a logged-in army on one planet. Rogue Trader Next Door Chapter 1900 can participate in various major events while managing its own power. Vigilance Star, Badab, and Black Expedition have all participated in preparations, and now they are leading the Indomitable Expedition fleet. Even major events are limited to about one hundred chapters, and this book's one hundred chapters is just a small battle. .

The author Haijun writes really well. But the protagonist is a hand-torn Chaos Astartes, a suspected living saint, who has commanded ships to destroy enemy ships. After the first battle, he turned out to be just a reserve officer. Isn't there something wrong with the handling? ? ? What kind of magical organization does this navy have that can assign such talents to the deck level as reserve officers? . . . . . Maybe some of the inquisitors are not as good as the protagonist. . . Author, this is 40k, so don't copy the sailing era completely. . . . . . You write about the Astartes as if they have no special characteristics at all. Well, it's as if you are really writing about the Age of Sail.

Beautiful!

Sister Arabella in battle (with melta weapon)

GW novels are too crude ()

The genius author has introduced the Zerg again. This volume cannot be finished in a year. It is really possible to make money just by writing some anecdotes.

Why do we have to think that Warhammer fan fiction must destroy the structure of the Four Vendors and the God-Emperor? They are really the background. When we look at Warhammer, what we see are the Four Vendors and the gods of various races fighting each other. Shouldn't the Warhammer we are watching be an endless story between various forces from the upper class to the common people in this context? Every race in Warhammer has its own characteristics, and everyone likes different races. Isn't it the great chaos that Warhammer has always loved to see? I think it's okay for the author to write this way. In Warhammer, you can be a naval marshal, a rogue trader, you can change a lot, you can gain love, honor, etc., But you don't want to change the entire world infrastructure of Warhammer. Instead, the plot of you punching the four gods and kicking the God Emperor is not the flavor of Warhammer, and it becomes a fairy tale about cheating. Although the author is a little slow on the plot, I feel that if the author can write the story at each stage well, I would be happy to read more of the specific plots in the story. As for the harem issue, is it really not like having a harem in Warhammer? The taste of Hammer is dark gothic aesthetics, extremely violent narratives and a sense of grand tragic fate. Does this have anything to do with not having a harem? We will get a sense of satisfaction from how many women of different looks the protagonist attracts, just as we will feel refreshed from the protagonist constantly defeating monsters and upgrading. I think this is essentially a reaction to the pursuit of things by most people in today's society. The pursuit of more beauties and the pursuit of more wealth and power are all manifestations of desire in online articles. Internet writing is what makes us happy, and what the author writes is fan fiction. Isn't fan fiction about writing different interesting stories in the original context? Anyway, I think the author's writing is good.

Inexplicably, I got on someone else's boat. I only wrote 300,000 words of the book. The protagonist is a chicken who wants to win a shot and inherit something so that I can get the first pot of gold. Classic outfit b. Classic accident. Classic throws away one's own misfortune. Millions of words of power start a small team adventure to pick up sesame seeds.

I feel that the author is using the idea of ​​​​a fantasy novel to write this novel. Most fantasy novel authors like to spend millions of words describing how the protagonist struggles to survive and defeat monsters and upgrades when the protagonist's strength is low. The writing is very detailed, but after the protagonist becomes stronger, the book is completed in hundreds of thousands of words. This is because strength is everything in fantasy novels, and he says it after he becomes stronger. But that's not the case in this novel. The protagonist is constantly promoted in the naval system. On the contrary, the higher the level, the more he can write. When the protagonist is a middle- and lower-level officer, his main ability is to command some small-scale troops. Later, when he is promoted to a senior officer, he is exposed to farming, fleet construction, tactical reform, political struggles, large fleet operations, and even the command of a large-scale war. Especially in the later period, major events come one after another. The role that a senior officer can play is completely different from that of a middle-level and lower-level officer. And the reason why I was personally attracted to this book is that it is a rare naval novel from the starting point, but the author wrote three to four million words, and I feel that most of it is about land warfare.

Miss Hood must have this temperament!

380W words l4 is not unreasonable Warhammer is written as a love story