Imperial Bloodline

Are you a woman? If you keep writing like this, the whole book will be about female lords.

I really enjoyed reading "The War God Lord" when I was in junior high and high school. Author, you should really stick to traditional Western fantasy or the Amber genre. This constant patchwork of elements, this forced attempt to follow trends, will likely result in nothing worthwhile in the end.

The fake marquis heir personally led a group of henchmen to seize potion ingredients. The real marquis heir, through his butler: "Young master, your potion is ready. Please bring it to me anytime you need."

The assessment is that he really enjoys playing dirty tricks. The book's outline is good, and the plot has elements that make you want to keep reading. But the character development is truly terrible. I've read the first seven chapters. There's practically no character development; the father and his two sons are all very flat.

I dropped the story when I saw the younger brother swear allegiance to that female character. While I think the younger brother's behavior was logically consistent with that era, the author initially wrote the story as two main characters, making the younger brother seem overly romantic. If he were a supporting character, that would be okay, but he's the protagonist, and I instantly lost interest.

Seeing the Golden City scene, I realized you're just copying Xuanjian verbatim. Xuanjian is full of conflicts and constantly embroiled in battles, and you're doing the same thing. Why can't you give it some development time? Suddenly, Arn dies without any transition. Cindy's character is also off; how can she have the nerve to demand the army return? Knowing it's impossible, you still write it.

I don't know what the author was trying to do. When I arranged for Yaka to be Annie's knight, I thought that Annie would try to become independent under Yaka's protection and gradually become better. They would grow together and eventually have the right to embrace each other. But instead, Annie got married. I was shocked and felt disgusted.

Actually, from the beginning to now, over 500 chapters in, the main character is actually a member of the Soderbell family. The true protagonist is like a powerful, overpowered old man in a cultivation novel. Personally, I think it's quite good. Whoever the author writes about, that's the protagonist to me, and I'll read their story.

The synopsis is ridiculously awkward; the "mass killing gods" plot made me feel like I was back in the old-school 90s fantasy novels.

To outsiders, wouldn't all the men in the Soderbelly family seem like gold diggers? Like they used women to amass their initial wealth and then used it to build their own power? I won't even mention Yam, who rose to power purely by marrying a lord's wife; Archis married a marquis's daughter; and our Liam even married the heir to a marquis's family. Isn't that all about living off women?!