Warhammer: The Raven Who Sees Through Illusions

The author has never claimed to be a professional fan of hacking (I've bought GW novels and painted chess pieces), but even so, I consider myself a casual fan. If you think there are problems with the plot, you can discuss them rationally. I will revise the parts that are acceptable, but if you provoke, insult, or nitpick, don't blame me for using my subspace power to ban you 🙂.

I think it's been pretty good so far, but the plot needs to be sped up a bit. If you keep writing like this, you might not even be able to finish the Great Expedition to HH in 1 million words. Keep it up, author!

The Raven King's return came too late, limiting what he could do, which is a pity. Also, will the Super Raven Guard be created, the truly pure and unpolluted kind? What will the protagonist's role be in the future? The Raven King's personal guard? Will there be any changes compared to the Terrans from Horus's group?

I watched "Lao A" on Douyin these past couple of days, and wow, it's weird! It's exactly the same as Warhammer! Warhammer even has a slightly embellished feel to it. Amazing! Even though Empires is so bad, it still has Inquisitors. There are no Inquisitors in reality. Incredible!

It's getting a bit boring. The protagonist still can't change anything, and in the latest chapters, the protagonist rarely appears; it's mostly just following the plot.

Duck's popularity is visibly lower than that of other loyal fans.

Later on, the feeling about the protagonist's character changed. It was clearly not the same as the character in the earlier part. It felt more like Doz from the Chronicles of Astartes next door. This kind of mischievous idea, this scumbag trait of causing trouble, was never shown in the protagonist's early stages.

How should the story proceed? Writing a story with Astartes as the protagonist instead of the Primarch makes the later stages incredibly difficult! Not leaving the Legion? So, will there always be a Primarch above them, and then the Primarch leaves? Given Astartes' status, it's destined to be difficult for them to gain high political power and status!

The protagonist's future development could follow a similar path to Mephisto, like the Raven King. Mephisto could use psionic energy to condense wings and transform into an angel on the battlefield. Similarly, after the Raven King fully accepts the Warp's origins and goes to the Warp, the protagonist could inherit the Primarch's abilities like Mephisto and become a shadow.

I just hope the author doesn't portray Chaos as too invincible later on. After all, according to the latest setting, the developers seem to be strengthening the Empire and weakening Chaos. It would be painful if they were proven wrong later. Besides, the current situation is that even an incubated being below the level of an Iron Man Great Demon is immune.